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Well, I'm a yaoi and otome kind of gal... but I actually like yuri for its cute/pretty girl character designs and loving couples. I hope it'll be well written with girls that act like girls. I'll definitely be interested if it is. It looks very cute. <3

I had no idea! Awesome!

Although, wow that was some time ago (2008?).... hopefully they're still going through with it. :/

So I took a lot of the advice given to me. It'll be easiest to see the changes in the without version which is the one with just flat cell shading and no glow effects. I removed the hand, I tried in a couple different places but it just wasn't working out right. I shrank the size of both their hair....

Are there any art organizations that have guidelines as to what they consider the difference between artistic nudity and porn to be? In devart, the general rule of thumb is if the genitals are aroused, then its porn. If penis is not erect then it is not considered porn and allowed to be posted, so ...

@LinWest I guess this is some sort of fast drawing, as I see some flaws with the inking and the colouring that could have been avoided with more time and care, and in my opinion do detract a bit from the overall look of it. I do quite like the style, it's somehow elegant and could very well suit a ...

Watch out for the male monster. He's too stupid to give real criticism, so we should dismiss him with an Ad Hominem. I'm glad you understand your role. But seriously, your comment was helpful for my art. Visuals are a bit easier to talk about since its right there in your face. However, for writing...

There's no problem with the one on the right, I'm talking on the dude to the left. His hips look like a woman, his shoulders like a man. there's also a problems with the angles his hips turn to the camera, but that's minor. "Either you shorten the length of his shoulders, or make his hips more wide...

fortaat is wrong about "flowery descriptions", that's a typical chauvinst male retort to dismiss literature that is aimed towards females. They're just fine. I find it helps set the tone for a story about a young girl. If anything I'd say, maybe tighten your words condense your sentences, and select...

There's a problem with the left heshe. He's hips can't be leaned, since his abdomen his facing the camera, and his chest isn't twisted. you can solve this one by re-coloring according to the muscles. Also, I know it's a yaoi thing, but he's way too thin. Either you shorten the length of his shoulde...

TeheRJ wrote:Thanks for the grammar mistakes. I'll try hard to make my visual novel grammar free. Hehe~.

so much win.

I suppose I'm a newb when it comes to writing sex scenes (but not in reading them ... what? >_>). But I think it's an important part of relationships that should be explored. But I definitely haven't shied away from the characters bumping uglies. I've already written a couple sex romps (not reveali...

sex scenes you say? *raises eyebrow intrigued* melikes this line of thought. You know... you could just do foreplay, and trail off if you're worried about being repetitive. Although, to be honest... I'm finishing up a 18+ game script at the moment, and it may seem like sex is repetitive writing but ...

Hello art thread! Didn't feel like scriptwriting today, so I drew some characters that have been floating around in my head for a couple hours.

What up, Azra. Your art's looking good. ^^

EDIT: Time for an avatar change!

wow. this is harder than i expected. renamed file to zoe. and its a .jpg stil doesnt work I had the same problems when I first started scripting a couple days ago. Naming things wrong, indentation troubles... Luckily I was able to eventually fix it all through trial and error. But once you get all ...

Oh yeah, that looks much better without the intense filtering. They're pretty close, but I think I prefer the facet more.

Your sprite is cute btw. ^^