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by arisan
Mon Mar 27, 2017 2:40 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing With Multiple Main Characters
Replies: 6
Views: 960

Re: Writing With Multiple Main Characters

Depends on what you're hoping to achieve with it. Why is it necessary that your readers have access to the kind of unlimited surveillance an omniscient POV affords them? (It would help to know how many characters you're working with, whether they're in conflict with each other or not, and how closel...
by arisan
Thu Mar 16, 2017 8:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Himitsu no Tegami[Slice of Life][Romance][Dating sim]
Replies: 20
Views: 4179

Re: Himitsu no Tegami[Slice of Life][Romance][Dating sim]

Adding to the comments on the letters: are they delivered by post? Deposited in a locker, bag, or similar space? I don't think the premise is outlandish or anachronistic simply because of longhand letters, but Each letter made him feel like he was in their shoes and all the emotions within the lette...
by arisan
Tue Mar 14, 2017 9:29 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Golden Hour [GxB][Romance][School Life][Mobile]: KICKSTARTER LAST 3 DAYS!
Replies: 53
Views: 13474

Re: Golden Hour [GxB] [Romance] [High School] [Mobile]

:arrow: 1. Does the premise pique your interest? Is the setting/setup fresh and engaging as an iteration of the high school romance genre? Not really. I'm not so sure about HS romances these days now that I'm halfway through college. That said, reading about how it'll be set in Manila definitely pi...
by arisan
Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:01 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Ways to make a "slice of life" story interesting?
Replies: 13
Views: 2773

Re: Ways to make a "slice of life" story interesting?

One way you might think of this is removing the conflict from that overarching plot and locating it somewhere else. In a discussion I had sometime back about "conflict-less" stories, what initially appeared as an absence of conflict was usually a twist on it: either the conflict was scaled down enou...
by arisan
Mon Mar 13, 2017 1:48 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5441
Views: 1456530

Re: Guestbook

Halloa! Arisan here (or just Ari, really), from the Philippines. I'm currently working with a few friends of mine on our first VN project, "Golden Hour." I'm in charge of writing and coordinating the narrative design, though most of my creative endeavors are in short fiction (the rest being unfinish...