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In the original picture, also... The breasts are "front-view", but her shoulder is obviously "back". Thus, her (left-drawn), breast should be more of a side-angle view, not a frontal view. (To signify that her collar-bone has pulled it back, up and to the side. (For true "realism", both breasts on ...

I just want to say that this looks amazing. I can't wait to see how this plays out.

The art is super cute, too. I love yandere-types.

EDIT - Also, do you think her head is too big even stylistically? I was told her head looks a bit big and when I scale it down a hair, it looks just fine but I think I prefer the size it is now stylistically. I've seen several animes where the character's heads are as big as the one in your picture...

Her right hand pose doesn't feel natural... at least not with her torso fully facing forward like that. The solution? Either change her hand position (rotate her upper arm joint or move her right elbow a little further from her body), OR make her upper torso twisted to the right if you want to "hid...

Hey! So, I know everyone is busy participating in NaNo right now, but I was wondering if anyone had the time, if someone could please help me by possibly doing a quick redline over her posing issues, particularly in her hands and shoulders. I'd appreciate it forever! http://i.imgur.com/esWHOX9.png I...

Hello, I'm a sprite artist looking to join a project. I prefer BxB or GXG. Click here for some of my work. I am pretty much only looking to do 2 - 4 sprites, but I'm flexible. I'm down for however many expressions. I can also do chibis and general character designs and I can make clean (albeit not ...

The art and color scheme in this look stunning! Also, the music is super nice, too. After reading over this (and checking out your website), I have a few questions: >> Will this be commercial? >> Will there only be one love interest (the girl in the artwork) or multiple love interests? I'm assuming ...

I'd love to help out.

Hey everybody! Due to personal issues I had to stop working on Plain for a few months, but we're back! Plain will be finished as soon as we can get it done, and I'm currently another five hundred words into the writing! Sorry for the long wait, hopefully it'll be worth it! I just wanted to say this...

NOT for use in hentai (18+ stuff), BxB, GxG , or "implied" sex scenes. I'm not sure if you mean not for use in all 18+ stuff (including BxB and GxG) or if you mean no 18+ stuff plus G-rated BxB and GxG. If it's the first one, that's understandable but should be clarified, it it's the latter than we...

That's cool and all but I'm definitely put off by the fact that these are grouped together. NOT for use in hentai (18+ stuff), BxB, GxG , or "implied" sex scenes. I'm not sure if you mean not for use in all 18+ stuff (including BxB and GxG) or if you mean no 18+ stuff plus G-rated BxB and GxG. If it...

I really appreciate the feedback and there's a lot of good information. I checked out Twine and I wasn't too comfortable with how they save their documents, even in the downloaded version they rely on the browser to store the story, which could get deleted by clearing cookies. I have a strong outli...

First off, thanks for all your advice. I wrote this last night before bed and had classes non-stop today so I'm only now getting a chance to respond. It's long, sorry about that. Also, although the whole Mary and Jane story was a spur-of-the-moment example I came up with, I'm kind of getting attache...

I'm surprised Togainu no Chi hasn't been mentioned at all in this thread. I loved how dark and gritty it was and how it catered unapologetically to a very specific niche. I tried playing a few other Nitro+ games, but some of the content in their other games is a bit too much for me. I fell in love w...

For instance, when you need to get from point A to point B but you feel like point B is too... unbelievably convenient. -- Example: Jane disappeared seven years ago leaving behind her younger sister, Mary. Unbeknownst to Mary, Jane had been involved with a major crime ring prior to her disappearance...