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by Dark Sentinel
Fri Sep 09, 2016 2:20 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Where Poppies Grow [Adventure][War Drama][Bildungsroman]
Replies: 34
Views: 5437

Re: Project Worn Soles [Adventure][War Drama][Bildungsroman]

Okay, answer time. First: this is your sprite style? No coloring, just lineart? Y'know, I mean, even if the answer is 'no', this is pretty fitting, I believe. Second: beta readers. I am interested, but I'm not a native English speaker and my comments (and perception) on whatever I read will be prett...
by Dark Sentinel
Mon Aug 08, 2016 1:15 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: MAKKINA - City of Machines [BxG] Dating sim of Mechas
Replies: 38
Views: 3765

Re: Visual Novel Dating sim without people/humans!! Just MEC

This looks promising. To make things even worse--- I mean, better, you could ask for some community-created designs, add a built-in encyclopedia, make sure the mechs - or androids, or battledrones, whatever you call them - have distinct designations, differing on the manufacturer and developer count...
by Dark Sentinel
Tue Jul 12, 2016 1:11 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Strawberry Jam [Horror]
Replies: 11
Views: 2643

Re: Strawberry Jam [Horror]

Pretty much "what" and I strongly prefer the bad end anyway. Bug report: "Ranka is staring intently at one in particular." By the game logic, this should be narrator's phrase, not Ranka's. Same for "She heads to the sink and starts washing the strawberries one by one." Same for "She grabs my head......
by Dark Sentinel
Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:13 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Where Poppies Grow [Adventure][War Drama][Bildungsroman]
Replies: 34
Views: 5437

Re: Project Worn Soles [Adventure][War Drama][Bildungsroman]

I. So far, what is your opinion of the game? This all looks very promising! I mean, I'm interested in the 20th century military history. Well, mostly WWII and mostly tanks of that era, but anyway! And looks, thing like 'Girls und Panzer' are of course fun to watch, but I want something more harsh, ...
by Dark Sentinel
Wed Jun 29, 2016 1:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Kill Your Refrigerator [VN][Horror][Comedy][Short]
Replies: 4
Views: 2061

Re: Kill Your Refrigerator [VN][Horror][Comedy][Short]

>Which ending did you reach first? - Kevorkian of the Kitchen. Well, I mean, why? That's most logical (like, if "logic" is any applicable here!) - kill you fridge in some efficient way. Retreat optionally. Though looking for fourth ending took some time. >Do you prefer this new sprite style or the o...
by Dark Sentinel
Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:20 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: (Free) Lucid9: Inciting Incident [Mystery][Thriller][BxG]
Replies: 12
Views: 6145

Re: (Free) Lucid9: Inciting Incident [Mystery][Thriller][BxG

Yes, okay, you made me read it. Great job done here, seriously. I'm not talking about design - it's awesome and been told before. As for characters: Akira ze Hurricane one love. Surely like Rui. Sort of can understand Liz. Sort of can stand Airi. Not going to forgive Misaki at all. Not yet, I guess....
by Dark Sentinel
Fri Apr 15, 2016 8:08 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: [redacted] Life (Horror/Comedy) (NaNoRenO 2016)
Replies: 26
Views: 8303

Re: [redacted] Life (Horror/Comedy) (NaNoRenO 2016)

1. Personally, not into this type of stories at all, but a good novel is always pleasure to read. Especially since it's NaNo. Oh well. 2. Tirle. That... person is awesome somehow. 3. The question was lost there, I suppose. 4. The artist's work is great. 5. I guess I managed to beat it, eh? 6. Only d...
by Dark Sentinel
Fri Apr 01, 2016 7:18 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: [April Fools] Welcoming our newest Administrator.
Replies: 63
Views: 4227

Re: Welcoming our newest Administrator.

Oh, me? Thanks. Now, well, suffer then. The reign of chaos is (almost) upon this forum. These times will be recorded in tomes of history as Chronicles of Dark Era. No remorse and no regrets, the unstoppable and useless violence is what awaits you. Surrender now and your death would be slow and prolo...
by Dark Sentinel
Thu Mar 31, 2016 6:47 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance) (BxG) (NaNo'16)+Let's play
Replies: 54
Views: 9969

Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) DOWNLOAD READ

Q1. Did you liked the plot? A1: Yes. It was sort of too sweet for me (I prefer more grim stuff), but I enjoyed it. Q2. What is the first ending that you got? A2: Bad end, predictable. Q3. Who is your favorite character? A3: Mina, obviously. Q4. Any critiques? A4: Not really. Q5. What name did you us...
by Dark Sentinel
Thu Mar 31, 2016 6:31 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Banality Man [VN][Comedy][Cartoon][Pop Culture][NaNo16]
Replies: 28
Views: 6794

Re: Banality Man [VN][Comedy][Cartoon][Pop Culture][NaNo16]

What. The. Hell.
In good sense, actually. Destroying capitalism is something absolutely invaluable, absolutely enjoyed it.
by Dark Sentinel
Thu Mar 31, 2016 12:14 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Five in Frills [NaNo 16][Friendship][Slice][Tentacles]
Replies: 1
Views: 1748

Five in Frills [NaNo 16][Friendship][Slice][Tentacles]

Ready for download at itch.io What's this all about? 'Five in Frills' is a story of a young girl named Minami Ishikawa working as a maid in an old mansion. Locals say that mansion is a rotten place and usually try to avoid it. Do they have reasons or that's just some sort of a local legend? Time wi...
by Dark Sentinel
Sun Mar 13, 2016 1:03 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Five in Frills [NaNoRenO '16][Friendship][Maids]
Replies: 14
Views: 1860

Re: Five in Frills [NaNoRenO '16][Friendship][Maids]

Zelan, a photo please? xD
I could use it as some kind of reference, since this room must really be Chaos, undescribeable and unspeakable.
(just kidding)

And yes, her messy room should be an exact reflection of her chaotic nature.
by Dark Sentinel
Sun Mar 13, 2016 10:55 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Five in Frills [NaNoRenO '16][Friendship][Maids]
Replies: 14
Views: 1860

Re: Five in Frills [NaNoRenO '16][Friendship][Maids]

Zelan and Lesleigh63, thanks!

And a test screenshot from development builds, just to see how it looks together. Oh well.
by Dark Sentinel
Mon Mar 07, 2016 6:30 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: That was easy!! [NSFW] [BxG/B] [NaNoRenO2016] [Canceled]
Replies: 62
Views: 6740

Re: That was easy!! [NSFW] [BxG/B] [NaNoRenO2016]

You decided not to wait for anyone and just start your own project? xD
Good luck.
by Dark Sentinel
Mon Mar 07, 2016 9:20 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Five in Frills [NaNoRenO '16][Friendship][Maids]
Replies: 14
Views: 1860

Re: Five in Frills [NaNoRenO '16][Friendship][Maids]

Lodratio and MimirollCookie - thanks for support Hi.In.Ni , well, the amount of work I must handle is less than that. VN is planned to be pretty linear, with some weird branching, but still linear, probably even single-ending. And four characters - I'm done with them! Hi.In.Ni and Zelan , speaking ...