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by fortaat
Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:50 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Untitled Game : Stalker Boy Gets Chance to Date Dream Girl
Replies: 26
Views: 4178

Re: Untitled Game : Stalker Boy Gets Chance to Date Dream Gi

You play as Theo, hopeless geek and stalker of the cranky redhead - Raven! Previously, Theo's tactics have been the usual: hacking her email, following her around, calling her and hanging up, leaving notes in her locker, taking pictures of her on his phone... the usual. After Raven finds out about ...
by fortaat
Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:58 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Opinions on character designs?
Replies: 5
Views: 885

Re: Opinions on character designs?

I won't repeat what LVUER said, since she covered almost everything. Here's my two cent: * MC's shirt makes it look like she has only one breast. Her shirt can't hang that way one her body if she has two. * Bachelor No. 2 - His hand, from the elbow to the wrist, is too long. Try doing it in front of...
by fortaat
Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:45 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905285

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Good work, I Really liked it, especially the color scheme. Things that bothered me: * The right eye of the big model. you should re-work it a bit, enhancing the color. It will really help to focus our eye on the head. It also reminded me of a black eye, but maybe that's only me. * Though I don't kno...
by fortaat
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:44 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Adding Notepad++ for Ren'Py
Replies: 6
Views: 8105

Re: Adding Notepad++ for Ren'Py

If you want to add an other editor by your own, look at the files "xxxx.editor.py" and "xxxx" I did that, and manually edited the file. My very limited understanding got me a "Launching the editor failed" error. # Name: gEdit # Version: 1 # Description: gEdit import os import os.path import sys edi...
by fortaat
Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:45 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905285

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Words (ok, smilies too) are the only thing we really have to justify our opinions or communicate how we feel on the internet. So yes, I place high esteem on the value of words. I think it is very important. But yesterday you said! YOU CALLED ME A CHUVI-!!! OH NO, IT'S HAPPENING! http://homepages.ny...
by fortaat
Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:34 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: How do I change font color
Replies: 5
Views: 606

Re: How do I change font color

If you mean the character's font color, than:

$ clara = Character('clara ', color="#FF1236")


And here's a color chart:

http://www.theodora.com/html_colors.html
by fortaat
Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:08 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: The 'If' Statement
Replies: 16
Views: 1404

Re: The 'If' Statement

You need to use flags:

http://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/doc/tut ... Statements

Read it.
Ask again later if you still need help.
by fortaat
Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:07 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Adding Notepad++ for Ren'Py
Replies: 6
Views: 8105

Re: Adding Notepad++ for Ren'Py

I second the motion.
How can I change the default editor in renpy? I assume it's done outside the program, but I have no idea where to start.
by fortaat
Thu Jul 08, 2010 7:34 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905285

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

There's no problem with the one on the right, I'm talking on the dude to the left. His hips look like a woman, his shoulders like a man. there's also a problems with the angles his hips turn to the camera, but that's minor. "Either you shorten the length of his shoulders, or make his hips more wide....
by fortaat
Thu Jul 08, 2010 7:19 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Make A Wish [WIP] - Working Out the Kinks
Replies: 47
Views: 5468

Re: Make A Wish [Backburner WIP]

fortaat is wrong about "flowery descriptions", that's a typical chauvinst male retort to dismiss literature that is aimed towards females. Watch out for the male monster. He's too stupid to give real criticism, so we should dismiss him with an Ad Hominem. If anything I'd say, maybe tighten your wor...
by fortaat
Thu Jul 08, 2010 8:31 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 905285

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

There's a problem with the left heshe. He's hips can't be leaned, since his abdomen his facing the camera, and his chest isn't twisted. you can solve this one by re-coloring according to the muscles. Also, I know it's a yaoi thing, but he's way too thin. Either you shorten the length of his shoulder...
by fortaat
Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:13 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Make A Wish [WIP] - Working Out the Kinks
Replies: 47
Views: 5468

Re: Make A Wish [Backburner WIP]

So basically 'too long didn't read'? No. Even if it was a quarter of the length, I still would have stopped reading. If it's boring, why should I keep doing it? seeing as how the person playing it will know what sort of story it is before getting it I'm not too worried about the opening narrative. ...
by fortaat
Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:32 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Make A Wish [WIP] - Working Out the Kinks
Replies: 47
Views: 5468

Re: Make A Wish [Backburner WIP]

The first paragraph is filled with useless flowery descriptions. Get rid of it. The second gives detailed descriptions of people we don't know or care about. In addition, since it's a visual novel, we'll see their sprites anyhow. Get rid of it. The Following chatter made me think it's a children's s...
by fortaat
Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:56 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone
Replies: 8
Views: 1522

Re: [Recruiting]Verifiers for a Story for turning into Ren'P

What's a "Verifier"? I don't know the word. Could you provide a summery of the story? It's not tempting to commit to several hours of work, proof reading or art making, on a story we know nothing about. And if anyone who has a little bit experience with Ren'Py will come forward to help this newbie, ...
by fortaat
Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:58 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What's your favorite time period in a VN?
Replies: 25
Views: 2160

Re: What's your favorite time period in a VN?

Time is irrelevent, as long as it's not in Japan, but that's mainly because I'm pretentious. If you want an honest answer, just write a good story. This means you can't choose any time period, but only those you know enough of to write a good story. Hence, it's pointless to ask what other people like.