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by PMscenarios
Sun Oct 08, 2017 8:47 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Having trouble with world building
Replies: 13
Views: 1283

Re: Having trouble with world building

TheJerminator15 isn't asking you how your story is plotted, they're asking how these elements are explained in the narrative. You already know the plot and what -needs- to happen, now you need to justify your choices and the narrative of your story. The history of the world is the same as our world....
by PMscenarios
Sat Oct 07, 2017 9:25 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Having trouble with world building
Replies: 13
Views: 1283

Re: Having trouble with world building

I was actually just working on a draft about world building yesterday, so here's sort of an abridged version for your world. One of the most important things you can do is establish the world your story exists in - the rules and lay of the land that have molded and influenced the slice of the world ...
by PMscenarios
Thu Oct 05, 2017 12:03 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: From Fournevale [NBxG/NB/B, Fantasy]
Replies: 2
Views: 853

Re: From Fournevale [NBxG/NB/B, Fantasy]

Does this actually seem interesting, or am I just talking out of my ass? I really like the idea of following a role-playing game and getting to know the players (and hearing their comments ooc?) throughout the story. Really like this pitch! Which character seems the coolest to you? I quite like the...
by PMscenarios
Thu Oct 05, 2017 11:53 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chevalier ♦♦♦ [BxB] [Fantasy, drama]
Replies: 30
Views: 5417

Re: Virtue Conflict ♦♦♦ [BxB] [Fantasy, drama]

I'm not a big fan of high fantasy (as in about princes, nobles etc), but I'm interested in the pitch, especially the world, and I like the art. I'm also in the group that prefers more masculine protags, or you could say I prefer playing the aggressor over the submitter, but I've never let the main c...
by PMscenarios
Thu Sep 28, 2017 6:05 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: That Night [GxG][Horror => RomCom]
Replies: 15
Views: 2381

Re: That Night [GxG][YuriJam][Horror => RomCom]

Aaw, this sound adorable, and I really like the design of the characters!

Very inventive twist on things :)
by PMscenarios
Tue Sep 26, 2017 11:11 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing Buddies!
Replies: 15
Views: 1996

Re: Writing Buddies!

I -love- bouncing ideas and listening to ppl's story ideas, so I sent you a friend's request, and wouldn't mind making other such friends. I have a tendency to make suggestions, bc my brain likes to take inspiration and run with it, but I never expect the other person to actually take my suggestions...
by PMscenarios
Tue Sep 19, 2017 1:40 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Yearning: A Gay Story [BxB][School/Slice of Life/Coming Out][16+]
Replies: 67
Views: 18933

Re: Yet Another Gay Dating Sim [BxB][Slice of Life][18+]

Wow, I saw this earlier tonight, and thought I'd download it to give it a try, and ended up spending the rest of the night playing. Finally dragged myself away, and just wanted to leave a few first impression thoughts. I have sooo much feedback I wanna give later! ;) I love CooT, it would probably r...
by PMscenarios
Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:35 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Synergia [GxG] [Cyberpunk] [Romance] [Kickstarter]
Replies: 40
Views: 7755

Re: Synergia [GxG] [Cyberpunk] [Romance]

Really good trailer. I especially liked the car shot with the red light illuminating the interior. Amazing! That shot took quite some work to do so I'm happy you like it! Here you have a link to the looped animation, and with the correct timing. I had to adjust the speed of the animation for the tr...
by PMscenarios
Tue Sep 12, 2017 9:02 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Font talk/reccomendation request
Replies: 15
Views: 1635

Re: Font talk/reccomendation request

When I look for fonts I tend to write a sample sentence into Google fonts and scroll through the list looking for what I want, often getting a better idea of what that is while looking. Thinking about an intercom voice I immediately thought of something sans-serif with heavy spacing to make it feel ...
by PMscenarios
Sat Sep 02, 2017 12:34 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: K9-11 Pet Emergency! Ep 1 [Comedy] [Free] [Demo] [Cute]
Replies: 22
Views: 2970

Re: K9-11 Pet Emergency! Ep 1 [Comedy] [Free] [Demo] [Cute]

I finally got around to playing this, and I ended up absolutely loving it! Everything is bright and cheerful, but most of all, Rex's emoting is soo good. It made him immediately endearing to me - especially his pouty face and his aggressive/engaged face. Have to confess though, I just solved every s...
by PMscenarios
Tue Aug 22, 2017 4:55 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Synergia [GxG] [Cyberpunk] [Romance] [Kickstarter]
Replies: 40
Views: 7755

Re: Synergia [GxG] [Cyberpunk] [Romance]

Really good trailer. I especially liked the car shot with the red light illuminating the interior. Amazing!
by PMscenarios
Mon Aug 14, 2017 11:13 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: a Fairy special night [BxB][slice of life|romance|supernatural][mature]
Replies: 3
Views: 1275

Re: a Fairy special night [BxB][slice of life|romance|supernatural][mature]

Are you interested in knowing what happens next? Yep. Though I'm more interested in seeing more of main guy movie talk. I really like main dude, his dialogue was great! I'm very happy to hear that. I was very unsure how his geeking out would read, so it's great to hear it worked. And he'll definite...
by PMscenarios
Sat Aug 12, 2017 12:43 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: K9-11 Pet Emergency! Ep 1 [Comedy] [Free] [Demo] [Cute]
Replies: 22
Views: 2970

Re: K9-11 Pet Emergency! Ep 1 [Comedy] [Free] [Demo] [Cute]

I just downloaded the demo through the app, so it seems to be working fine now.
by PMscenarios
Sat Aug 12, 2017 12:35 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Ego Holic [BL 18+] [Supernatural/Dark] [DEMO]
Replies: 47
Views: 11124

Re: Ego Holic [BL 18+] [Supernatural/Dark] [DEMO]

Just finished a play-through of the demo tonight: (I'd like to apologize in advance - I have no ability to be concise, so when I do give feedback it has a tendency to become an essay, especially when I find something engaging/interesting. I have a lot of thoughts/critiques - because I care.) Lets do...
by PMscenarios
Fri Aug 11, 2017 8:21 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: K9-11 Pet Emergency! Ep 1 [Comedy] [Free] [Demo] [Cute]
Replies: 22
Views: 2970

Re: K9-11 Pet Emergency! Ep 1 [Comedy] [Free] [Demo] [Cute]

Is the art okay? Is flat coloring okay for this or should I shade this? (I actually never really drew dogs, cats that often....I'm actually usually drawing people.) Is the art amazing? No, but it seems fine and even charming for the concept. I guess the cover image/main menu pic is the weakest for ...