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by Jain
Thu Feb 16, 2017 8:49 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How do you avoid "convenient" or "coincidental" plotting?
Replies: 17
Views: 1964

Re: How do you avoid "convenient" or "coincidental" plotting

Her sister's letter doesn't have to be an explicit "RUN FAR AWAY FROM THIS RING", and probably shouldn't be. Instead, Jane could have been doing research on the ring (and have come to some unsettling conclusions), or finds suspicious communications between Jane and members of the ring. If still livi...
by Jain
Sat Jan 28, 2017 11:39 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Meaningful choices?
Replies: 15
Views: 2212

Re: Meaningful choices?

For my part, I feel as though a choice can still be meaningful, even if it doesn't have a significant change of events. Bioware games are a lot like that. Except for some big choices, like save the last member of a race or destroy them, most of the options the player character is presented with is j...
by Jain
Tue Jan 24, 2017 1:24 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Currently unamed project - a personal story
Replies: 1
Views: 422

Re: Currently unamed project - a personal story

I would be interested in this kind of story. You seem to have a unique perspective and that will allow you to give readers/players the kind of story they might not have encountered before. One thing I would warn about would be getting too close to the story. With a deeply personal story there can't ...
by Jain
Mon Jan 23, 2017 10:53 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Mell's Sketch Thread [Requests: CLOSED]
Replies: 81
Views: 7190

Re: Mell's Sketch Thread [Requests: OPEN]

Heya, still open for sketches? I love what you can put to paper!
by Jain
Sun Jan 15, 2017 12:46 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Being evident or as silent as a ninja
Replies: 10
Views: 1188

Re: Being evident or as silent as a ninja

The way I look at it, it's better to put what's natural for the characters before the need to explain things to the audience.
by Jain
Sun Jan 15, 2017 11:53 am
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: I produce soundtrack and do commissions on custom songs!
Replies: 1
Views: 415

Re: I produce soundtrack and do commissions on custom songs!

Ohh, very nice work! I'm very interested.

For something custom, what sort of information would you need? Like musical references, things like that?
by Jain
Sat Jan 14, 2017 5:34 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Lady's Choice- [Regency Romance- GxB]-Amesbury released!
Replies: 93
Views: 25912

Re: The Lady's Choice- [Regency Romance- GxB]-Amesbury relea

Hey! :) I managed to do a walkthrough for Amesbury, I hope that helps?- http://seraphinitegames.tumblr.com/post/154699497333/the-ladys-choice-endings-walkthrough-amesbury If not, then let me know and I will try and see if I can help you through! That ending- wow, the drama in that would definitely ...
by Jain
Sat Jan 14, 2017 2:16 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Lady's Choice- [Regency Romance- GxB]-Amesbury released!
Replies: 93
Views: 25912

Re: The Lady's Choice- [Regency Romance- GxB]-Amesbury relea

Harliqueen, Any tips for someone trying to get the True Amesbury Love ending? I managed to get all the endings for Stanton and Blake and maybe I've been a bit distracted with other things but I haven't been able to get it with Amesbury yet. While I was puzzling over it, I started daydreaming of an i...
by Jain
Sat Jan 14, 2017 1:57 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: VN's Without Narration
Replies: 22
Views: 1940

Re: VN's Without Narration

I don't have much to add that RotGtIE didn't say better than I could have managed, but this topic has been haunting me for days and I just could not leave it alone. There are places in a VN that don't need narration/description. Character sprites, for instance. They are usually visible on the screen...
by Jain
Thu Jan 12, 2017 8:07 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VN with dogs as protagonists, trouble finding style
Replies: 8
Views: 888

Re: VN with dogs as protagonists, trouble finding style

-- Do you mean inugami as in the japanese spirit dog monster thingy or is there a game? never heard of it....

It was this manga about dogs. Got really dark, really quickly.
by Jain
Tue Jan 10, 2017 11:38 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VN with dogs as protagonists, trouble finding style
Replies: 8
Views: 888

Re: VN with dogs as protagonists, trouble finding style

I love stories featuring animals! From what you've written so far, it reminds me a bit of Inugami, a little of Tokyo Jungle and of course, Watership Down. I'd definitely play a VN like this! Have you checked Deviant Art for artists? I'm sure you'll find artists who focus on animals, there. Good luck!
by Jain
Tue Jan 10, 2017 8:08 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5157
Views: 1173787

Re: Guestbook

Name: Artalija Location: New York, US Website: N/A Long-time lurker, been a fan of VN's for a while now, and decided to work on my own. 11k words in so far. This forum has been a wonderful resource of tips and discussions! A Few of My Faves: Cupid, Aloners, The Royal Trap, Seven Kingdoms: The Prince...
by Jain
Sun Jan 08, 2017 8:36 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Lady's Choice- [Regency Romance- GxB]-Amesbury released!
Replies: 93
Views: 25912

Re: The Lady's Choice- [Regency Romance- GxB]-Amesbury relea

So pleased to find the Amesbury path has been released! I must admit also to catching some feels for Montfort. If only he and MC had met on that first day! For a while I felt like there might be a path there - the drama would have been interesting, for sure. I know you said there's not going to be a...