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by Lunarisse*
Fri Jun 09, 2017 1:09 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pls!
Replies: 18
Views: 1888

Re: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pl

I'm not an artist. I just like art. So I've attached some youtube videos on the topic. I don't know how useful these tips will be [you're a much better artist than I'll ever be :lol: ] ...but I hope they get you started at least. Top tips... hmmm, keep them short . I usually do a 1-2 min/per pose b...
by Lunarisse*
Thu Jun 08, 2017 11:44 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pls!
Replies: 18
Views: 1888

Re: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pl

It would be nice if you drew any of these characters http://yonyonyon.deviantart.com/art/Desolate-Souls-Character-roster-654520266 I'll give the info about their personalities if/after your choosing. As for the critique aside from mentioned stiffness, your sprite's head is way too big for his body....
by Lunarisse*
Thu Jun 08, 2017 11:41 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pls!
Replies: 18
Views: 1888

Re: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pl

If you would, I'd like to what you can do with a character from our upcoming VN Seven Districts of Sin. This is Anzu. A succubus and Governess of the Sixth district of Hell - Wrath. Her personality is unfriendly, catty, stuck up (think Evil Queen) Critique: There is a stiffness in your pose. I am a...
by Lunarisse*
Thu Jun 08, 2017 11:38 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pls!
Replies: 18
Views: 1888

Re: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pl

If you're willing, would you draw this guy? Either version is fine! ref1_by_chance_lla-dapbmd8.jpg Your art is very impressive! To push it to the next level, might I recommend pushing the colours a bit more? Try using darker, more saturated reds for the shadows of the skin and upping the general co...
by Lunarisse*
Mon Jun 05, 2017 5:38 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pls!
Replies: 18
Views: 1888

[Lunarisse] Help me build my portfolio! Critiques too pls!

Hi hi! This is Luna and welcome to my thread! ;A;/ I'm a new member in both dA and here so I'm not upadted really...I actually just heard these sites a short while ago. Anyways, here are my first artworks! Critiques are greatly appreciated. :> This is Arden Lutherford, my first oc ever since I'm in ...