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by fortaat
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:15 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [VN, Sci-Fi] Dispersio
Replies: 20
Views: 2247

Re: [VN, Sci-Fi] Dispersio

Could you please update us on how successful the game is (or isn't) in the English and Spanish versions?
I'm wondering about the financial feasibility of releases to the Iphone.
by fortaat
Tue Jul 20, 2010 8:43 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Convienience
Replies: 6
Views: 648

Re: Convienience

I'm not really bother by historical accuracy, but rather by stereotypical representation of a time period. This is often the result of poor research, but isn't identical. For example, if the story is set in an Japanese American high school, and has a prom, a football team, a class argument on the Bi...
by fortaat
Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:40 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: NEED ARTISTS & WRITERS (Music Romance VN)
Replies: 67
Views: 5468

Re: Music Romance VN Ideas/Sketches/Story/Anything?

On the first pic, the shading lines around the neck look out of place compared to the rest of the coloring.
Other than that, beautiful work.



Beside the skinny neck, muhahahah!
by fortaat
Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:19 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Dragon Soul (Looking for Artist)
Replies: 11
Views: 1158

Re: Dragon Soul

Zatch wrote:He have some ability to control energy but lacks the motivation.
Sounds like a great super villain.
It's a decent plot. I'll keep an eye on this game.
by fortaat
Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:30 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Dragon Soul (Looking for Artist)
Replies: 11
Views: 1158

Re: Dragon Soul

What you just described is the theme, not the story. what I mean is: Ai is a superhero living in a world already packed with such beings. She's having a mid life crisis when she realizes all her work for the government hasn't helped anyone, save for her bank account. All of this changes when Jack ap...
by fortaat
Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:14 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Dragon Soul (Looking for Artist)
Replies: 11
Views: 1158

Re: Dragon Soul

Looks interesting, though I have to comment you haven't gave a summery of the plot.
I know you don't want to spoil it, but you only described the background and the characters, not the plot. What's the actual story?
by fortaat
Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:05 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7827
Views: 802904

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

@ azraillesama I liked the vibrant colors and general composition, good work overall. * The left thigh of the right lady is too long. It also feels like something is wrong with its shape, but maybe that's just a result of the problematic length. * The buildings outside the windows should be out of f...
by fortaat
Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:47 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone
Replies: 8
Views: 1453

Re: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone

Unfortunately I'm aware of the rule. But... let's just say I can never write a gripping starting. They always are pretty bed, badder than this. Can't help myself. Yours is worse than "not gripping", it's scaring the reader away. You can actually cut it away, and it will probably be better. Saying "...
by fortaat
Wed Jul 14, 2010 9:48 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: A Writer's Dillemma
Replies: 13
Views: 1597

Re: A Writer's Dillemma

What I was doing myself was writing the story as code and planning to branch out after writing one complete path. That's not an exceptionally good way, since the end result might be one good story, written with a clear structure, to which there are many small bad endings that were plastered as an a...
by fortaat
Wed Jul 14, 2010 9:20 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: [Critique Please] Horror game art style; also need BETAS.
Replies: 20
Views: 1595

Re: [Critique Please] Horror game art style; also need BETAS

I like Deji's version more than the original - he doesn't look sick to me, and as you said, the first color style is overused. Anyway, he looks like a very long twig, probably on purpose, but I find it quite ugly. You forgot to mention whether the horror is of the "LOOK BEHIND YOU!!!" kind, or the "...
by fortaat
Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:52 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone
Replies: 8
Views: 1453

Re: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone

I stand alone in a dark alleyway. There is no one, just no one except me and my misery. Everyone seems to be rejoicing the passing moments, but for me every passing moment is like a deadly blow on my heart. My dreams, my love, my life; everything had come tumbling down a few days ago. Now I look fo...
by fortaat
Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:35 pm
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: New Character designs up :) feedback?
Replies: 5
Views: 712

Re: New Character designs up :) feedback?

i posted the link on the last one to this one...thank you for your concern but i purposely made a new thread as to get critique of both sets of art and setting up 2 sets of art on one thread seemed like overkill..(and then 3 and 4), but I will take that into consideration for furthur drafts So post...
by fortaat
Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:35 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What is your favortie book to read???
Replies: 55
Views: 4116

Re: What is your favortie book to read???

The Bible - mainly Jeremiah and the first part of the Book of Kings, but the rest is also good. G-D is my favorite character, especially when he pwns the heathens.

manga - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manga_Bible_%28series%29
by fortaat
Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:21 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Untitled Game : Stalker Boy Gets Chance to Date Dream Girl
Replies: 26
Views: 3806

Re: Untitled Game : Stalker Boy Gets Chance to Date Dream Gi

I thought they were older. I guess not brining adults into the picture is logical, but if she hates him she has no reason not to tell about him to her friends (and thus the entire school). In terms of plausibility, the story would be better off if she had some tendency to give him a chance. For exam...