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by IronForPistons
Mon Feb 19, 2018 6:54 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: [Free][Closed] Editor/Proofreader looking to expand VN experience!
Replies: 4
Views: 1272

[Free][Closed] Editor/Proofreader looking to expand VN experience!

Hi there! My name is IronForPistons, but feel free to call me Iron. I'm an enthusiast of anime and visual novels, and I am looking to gain experience in editing/proofing for VNs! My experience editing for VNs includes Panzer Hearts , an alternate history drama-romance. (My edits are set to be includ...
by IronForPistons
Fri Feb 02, 2018 7:44 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to Write Good Choices: A Guide
Replies: 7
Views: 1701

Re: How to Write Good Choices: A Guide

Interesting article! choices that add or remove choices in subsequent "choice nodes"/forks. Of note in this discussion, I think, is the Rin route from Katawa Shoujo. ( Here's a flowchart if you haven't played it or need a refresher - spoilers!) There are several choices that alter later options, and...
by IronForPistons
Thu Feb 01, 2018 7:02 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Strange Package [Mystery,Comedy][Short][Free]
Replies: 2
Views: 1662

Re: A Strange Package [Mystery,Comedy][Short][Free]

Very entertaining! It was the perfect length and the choices felt very natural. Looking forward to your future work!