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by chocojax
Mon Jul 27, 2015 6:22 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Hooked [BxB|Slice of Life|Short] [ENG|GER]
Replies: 5
Views: 7208

Re: Hooked [BxB|Slice of Life|Short]

Updated with a new download link for those of you who want to read it in German! Thanks to Massimow for providing us with the translation. :DDDDb And thanks for the kind comments, everyone. The writer has seen them and was super happy to hear that you guys liked the story!! (I am also very happy wit...
by chocojax
Mon Jul 27, 2015 2:55 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
Replies: 114
Views: 12996

Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]

@Ernestalice15: Thank you!! And yeah, I have a lot of trouble with that. I'm at least noticing it a lot more now, but it's still a problem. :[ @hiko27: Oooh, I get that problem often because of the lighting and stuff. Maybe I'm blind. :v And yeah, I think having obstacles is fun. Frustrating someti...
by chocojax
Mon Jul 27, 2015 1:26 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [SOLVED] Preventing transform from waiting for others
Replies: 0
Views: 275

[SOLVED] Preventing transform from waiting for others

I've been looking around for a bit, but haven't found a solution yet. :[ Here's my code: transform mm_randcloud: function random_pos_x # positions cloud at random on x-axis block: yalign 0.5 linear 20.0 xalign -1.0 xalign 0.5 repeat ... screen blah: add "cloud1" at mm_randcloud add "cloud2" at mm_ra...
by chocojax
Mon Jul 27, 2015 12:58 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
Replies: 114
Views: 12996

Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]

Ooh, by distinguish, I just mean sometimes when you look at photos (I was talking about anatomy-wise, but yeah it spreads to everything) it's kind of hard to wrap your head on what EXACTLY you're looking at. I saw your post on the day of and I SWEAR I saw you write something else for the last senten...
by chocojax
Thu Jul 23, 2015 4:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Hooked [BxB|Slice of Life|Short] [ENG|GER]
Replies: 5
Views: 7208

Hooked [BxB|Slice of Life|Short] [ENG|GER]

. http://i.imgur.com/zDiHLpI.png Summary: When Jay tries to fish, he catches more than just fish. (It was meant to be completed for NaNoWinter2015, but it got delayed. :'D) VN Length: 2,800 words (approx. 9 minutes) * Download Link * Hooked v1.1, added German Translation Screenshots: http://i.imgur....
by chocojax
Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:22 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
Replies: 114
Views: 12996

Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]

YEAH, EXACTLY! It's really interesting to look at (since... well, it's cool that you know it's fat that's hanging off/being squished between two objects), but then when I try to draw it, it sux. Mmm... maybe I will. I took a beginner's drawing class in freshman year, and I remember that they adverti...
by chocojax
Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:02 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
Replies: 114
Views: 12996

Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]

Oooh, I see what you mean. (Also, I've always loved that fold between the arms for some reason.) I've been trying to do more figure drawings and muscle/bone studies, but I definitely need to step up my game. I'm usually too lazy to do it (aaaa), but I'll try to do that more often (muscles on sausage...
by chocojax
Fri Jul 17, 2015 4:12 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
Replies: 114
Views: 12996

Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]

@hiko27: (I'm so amazed that you managed to post this a day before I checked in on LSF again, lol.) Aaaaaaaaaaaaa, thanks for this! I really appreciate you taking the time to redline my art, hahahah. - I did notice something strange about that raised arm, but couldn't quite pin it down myself. Do y...
by chocojax
Fri Jul 17, 2015 3:13 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: sorani's art dump [Livestream Off]
Replies: 16
Views: 3336

Re: z04's art dump

sorani wrote:Thanks for the help XD I appreciate it~
Here's my corrected img
Image
Looks better! There's now a weird tangent between the arm/chest, though. link, #4
by chocojax
Fri Jul 17, 2015 2:21 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: sorani's art dump [Livestream Off]
Replies: 16
Views: 3336

Re: z04's art dump

Thanks for the critique! Yeah, I would love a redraw XD body in perspective is a new thing to me haha and face shading is confusing >3> And yeah those Lok sprites are old, need to revamp them :3 No probs! I'm still pretty bad at perspective myself, heee. But, I really hope this helps a little! Here...
by chocojax
Fri Jul 17, 2015 1:24 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: sorani's art dump [Livestream Off]
Replies: 16
Views: 3336

Re: z04's art dump

Aw shoot, I really like the way you used the colors for the painterly ones. :3c shokugeki no souma fanart: - Perspective on his right (our left) arm looks funky. Perhaps it should've been moved up a tad bi tmore, and a little bit more hidden by his chest. - Shading on his face makes it appear strang...
by chocojax
Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:58 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
Replies: 114
Views: 12996

Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]

@Applegate: Thanx, I just googled beach or somethin', and it was one of the first few pictures I saw. :D

@hiko27: Thanks! Yeah, the arms are definitely wonky. And man, any kind of redline is helpful! You definitely shouldn't feel like you'd be messing it up, since, well, you'd be helping me. :P
by chocojax
Mon Mar 30, 2015 1:30 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Sendo's Sketchbook
Replies: 76
Views: 11605

Re: Sendo's Sketchbook

The BGs look awesome as always, dude! Gogogogoo! \o/
by chocojax
Sat Mar 28, 2015 6:07 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Umbra [Psychological Horror/Drama/Survival][2015]
Replies: 16
Views: 5936

Re: Umbra [Psychological Horror/Drama/Survival][2015]

More progress! I have about ~6 sprites to finish, and about a dozen backgrounds too. GUI is slowly getting worked on when I need a break from doing the sprites/BGs, hahahaahah. Writing appears to be going well, and the music is amazing! Am real excite to release the game when we finish. :D Screensho...
by chocojax
Thu Mar 26, 2015 12:22 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Umbra [Psychological Horror/Drama/Survival][2015]
Replies: 16
Views: 5936

Re: Umbra [Psychological Horror/Drama/Survival][2015]

I didn't want to update because I didn't finish (or nearly finish) the main cast until recently, gahahaha.

So, to add onto Maelstrom's update, here's the main cast! All that's left after this, in terms of sprites, are the side characters. Yay!