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by DirkB
Sun Jun 03, 2018 10:51 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Thorn Prince[regency][BxG]
Replies: 35
Views: 9082

Re: The Thorn Prince[regency][BxG]

I am not so much into romance focused novels, but I really like the idea of this one, because of the link with far reaching consequences for the world depending on which princess is chosen and their very distinct personalities.
by DirkB
Thu May 31, 2018 4:25 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: 7th Goddess [pre-rendered][3D][free][mystery][fantasy/modern][DEMO]
Replies: 12
Views: 2745

Re: 7th Goddess [pre-rendered][3D][free][mystery][fantasy/modern][DEMO]

I have a demo now on https://imavera.itch.io/7th-goddess It is +6800 words and still covers the early stage of the story, leading up to a big plot twist at the end of the demo. I will regularly update the demo with more content. There will be many more characters added to the story. I thought about ...
by DirkB
Sun May 27, 2018 1:12 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Black Hand [Kinetic][Drama][Gothic][DEMO]
Replies: 9
Views: 4133

Re: The Black Hand [Kinetic][Drama][Gothic]

1) My favorite character so far would be Lisa. Small girl, big wolf. I love such oppositions. 2) I am very much interested by the setting. It's a bit like World of Darkness I think?? 3) What I would expect is complicated characters with some inner tensions, powerful and vulnerable at the same time. ...
by DirkB
Sat May 26, 2018 4:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 13
Views: 4468

Re: Picture Perfect Romance [GxB] [Friendship, Romance, Comedy, FREE]

With any art assets that are free resource or purchasable by anyone, the chance of someone else using it is high. However, I personally don't find it to be a huge issue unless what you are aiming for is complete originality: in that case, it would probably be in your best interest to commission a B...
by DirkB
Sat May 26, 2018 5:30 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 13
Views: 4468

Re: Picture Perfect Romance [GxB] [Friendship, Romance, Comedy, FREE]

Playing around with this free resource by Uncle Mugen ! https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/401889484628688903/448618162049515551/unknown.png?width=741&height=373 That is a great picture and I just checked out Uncle Mugen's page now for the first time. It's full of incredible art. But what I a...
by DirkB
Fri May 25, 2018 4:43 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Placeholder [Psychological Thriller][Metanarrative][Horror?][Free]
Replies: 4
Views: 2497

Re: Placeholder [Psychological Thriller][Metanarrative][Horror?][Free]

Really cool, original story idea! It also remains fascinating until the end.
by DirkB
Thu May 24, 2018 4:53 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Project Pastorate [Dark adventure in the land of crime and sin] DEMO INCLUDED
Replies: 16
Views: 3648

Re: Project Pastorate [Dark adventure in the land of crime and sin] DEMO INCLUDED

I played through the demo. The intro music is awesome. It really motivated me to play the story. The intro screens with animated drawings look very cool. The animation in the background environments is very well done and gives a bit more real life experience, which is great. For the mini game I woul...
by DirkB
Wed May 23, 2018 1:50 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The sky was blue. | [Mental Illness | FREE | Short]
Replies: 8
Views: 3055

Re: The sky was blue. | [Mental Illness | FREE | Short]

Nice atmospheric music.

Maybe instead of letting the reader click for every phrase, just let them appear automatically after one or two(?) seconds.
by DirkB
Tue May 22, 2018 11:11 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Hunted [Animals][Fantasy][Horror][Free]
Replies: 9
Views: 1393

Re: Hunted [Animals][Fantasy][Horror][Free]

The art looks fantastic to me. I also don't like filler text that doesn't progress the story or doesn't give important/interesting thoughts about what's going on.

I am always interested in novels that are different from the usual romance type.

(I use Ren'py so I can't help you with the VN maker.)
by DirkB
Sun May 20, 2018 11:41 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chromatose [FULL DEMO] [RPG][VN][Horror][Romance]
Replies: 31
Views: 6039

Re: Chromatose [RPG][VN][Horror][Romance]

This looks very unique and interesting. Good luck! I am really curious about how this is going to be.
by DirkB
Sat May 19, 2018 5:12 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Cardians: Rural, Kinetic Novel [Horror, mystery]
Replies: 4
Views: 1571

Re: Cardians: Rural, Kinetic Novel [Horror, mystery]

Good luck! I love the whole idea of the world of darkness setting and especially the hunter path. I once thought about doing role playing in that setting, but I didn't get past the stage of reading up on the game system. I will surely keep an eye on your story.
by DirkB
Wed May 16, 2018 12:37 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Post-mortem of MMM: Murder Most Misfortunate, a short murder mystery VN
Replies: 15
Views: 5131

Re: Post-mortem of MMM: Murder Most Misfortunate, a short murder mystery VN

This was a very interesting read. Although I am not going to try to make money with my novel yet, I am interested most of all in knowing which tools are most useful for promoting a visual novel. I haven't been searching a lot yet for this, so I was just wondering if someone knows about some online g...
by DirkB
Wed May 16, 2018 9:35 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Mall Rats vs Terrorists vs Zombies [NaNo18] [GxB] [Horror-ish]
Replies: 5
Views: 2397

Re: Mall Rats vs Terrorists vs Zombies [NaNo18] [GxB] [Horror-ish]

Just wanted to say that I really like the idea. Combining zombie survival with romantic goals sounds really unique and interesting.
by DirkB
Tue May 15, 2018 8:00 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Soulless Creatures [Horror][Mystery][Romance][Vampires][Kinetic Novel]
Replies: 8
Views: 2172

Re: Soulless Creatures [Horror][Mystery][Romance][Vampires][Kinetic Novel]

I use DAZ and yes it allows for customizing lights. Often scenes you buy in the store have built in lighting and then I use those. Otherwise I use a set of custom lights, called ghost lights, that are easy to fit. When I get a nice, clear image, then that's enough for me. I don't have time to do com...
by DirkB
Mon May 14, 2018 6:07 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Soulless Creatures [Horror][Mystery][Romance][Vampires][Kinetic Novel]
Replies: 8
Views: 2172

Re: Soulless Creatures [Horror][Mystery][Romance][Vampires][Kinetic Novel]

I quite liked that video. It's nice to see that you add action like that. I think it works well. I am also making a novel on my own now, because I really like to write a story and add graphics/music and share it with others, but my drawing skills are much worse than yours. I think you are actually p...