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All of the text from the VN Demo cut-and-paste into the PM (so I can stick it into an Open Office file, rather than have to type it from the demo). oh so you want me to open the scene file with notepad or something so you can see all texts at once, am i correct? If that's the case sure but you will...

I'll look through it and provide notes if that is something that you are interested in. I've been working as a full-time Freelance Writer/Editor for a while so I think I can provide you with useful notes. Send me a PM with the text and your e-mail and I'll send it back with track changes. ...also u...

The game freezes for me after only a few text boxes - right after the main character says that we're at his/her stop. There were some sentences that were awkward and/or grammatically incorrect. I would suggest finding a proofreader. Thanks for taking a look. After the main character reaches his sto...

Figured it out.
Link to the demo here. Please let me know what you guys think about it. It's short but sweet.


https://silentmonkey6.itch.io/silence-in-daylight

I am currently working on my first visual novel and created a little demo that I would like to get some feedback on. Whether it be good tips/suggestions or some valuable criticism I will be glad to receive on this post as long as it relates to said project.The main focus on this particular upload wa...

I see. Then that would mean people would have to download it to see it? A bit inconvenient. Making a link where it just opens up in the browser or something would be nice. You can upload it to newgrounds. You'll have to register there in order to upload, but folks will leave comments and post ratin...

I see. Then that would mean people would have to download it to see it?
A bit inconvenient. Making a link where it just opens up in the browser or something would be nice.

indoneko wrote:If you're asking for a place to upload a demo version, you could try public file server like google drive or mediafire (you need to register first before you can upload the files)

Thank you.
Where would be the best place to upload the game?

Hello all. I created a very short visual novel scene that I would like to share and get some constructive criticism on. It was made with TyranoBuilder and i'm having a bit of trouble on how and where I can upload it for people to see and give some feedback. I saw the export game option that gave me ...