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EDIT: I'll be moving this again to the WIP thread, as things will happen weekly from here onwards.

Updated my old thread~
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... =26&t=8246

bump* updated first post http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... =26&t=8246

... A lot different when reference comes into play.

Newest sketch:
1 layer , 45 mins.

full res: http://helrouis.deviantart.com/art/Kiri ... -187598954

@Ryouko: Check out my latest journal about it:
http://helrouis.deviantart.com/journal/36510416/

hm, thanks for the information, I'll take note of that for next attempts.
edited/Updated the artwork, tried fixing the anatomy.

@Fawn thank you for the critique, I resized the image down too. The lighting is quite messy I admit, I don't know how to pull off the camera lighting in front (there's a camera girl shooting at them so yeah xD, otherwise their faces should be darker or so..) Thanks for the link, I saved the page a l...

@fortaat
Please critique my latest update

@fortaat I did attempt to capture how my desktop was at night given a cap of 4 hours: (1 layer (except for screenshot on monitor), paint tool SAI 1.1.0, wacom cte 450) http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/269/5/6/my_room_by_helrouis-d2zixyr.jpg I know it's not good ~ I'll try submitting a new exam...

Thank you pkt , I'm confused which style should I go actually, rough one or the clean one. Most VNs use the clean/HQ style and somehow I want to try rough to make a difference with my project. Thank you shatteredfox for the critique , I'll keep in mind to control the expressions next time xD So her...

Work done under 1 hour. Again, feel free to critique, will be very much appreciated.

Practicing anatomy.. Critiques are very much appreciated!

Good day everyone, it's been a while.. Been busy w/commissions and if you're interested, just view this link: Commission Information: http://helrouis.deviantart.com/journal/35707342/ Samples: 1/18/2011 - My latest work so far: http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/017/6/0/amamiya_yuuko_by_helrouis-...