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- Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:45 pm
- Forum: I am an Artist
- Topic: Background Artist For Hire [CLOSED]
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1991
Re: Background Artist For Hire [Low Price]
I really like the watercolor one. I'm not at the design stage of my project yet. But definitely keeping a tab on this.
- Tue Jul 17, 2018 2:06 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Does anybody know how to write a point-and-click adventure game?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1307
Re: Does anybody know how to write a point-and-click adventure game?
Hey Live, I was in just this position when I first started my project a month ago. All these ideas in my head, pictures, code (I'm not a coder), choices. It was actually pretty stressful and slowed down my writing a lot. I wasn't having fun. About two weeks ago I decided to just focus on the main st...
- Mon Jul 09, 2018 4:04 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Read and Critique my First Script!!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 903
Re: Read and Critique my First Script!!
Thanks for looking this over! Oh definitely. It's probably not as detailed as others I've read but this is because I intend to lean on art and scenery to fill in details. As far as nicheness, I definitely don't want to make it too avant-garde. I'm going to lean on the more slice of life relatability...
- Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:40 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
- Replies: 26
- Views: 3744
Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Hey Tiger,
I know it's only been a few days, but I also wanted to tell you I just finished my first script of my own. I wanted to share it with you to get your input. I'd appreciate it a ton if you could. viewtopic.php?f=47&t=50825
Thank you!
I know it's only been a few days, but I also wanted to tell you I just finished my first script of my own. I wanted to share it with you to get your input. I'd appreciate it a ton if you could. viewtopic.php?f=47&t=50825
Thank you!
- Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:34 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions
- Replies: 4
- Views: 583
Re: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions
Definitely, man. I'm not one for coding either, so I'm probably going to be in the same boat soon. But when you get a minute, would you mind critiquing my work as well? I have a short, first script I've been working on and would really appreciate any feedback. The post is next to yours I think https...
- Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:23 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Some initial, broad feedback requested on early script draft
- Replies: 2
- Views: 744
Re: Some initial, broad feedback requested on early script draft
Hey Ezmar, just finished the Prologue The first few paragraphs made me smile/laugh, that's when I knew I was in this for the long run. The writing and dialogue are just great. The character's have such distinct personalities. I think you did a really good job of Nick's internal thoughts to express h...
- Sun Jul 08, 2018 8:31 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions
- Replies: 4
- Views: 583
Re: Ariane Eldar Games - ideas, suggestions
Hey Musick, just tried out this quiz. (I think this should be in "Demo's and Beta Testing" btw) I like the art style and it's pretty cool you have a diverse world set out already. Notes: I found the text hard to read all throughout. It's small, red text lined along a red background. I think having a...
- Sat Jul 07, 2018 5:43 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Read and Critique my First Script!!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 903
Read and Critique my First Script!!
Hey all! I've been around for a few days now and I've finally finished one full route of my VN currently titled Destined . For context, Destined is about a young, college student facing an identity crisis. He's struggling to find out who he was, who he is, and who he wants to be in life. Feeling pre...
- Sun Jul 01, 2018 1:01 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
- Replies: 26
- Views: 3744
Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Sounds good!
And yea, I didn't see anything unusual with the scares past the "Exception" error that ends the demo.
And yea, I didn't see anything unusual with the scares past the "Exception" error that ends the demo.
- Sun Jul 01, 2018 10:54 am
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1101
Re: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
Hey alakeshwari, Just did a playthrough during breakfast. As I thought the artwork and design are inspiring. They really give you a feel of the story and plotline. Touching on that, the story is interesting as well. I played through the Lotogh route and within a few minutes I definitely got a sense ...
- Sat Jun 30, 2018 9:46 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1101
Re: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
Will definitely play later. The artwork and design are alluring.
- Sat Jun 30, 2018 8:23 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: A Conversation Simulator
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3099
Re: A Conversation Simulator
As someone who has a socializing disorder, the idea of this game is very appealing to me. I've honestly wanted a game like this for...a loooong time. It would be cool if you could develop much more complex relationships than the typical dating sim, with a lot of different options for the type of re...
- Sat Jun 30, 2018 7:40 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Recepta [Visual Novel/ RPG][Fantasy][Comedy]
- Replies: 1
- Views: 844
Re: Recepta [Visual Novel/ RPG][Fantasy][Comedy]
This looks awesomeeeeeee
So sad I didn't get to play before you opted to make it a download. Hope I see it soon!
So sad I didn't get to play before you opted to make it a download. Hope I see it soon!
- Sat Jun 30, 2018 7:28 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
- Replies: 26
- Views: 3744
Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Hey Tiger, Just tried out the demo. Overall I really like the style of constant playthroughs to find out more about the world (setting). The demo only got more interesting as I found out about the hidden relationships between characters, though I felt the murder plot needs more context to develop th...
Re: Guestbook
Hey Everyone, I'm so amazed by how large this page is. My name is Curtis. I'm currently working on my first VN after being taken aback by greats like Fate and Katawa. I'm into all types of music from jazz to metal, though my favorite band is Tricot. I'm going to be reading and posting more often fro...