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by chocojax
Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:07 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

Re: The Last Note [GXB] [ROMANCE] [SoL]

Oh, okay. x: I'm gonna try to make it 2x longer then, loool. Wouldn't want it to get onto people's nerves, after all. :v Thanks for the feedback!
by chocojax
Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:43 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Kimeru - to decide [Drama, Friendship] - Dropped
Replies: 34
Views: 8529

Re: Kimeru - to decide [All, Dating) WIP - Sprites updated!

Awww, Mirae looks cute! She looks pretty mature. x: Eym gonna get her, best character. Also, for Hayden, why is it unlucky for him to have a knack for passing courses? If he does, then why unlucky, lool. Are you saying that it's a bad trait to have for him since he's willing to do nothing to fail? x...
by chocojax
Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:32 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

Re: The Last Note [GXB] [ROMANCE] [SoL]

A fairly small update. ovo
* Added new picture to Cornelius. Still deciding on doing a really simple style or a slightly more detailed one.
* Changed Zack's name to Zeta. Planning on changing Shawn's name too.
* Attempted to make some music, lol. Feedback, please! (・◇・) http://youtu.be/J7MYBL0sGpI
by chocojax
Fri Jul 27, 2012 10:41 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Higher Ground [PostApoc][SF][Design phase]
Replies: 5
Views: 1002

Re: Higher Ground [PostApoc][SF][Design phase]

The setting: Kinda angers me, lol. I don't understand why they wouldn't give it to the poorer countries. )': Is so sad. The "Plague Wars" is really interesting too. Overall, the entire setting is interesting, haha. I really like it. Technology: (Not to be redundant, but again, interesting. Don't qui...
by chocojax
Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:21 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 448621

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Since I was a child, I didn't really enjoy eating very much because it feels like work and everything I eat only tastes nice for the first 3 bites. So, I'm still underweight, but I still try to eat a lot. x: It just takes some motivation. All of the schools I've been to are nice too, I've never seen...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:59 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3380

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

Yeaah, it's probably because of how calm her eyes look. And I don't think she looks fat. x: Though, her hands should be reaching down to halfway down her thighs, to be proportionally correct. :v!
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:34 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What are you listening to?
Replies: 380
Views: 33440

Re: What are you listening to?

I don't normally listen to Korean music, but one of my friends was listening to this, and it's so... catchy, lol.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9bZkp7q19f0
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Memory;Eternity [Friendship] [Fantasy]
Replies: 54
Views: 8939

Re: Memory;Eternity [Friendship] [Fantasy]

Story sounds kinda interesting, and I like how bright and cheerful your colors are. :v And the idea of choosing certain choices = change in stats is cool. Yeaah, the stat raising thing in Tokimeki Memorial was really boring. I just spammed through the entire thing. There are a few grammatical errors...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:29 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Newbie requesting critics XD
Replies: 24
Views: 3785

Re: Newbie requesting critics XD

O okay. I was just wondering, since yeah, you shaded above other things sometimes, lool. (I have a ton of .psds that lie around, should get to cleaning them up, orz.) It's less confusing when you try to imagine the subject as a 3D object, then trying to imagine what the light source hits. :v Like, s...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:24 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

Re: The Last Note [GXB] [ROMANCE]

@tsuroika: Yeaaah, I get what you mean. x: At least you're not leaving the bad script there, lol. Oomg, I don't know if you'll be able to wait long enough for this to be your first sol/romance VN, lool. P: Yeah, they usually make my heart go doki doki, which is a feeling that I really love, lol. @de...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:34 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Newbie requesting critics XD
Replies: 24
Views: 3785

Re: Newbie requesting critics XD

Oooh. Are you just simply flattening the image, and not saving the layers as well? :v You might want to make back-up files with the ending of .psd, which actually saves all of the layers and helps you out a lot if you wanna go back and fix it up! (Also, I don't know if you know, but Image -> Image S...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:15 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905256

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

omg, you're welcome. Yeah, you should start doing it, since it helps a lot with creating the illusion of form/movement/etc. Oooh, I see. x: I was really confused for a few seconds when I was redlining it, loool. You're welcome! Glad that I could help you. :v! (If you're talking about the neutral.png...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:37 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905256

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

@soulfool: I added a bunch of arrows to help you out, and a few other tips. :v! (Showing your work online is better than offline b/c people are usually shy to critique your work in person and just shower you with praises, lol) And, what I meant by them looking flat was how straight some of the lines...
by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 11:18 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905256

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

@soulfool: The main thing that bothers me is how flat the bodies look. x: If you want, I could redline that later. Well, maybe you'd want it to be around the 800x600 and at max, 1500(lol)? Yeah, or you could simply shrink them down to fit whatever size you want. I feel like 800x600 would still be go...
by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:21 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Newbie requesting critics XD
Replies: 24
Views: 3785

Re: Newbie requesting critics XD

You're welcome! You can actually resize the image. I believe it's Image -> Image size? :v Umm, not that there's a correct/incorrect way of using them, since you can use them any way you want, lol. But people tend to do outline on top, and colors+shading underneath, and it kinda seems like you went o...