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by Curtid21
Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:45 pm
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: Background Artist For Hire [CLOSED]
Replies: 11
Views: 1991

Re: Background Artist For Hire [Low Price]

I really like the watercolor one. I'm not at the design stage of my project yet. But definitely keeping a tab on this.
by Curtid21
Tue Jul 17, 2018 2:06 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Does anybody know how to write a point-and-click adventure game?
Replies: 6
Views: 1307

Re: Does anybody know how to write a point-and-click adventure game?

Hey Live, I was in just this position when I first started my project a month ago. All these ideas in my head, pictures, code (I'm not a coder), choices. It was actually pretty stressful and slowed down my writing a lot. I wasn't having fun. About two weeks ago I decided to just focus on the main st...
by Curtid21
Mon Jul 09, 2018 4:04 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Read and Critique my First Script!!
Replies: 5
Views: 903

Re: Read and Critique my First Script!!

Thanks for looking this over! Oh definitely. It's probably not as detailed as others I've read but this is because I intend to lean on art and scenery to fill in details. As far as nicheness, I definitely don't want to make it too avant-garde. I'm going to lean on the more slice of life relatability...
by Curtid21
Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:40 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Replies: 26
Views: 3744

Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)

Hey Tiger,

I know it's only been a few days, but I also wanted to tell you I just finished my first script of my own. I wanted to share it with you to get your input. I'd appreciate it a ton if you could. viewtopic.php?f=47&t=50825
Thank you!
by Curtid21
Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:34 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions
Replies: 4
Views: 583

Re: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions

Definitely, man. I'm not one for coding either, so I'm probably going to be in the same boat soon. But when you get a minute, would you mind critiquing my work as well? I have a short, first script I've been working on and would really appreciate any feedback. The post is next to yours I think https...
by Curtid21
Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:23 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Some initial, broad feedback requested on early script draft
Replies: 2
Views: 744

Re: Some initial, broad feedback requested on early script draft

Hey Ezmar, just finished the Prologue The first few paragraphs made me smile/laugh, that's when I knew I was in this for the long run. The writing and dialogue are just great. The character's have such distinct personalities. I think you did a really good job of Nick's internal thoughts to express h...
by Curtid21
Sun Jul 08, 2018 8:31 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions
Replies: 4
Views: 583

Re: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions

Hey Musick, just tried out this quiz. (I think this should be in "Demo's and Beta Testing" btw) I like the art style and it's pretty cool you have a diverse world set out already. Notes: I found the text hard to read all throughout. It's small, red text lined along a red background. I think having a...
by Curtid21
Sat Jul 07, 2018 5:43 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Read and Critique my First Script!!
Replies: 5
Views: 903

Read and Critique my First Script!!

Hey all! I've been around for a few days now and I've finally finished one full route of my VN currently titled Destined . For context, Destined is about a young, college student facing an identity crisis. He's struggling to find out who he was, who he is, and who he wants to be in life. Feeling pre...
by Curtid21
Sun Jul 01, 2018 1:01 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Replies: 26
Views: 3744

Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)

Sounds good!
And yea, I didn't see anything unusual with the scares past the "Exception" error that ends the demo.
by Curtid21
Sun Jul 01, 2018 10:54 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
Replies: 5
Views: 1101

Re: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]

Hey alakeshwari, Just did a playthrough during breakfast. As I thought the artwork and design are inspiring. They really give you a feel of the story and plotline. Touching on that, the story is interesting as well. I played through the Lotogh route and within a few minutes I definitely got a sense ...
by Curtid21
Sat Jun 30, 2018 9:46 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
Replies: 5
Views: 1101

Re: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]

Will definitely play later. The artwork and design are alluring.
by Curtid21
Sat Jun 30, 2018 8:23 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: A Conversation Simulator
Replies: 12
Views: 3099

Re: A Conversation Simulator

As someone who has a socializing disorder, the idea of this game is very appealing to me. I've honestly wanted a game like this for...a loooong time. It would be cool if you could develop much more complex relationships than the typical dating sim, with a lot of different options for the type of re...
by Curtid21
Sat Jun 30, 2018 7:40 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Recepta [Visual Novel/ RPG][Fantasy][Comedy]
Replies: 1
Views: 844

Re: Recepta [Visual Novel/ RPG][Fantasy][Comedy]

This looks awesomeeeeeee
So sad I didn't get to play before you opted to make it a download. Hope I see it soon!
by Curtid21
Sat Jun 30, 2018 7:28 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Replies: 26
Views: 3744

Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)

Hey Tiger, Just tried out the demo. Overall I really like the style of constant playthroughs to find out more about the world (setting). The demo only got more interesting as I found out about the hidden relationships between characters, though I felt the murder plot needs more context to develop th...
by Curtid21
Mon Jun 25, 2018 6:40 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5326
Views: 1300289

Re: Guestbook

Hey Everyone, I'm so amazed by how large this page is. My name is Curtis. I'm currently working on my first VN after being taken aback by greats like Fate and Katawa. I'm into all types of music from jazz to metal, though my favorite band is Tricot. I'm going to be reading and posting more often fro...