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- Mon Mar 27, 2017 2:40 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Writing With Multiple Main Characters
- Replies: 6
- Views: 960
Re: Writing With Multiple Main Characters
Depends on what you're hoping to achieve with it. Why is it necessary that your readers have access to the kind of unlimited surveillance an omniscient POV affords them? (It would help to know how many characters you're working with, whether they're in conflict with each other or not, and how closel...
- Thu Mar 16, 2017 8:32 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Himitsu no Tegami[Slice of Life][Romance][Dating sim]
- Replies: 20
- Views: 4179
Re: Himitsu no Tegami[Slice of Life][Romance][Dating sim]
Adding to the comments on the letters: are they delivered by post? Deposited in a locker, bag, or similar space? I don't think the premise is outlandish or anachronistic simply because of longhand letters, but Each letter made him feel like he was in their shoes and all the emotions within the lette...
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 9:29 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Golden Hour [GxB][Romance][School Life][Mobile]: KICKSTARTER LAST 3 DAYS!
- Replies: 53
- Views: 13474
Re: Golden Hour [GxB] [Romance] [High School] [Mobile]
:arrow: 1. Does the premise pique your interest? Is the setting/setup fresh and engaging as an iteration of the high school romance genre? Not really. I'm not so sure about HS romances these days now that I'm halfway through college. That said, reading about how it'll be set in Manila definitely pi...
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:01 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Ways to make a "slice of life" story interesting?
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2773
Re: Ways to make a "slice of life" story interesting?
One way you might think of this is removing the conflict from that overarching plot and locating it somewhere else. In a discussion I had sometime back about "conflict-less" stories, what initially appeared as an absence of conflict was usually a twist on it: either the conflict was scaled down enou...
Re: Guestbook
Halloa! Arisan here (or just Ari, really), from the Philippines. I'm currently working with a few friends of mine on our first VN project, "Golden Hour." I'm in charge of writing and coordinating the narrative design, though most of my creative endeavors are in short fiction (the rest being unfinish...