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by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:41 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Club Shuffle [GxB]&[GxG][Romance, Comedy, Mystery, Fantasy]
Replies: 176
Views: 43750

Re: Club Shuffle [GxB]&[GxG][Romance, Comedy, Mystery, Fanta

Just popping in to say this, but I really adore the art style. So qt. I also like Gabe the most, since he's cute too, lool. I also love how Devon looks so happy. :V! And the whole entire club idea for the story is interesting too.
You have my support too, and mite buy if I have money, lol.
by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:35 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

Re: The Last Note [GXB] [ROMANCE]

@jeje: Loool. I wanna date Shawn too. x: I'll try to stay healthy and be creative too? >v>! Thanks~ Also, updated with a picture of Cornelius. I'm still pretty derpy, so gonna try to focus more on the story/writing, and then hopefully get a lot better at drawing, lool. I enjoy smirking, somewhat ang...
by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 12:08 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Newbie requesting critics XD
Replies: 24
Views: 3785

Re: Newbie requesting critics XD

You're welcome. What do you mean by, "not sure if it's possible to size it down even more"? Wot program are you using? It's a lot better! She looks a little bit more 3-dimensional now. c: - You may want to be "bolder" with the colors that you use for shading. Doing so adds a nice contrast with every...
by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 11:55 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

Re: The Last Note [GXB] [ROMANCE]

Yeaaah, me too. I wrote about 2k words a couple of days ago, which I was really proud of, and when I read over them yesterday, I just thought, "wat." Even if I'm still bad at it, it's still fun. :v! Ummm, I'm assuming that an overarching plot = some sort of event like a murder or something that driv...
by chocojax
Wed Jul 25, 2012 1:26 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905256

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

@Lumen_Astrum: I like the boat's details, it looks neat.

@bellice: He looks amazingly tall, lol.

@Hijiri: Night. And, I like how you add a lot of variety to your characters. :v!
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:30 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

Re: The Last Note [GXB] [ROMANCE]

Omg, you guys are all so nice. ヽ(*・ω・)ノ!! @Destiny and FatUnicornGames: Thanks you two! >v< Yeah, right now I'm trying to see if I can actually finish a big VN like this all by myself, lol. I'll most likely ask for help later on, though. :v! @gekiganwing: I forgot to put the setting in there. x: I'm...
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:33 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]
Replies: 51
Views: 6951

The Last Note [GXB][OTOME/ROMANCE][SLICE of LIFE]

Latest Concept Art: http://i436.photobucket.com/albums/qq81/chocojaxgogo/defa1_zps2b4f9aea.png http://i436.photobucket.com/albums/qq81/chocojaxgogo/logo1-1re_zps71f72670.png The Last Note Dev. Blog (tumblr) Genres: Romance, Friendship, Slice of Life Suggested Age: 13+ (No profanity) Story Basically...
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:19 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: (P)lanets - the life of normalcy has ended!
Replies: 489
Views: 343206

Re: (P)lanets - the life of normalcy has ended!

(Not really helping, but thought it was kinda funny.
ilove is not defined
Some pretty deep bug there.)
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:56 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Newbie requesting critics XD
Replies: 24
Views: 3785

Re: Newbie requesting critics XD

Yeah, usually, when you look at a drawing you've made a couple hours/days later, you start to notice all of the little mistakes. P: You're welcome!
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:55 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3380

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

Art: You seem to keep a steady hand with the mouse. O: That I'm assuming that you're using a mouse, lol. A thing that you might want to keep in the future though is using a harder brush to draw outlines for a subject. Kinda wondering what's happening between them, and why Saiko treats Haru badly. x:...
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:45 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905256

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Thanks. O: You keep practicing at whatever you're doing too!
by chocojax
Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:37 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Newbie requesting critics XD
Replies: 24
Views: 3785

Re: Newbie requesting critics XD

At the moment, I'm not on my desktop, so can't redline it. c: Hopefully my explanation will be understandable, since I tend to word my stuff strangely, lol. - You may want to resize things before you show them, especially since this one is pretty huge and there aren't small, miniature details needin...
by chocojax
Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Words Within Our Hearts [GXB Romance] (hey look we're back!)
Replies: 118
Views: 28371

Re: Words Within Our Hearts [GXB Romance]

The circling idea looks really awesome. O: Keep at it.
by chocojax
Mon Jul 23, 2012 8:13 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 448621

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Awww, man. I understand what you're saying, Sapphi. :v At the moment, I'm trying to learn some C because I'm gonna go with a Comp Sci major. I'm forcing my friend to teach me as I read through .pdfs, and ren'py is also helping, lol. And yap, it's not as if when they update php, they completely revam...
by chocojax
Mon Jul 23, 2012 7:42 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Loved my drawing until I flipped it horizontally...
Replies: 32
Views: 8112

Re: Loved my drawing until I flipped it horizontally...

I think trying to fix your mistakes that you notice when you flip your artwork helps you a ton(or at least, helps me), since it seems like my drawings become a bit more "stable" when I do that. I remember when I used to draw really slanted faces and thought it was totally awesome, until I flipped it...