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Um... Actually there are ah... two more bugs which I forgot to write before. Some times, the image hide or clear function does not work or you forgot to add it because sometimes (1 or 2 out of 10) images overlap. It turns quite messy. And sometimes the name tag (I honestly don't remember what it is ...

Really good storyline and graphics. I really liked Iris and Terrance comments. Made me laugh, really hard. Just a little bug. Chapter 4 pic appears again and again in the place of other chapter pics. Like you are starting Chapter 5, but the logo is of Chapter 4. But keep it aside, its a good game.

Ah, a unique plot, it is to me.

I'm a, you can say, street way writer. Just like to write stories here and there. I'm currently editor for SW&RR but am not very busy. So, if you need me as a co-writer or a proofreader (code+story), I'm available. Let me know.

The first anime I watched was Dragon Ball-Z. It had good art and story; a true anime.

Here's my idea dump. No not dump, a idea safe keep for I'm buried up to my neck in progress fics: The Seventh Wish “Stop you, dirty scoundrel,” I roar as I speed off towards the man, who has stolen something from my house. It is not easy because I’m following him on a highway and it is night time; u...

1. How much of a completitionist are you? a) I just finish the game once and be done with it. b) I try to get all the endings, but I don't bother to unlock it all. c) I unlock every bit of them! I feel I've done nothing if not. C (I always try to achieve this) 2. What's the most important character...

I tend (or rather am doing) to write different stories for different endings and the combine them in a hyperlinked word document or html. Always help.

And there was one more error in the Windows one, at least there was for me. Sometimes you have to hit enter five-six times for the message box to disappear. Maybe I couldn't figure it out.... but I went through the chef's dialogue, then for like a half second I saw something above their heads, and t...

Yours is worse than "not gripping", it's scaring the reader away. You can actually cut it away, and it will probably be better. Saying "Can't help myself" is an excuse. Here's what you should do: a. Sit. b. Think. c. Rewrite Repeat as many times as necessary. Oh, I have tried it. You are not the fi...

The gameplay was very sweet and gripping. I get the ending like this 3 > 2 > 1.

And the historical background added a sort of charm, unexplainable in words but which the games themed in the modern setting lacks.

Hoping to see another VN from you, soon.

There's a law in writing, which says the first line/paragraph/scene is the most important, since it's the one people are most likely to read. If it's not gripping enough, they'll stop, and put the book/movie/game back on the shelf. Unfortunately I'm aware of the rule. But... let's just say I can ne...

I really like the word 'Heck'.
Just sort of firms a statement for me.

Me and mechnist (he is my verifier) found out that we both pretty much suck at summary writing. So, we came to the conclusion that we will post the first unedited draft of the story, to see if anyone is interested. So read and enjoy. It will be on FictionPress soon: I stand alone in a dark alleyway....

I'm available for coding help. If you have any questions about scripting and whatnot, I'm your gal. And I think a handdrawn interface would be perfect for this game, what are you talking about? Totally do it yourself! It'll look great! I will keep that in mind if I end up having to code it. I do ha...

I really liked Harry Potter series and Oliver Twist to name the most I like.