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by Mutive
Wed Jul 04, 2018 4:50 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Love Furever - Free Dog Dating Sim
Replies: 2
Views: 1262

Love Furever - Free Dog Dating Sim

Hi everyone, I recently completed a short (I'd guess around 15 minutes for a full play through) dog dating sim called "Love Furever". It's cute. It has terrible dog puns. It's free. What do you have to lose by trying it out? (Correct answer - nothing!) Feel free to download at: https://mutive.itch.i...
by Mutive
Thu Jun 28, 2018 11:22 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Players name themselves vs. OC character
Replies: 17
Views: 1167

Re: Players name themselves vs. OC character

I like letting people determine their own name and gender (gender because woah is it silly to have the game referring to "Annabella" or another super feminine name as "him"...this really annoyed me in DDLC which I generally found to be a great game. It's pretty easy to add variables into the script ...
by Mutive
Fri Jun 22, 2018 6:03 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing visual novels that are geared toward adults
Replies: 16
Views: 1734

Re: Writing visual novels that are geared toward adults

No two adults are the same, but I will say that as someone on in their late 30s, I've seen/read/played a lot. This makes many tropes that I loved as a kid kind of boring to me now. (I just really don't need another lost-orphan-who-turns-out-to-be-the-prince fantasy. I really don't. I've probably run...
by Mutive
Fri Jun 08, 2018 1:52 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft
Replies: 9
Views: 917

Re: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft

I think emotional stakes are great! But again, the better that can be defined earlier on, the easier (I think) it is to get a reader hooked. i.e. people needing a new teammate because they like playing a game - that's fine, but that's also a great many Friday nights for me (so not something worthy o...
by Mutive
Thu Jun 07, 2018 7:28 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft
Replies: 9
Views: 917

Re: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft

I really loved the voice. It sounded natural and fun! My primary concern is that I didn't get a particularly strong sense of the stakes. Why does playing the video game matter? (Is there something in particular that rides upon the outcome? If so, that would be awesome to know up front - like if ther...
by Mutive
Wed Jun 06, 2018 7:51 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: How do you write the manuscript of a visual novel?
Replies: 6
Views: 869

Re: How do you write the manuscript of a visual novel?

I use Word a lot with pseudo code. (Although sometimes I use real code, too, to make transferring faster.) So I might write something like this: a "Do you want to get a dog?" menu: "Do you want to get a dog?" "Yes": set flag for dog b "I'd love a dog! They're so cute!" "No": b "No way! Dogs are slob...
by Mutive
Tue May 29, 2018 12:11 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Starting with the pinnacle, then gluing highlights
Replies: 7
Views: 726

Re: Starting with the pinnacle, then gluing highlights

I don't think there's a single right way to write. I know some people start with a conclusion, then work their way to it. Others start with an interesting scenario and figure out how it eventually concludes. Others outline the whole thing, then write to flesh it out. They all can work. I tend to (pe...
by Mutive
Tue May 29, 2018 12:09 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Stats/Inventory Screen Critique
Replies: 5
Views: 698

Re: Stats/Inventory Screen Critique

It looks decent to me. However, the HP/MP almost look cut off in the first frame. (Which would worry me as a player as I need to know what my HP is!) I prefer the look by Moirnoir, FWIW, as it looks a bit more open/intuitive. (It might also make sense to have the "constantly showing" screen with HP/...
by Mutive
Sat May 26, 2018 10:59 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Husbando Rater [NaNo 2018] [Parody]
Replies: 5
Views: 2541

Re: Husbando Rater [NaNo 2018] [Parody]

That was adorably cute! I died a few times, then failed to bring world peace another few, so clearly I was not the best rater. But I got a few laughs out of it. Thanks for creating it!
by Mutive
Thu May 24, 2018 8:03 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: test mini game Corsar
Replies: 3
Views: 616

Re: test mini game Corsar

Yay, thanks! The second link worked! I thought the game was super cute, with fun game play and nice graphics. To offer a critique (as it is demos/beta testing!): - I think the intro was slightly long-ish, during which I wasn't 100% sure what I was supposed to do. (I figured it out pretty quickly, th...
by Mutive
Thu May 24, 2018 10:52 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: test mini game Corsar
Replies: 3
Views: 616

Re: test mini game Corsar

I'm getting an error on the download link. (I think it may just be my computer as I tend to keep fairly tight security controls on it, but it might be worth double checking.)
by Mutive
Tue May 22, 2018 6:24 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: YOU LEFT ME. [Free][Horror/Humor/Surreal][Ludum Dare]
Replies: 7
Views: 2690

Re: YOU LEFT ME. [Free][Horror/Humor/Surreal][Ludum Dare]

Oooh, I played this one and loved it. The visuals are breath-taking (and delightfully unusual) and the music fits perfectly. I loved the story, too, and found it to be just about the perfect length. Thanks for creating this!
by Mutive
Mon May 21, 2018 10:54 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: The Wanderers Project [Demo Available]
Replies: 12
Views: 1238

Re: The Wanderers Project [Demo Available]

Huh. It looks like I have an executable file, but I'm still not able to run it for whatever reason. (I honestly have no idea why.) My apologies. :(
by Mutive
Fri May 18, 2018 10:16 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: The Wanderers Project [Demo Available]
Replies: 12
Views: 1238

Re: The Wanderers Project [Demo Available]

I'd love to give feedback, but I couldn't open it. I tried to download it (PC version), but it just showed a bunch of random files (none executable that I could see). I suspect there's a lot of cool stuff going on, I just wasn't able to access it.
by Mutive
Fri May 18, 2018 6:09 pm
Forum: Creative Commons
Topic: Free Sprite ~Remnantation~
Replies: 2
Views: 1586

Re: Free Sprite ~Remnantation~

Oooh, she's gorgeous!