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You're a talented magician, and by killing ten thousand (or some other large number of) people (+ misc spells and the like), you can resurrect someone perfectly. When your son/lover/whatever dies, you grieve for a few years, but the grief slowly consumes you... and soon, you decide to resurrect them...

1) Does the story sound interesting so far? Any thoughts on the plot? Yesss, I love the story idea! I love how genuine their relationship and the story sound, and it's a unique spin to make the VN resemble a diary. I love how we'll be able to peek at their (now broken) relationship at its peaks, bo...

Hahaha okay! I'll PM you a response regarding Delirium/YA:) since we've already derailed so much from the vn xD Not complaining tho I've slowly been plotting while cramming for finals, and a lot has changed some things have been bettered even the names , including some things I initially assumed to...

I feel super awkward responding three separate times, so, um... I'll be even more pretentious and use headers? Some days, I wish I knew how to shut up. Also, (and this assumes/hopes people will continue to respond) I will be taking a four day hiatus. And if I don't, y'all have full permission to pu...

Clearly something's wrong with me since the point about spider lilies needing weapons instead of fangs to kill human victims was the most interesting one -cough- I'm really interested to see how you portray them! Ditto :lol: Thanks, haha. I haven't read many books/VNs that talk about different myth...

btw if I don't directly comment on something, it means I 100% agree & have nothing else to add. ------- will be responding to windchimes in a separate post for clarity because i'm wordy af It has a cliché base , which is something you can build from. Check your 'inherent' information, and double-che...

Thanks for your comment! :D :D :D I'll be cropping the quote so I can answer some of the questions/comments directly. ...they sound a lot like typical vampires to me. If they actually are basically vampires, it'd be a little...yeah, because the vampire thing is done so much it's kinda a cliche xD Th...

Ummm, this ended up being a much longer response than I originally intended. ;u; The more the merrier? Yay for misuse of proverbial sayings This sounds rather interesting. It's a cliché fantasy base with a very macabre undertone and will have to act on a mature world-view. Thank you for your comment...

I think it's worth trying out, but would this prologue be serving any other purpose? Although I struggle with this particular issue myself, I've heard prologues should be avoided unless you really absolutely need it. Instead of doing the prologue just to get your readers acclimated to the time skip...

But then you have to take into account baseline personalities and what becomes of them later on. A stubborn teen may not grow as much or as fast as an easily influenced teen. A "mature for his/her age" teen—say, who has been through long years of family turmoil—may grow differently than clueless on...

Your question made me realize that most of the VNs I've read to-date have all taken place over a very brief period of time in-game, with little to no time skips. I don't know if that's a common trend in the genre as a whole, but to answer your question, I believe that if the type of time progressio...

The idea of a 31 year old who has a job, income, a settled life and a bunch of social power dating an 18 year old? That is really squicky. This. I don't feel comfortable reading a VN about a teacher/student relationship, whether the MC is the teacher or the student. It's not something I personally ...

While planning out my VN, I realized that its time progression is inconsistent. I should probably explain what I mean by this. The first quarter of my VN happens within a fairly brief period of time, and any time progression is merely implied through your typical scene changes. However, once you get...

This seems so, so fun, and I'm really excited. The plot sounds perfect af. Any vn from you so far has been A++ and I have high expectations ok More importantly, I'm super excited to hear Horai will be a part of this VN! Although I definitely prefer her personality pre-epilogue, her presence will be ...