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by nekobara
Sun Dec 11, 2016 6:52 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Comedy] [GxB,BxB, NBxB?]DEMO!!!
Replies: 31
Views: 4727

Re: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Parody] [Romance] honest critique p

Ooh. I like the rich boy, too! The blonde hair is a nice touch. He's right, it makes him look much more princely. Haha.
by nekobara
Sun Dec 11, 2016 2:04 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Comedy] [GxB,BxB, NBxB?]DEMO!!!
Replies: 31
Views: 4727

Re: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Parody] [Romance] honest critique p

Maybe it's just because I'm kind of into the story-it seems interesting and humorous, so I'm all for it-but I don't really have a problem with it being written in the second person point of view. It honestly doesn't bother me at all. I think it should be fine. And honestly, sometimes you have to wri...
by nekobara
Sun Dec 11, 2016 1:27 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?
Replies: 15
Views: 1229

Re: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person

When I'm writing, I tend to use the first person point of view quite a bit. If I'm being honest, I probably use first person almost one-hundred percent of the time, actually. Very rarely do I use third person point of view, and when I do, I'm usually switching speakers. Most of the time that's when ...
by nekobara
Wed Dec 07, 2016 3:49 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What immerses you into a game?
Replies: 15
Views: 1454

Re: What immerses you into a game?

Characters that are more than just paint on cardboard. I don't want paper bags with names and faces on them that a kid in kindergarten sticks on their hands and waves around for a puppet show. No, wait. I take that back. Maybe I do want that. If that kid has enough imagination, then I'd choose that ...
by nekobara
Fri Dec 02, 2016 4:49 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Devil of Saint Mechtilde (Horror, Otome, GxB, GxG)
Replies: 14
Views: 1850

Re: The Devil of Saint Mechtilde (Horror, Otome, GxB, GxG)

-I'm glad Leo caught your eye! The more I think and write out this idea, the more I think she'll definitely be the canon route. -Klaus is totally an ass. How much he orders his girls around or they act on their own, is still kind of up in the air but he will personally go out of his way to make Jas...
by nekobara
Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:05 am
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: Illustrator/ character designer for hire!
Replies: 1
Views: 654

Re: Illustrator/ character designer for hire!

Your drawings are all so lovely. You're quite an incredible and talented artist. I just thought that I'd let you know. :)
by nekobara
Wed Nov 30, 2016 12:49 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Keep it real, or make it out-of-this-world weird?
Replies: 7
Views: 858

Re: Keep it real, or make it out-of-this-world weird?

@Kuiper Thank you for your input! You have given me a lot to think about. I think I shall have to read what you have written a few times over. You really went into detail in your answer, and I thank you greatly for that. I'm sure the information you have provided will be useful in helping me to impr...
by nekobara
Tue Nov 29, 2016 12:32 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Keep it real, or make it out-of-this-world weird?
Replies: 7
Views: 858

Keep it real, or make it out-of-this-world weird?

I'm just curious...as writers, do you tend to make your writing as realistic as possible in an attempt to make your readers feel as if your story world were reality? Or do you like to go all out, shoot for the stars, and be as ridiculous, outrageous, and over-the-top as possible to make your reader ...
by nekobara
Sun Nov 27, 2016 6:53 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Devil of Saint Mechtilde (Horror, Otome, GxB, GxG)
Replies: 14
Views: 1850

Re: The Devil of Saint Mechtilde (Horror, Otome, GxB, GxG)

-Is it interesting?/Does it sound fun? It sounds incredibly interesting. I like your idea a lot and am pretty sure that this game would be one that I would be very interested in playing. In fact, after downloading, I'd probably put your game as a top priority, meaning I'd play it before any other ga...
by nekobara
Fri Nov 25, 2016 3:37 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Floret Bond [Fantasy][Poly GxB/B][Free✿]Demo!
Replies: 21
Views: 4151

Re: Floret Bond [Fantasy][Poly GxB/B][Crafting]Free✿

• Which of the three characters do you like most so far? You mean I have to pick just one? But Krishin is...super sexy. And Peony is...so adorable! And Gata is...the mysterious silent type. I really like that... But gah! I guess I'm going to have to go with the sexy centaur. When in doubt, always go...
by nekobara
Wed Nov 23, 2016 10:13 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 161493

Re: Ideas Dump

@gekiganwing The protagonist's mother isn't fond of the grandmother, as Gladys White-that was going to be the witch's name-is her nasty mother-in-law who has never liked her or her daughter. However, though Gladys does whatever she can to disparage and belittle the protagonist's mother out of petty ...
by nekobara
Wed Nov 23, 2016 4:59 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 161493

Re: Ideas Dump

Well, this is something that I haven't thought about for a long while...my poor idea drowned in the pond of broken dreams in my forgetful mind... Perhaps it can't be completely salvaged, but at least I'm bringing it into the light, right? :) So here it is: You're staying with your evil grandmother-w...
by nekobara
Tue Nov 22, 2016 10:59 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: 【dark-fairytale】 My Eternal Rose : looking for artists!
Replies: 8
Views: 1068

Re: 【dark-fairytale】 My Eternal Rose : looking for artists!

That is quite a lovely logo. It has gorgeous coloring and beautiful roses. I think the story you create should be quite interesting. This is definitely a game that I would play. And though I'm always thinking that vampires are getting to be a bit cliche, if done right, they are characters I get atta...
by nekobara
Tue Nov 22, 2016 1:03 am
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Closed
Replies: 5
Views: 849

Re: True Love ~Entwined Hearts~ searching for team members

Hello. I'd just like to say that I think your idea is quite incredible and creative. This would definitely be a game I would enjoy playing. I really wish I could help. :( Also, as for Maru's birth date, I think you meant to say July. I wish there were a month that was called Jelly. :) Oh, and I don'...
by nekobara
Mon Nov 21, 2016 8:10 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Fool's Helper [GxB][Slice-of-Life][RomCom]
Replies: 17
Views: 6786

Re: Fool's Helper [GxB][Slice-of-Life][RomCom]

It was lighthearted, fun, and it made me laugh-and also smile quite a bit since it was so wonderful and cute! So I hope you can consider your goal achieved! It was a truly great game, and all the characters are just terrific! I already told you how much I adored Brian, and Lee is something quite spe...