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@Ran08 Thanks for the suggestion. I might expand the role of the character name meanings in the plot, or at least allude to them more when the characters' personalities unravel. Yes, Shinon allows herself to be used in order to use the Tsuki in return. The Red Card system is really just like any sys...

I'd love to see this game released! It'd be very nice if we can see some character art (maybe just sketches, if possible) to get a feel of how they look and (maybe) their personalities (at least at first glance). I'm rather interested in Takashi at the moment - his ability seems interesting. I was w...

Very nice premise! You have my interest! (stalks thread) Is the general plot of the game easy enough to understand from the description? Yes, I think the general plot is relatively easy to understand, and the fact that you would be visualizing the characters' desires in the dream world, colouring th...

In my opinion, you should probably have a short prologue, just to introduce the characters. Then at the end of the prologue, have the wizard death scene to shake things up and get us completely hooked into the storyline. I'd be interested in progress notes and sketches, because they give us a better...

Thanks for your insightful comments, Ran08! I really appreciate the feedback. I like to think of Xin as a modern Prince Charming type on the surface, but I intend on delving deeper into his true personalities and ambitions in the actual novel (which is why I labelled this story as "psychological"). ...

Working on Wan sprites now. Here are two. http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b88/-MotokoAoyama-/wan1preview_zpsf3b20e9b.png http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b88/-MotokoAoyama-/wan2preview_zps601db96a.png I have the draft for two additional poses, but I'll probably finish all the outfits and expressi...

Turkey! (get's shot by Goddess Huoji)

Looking forward to playing the game, and will offer my comments when I'm done

Thanks very much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked Wan's design. I've struggled with his design for a considerable time - this is the 2nd version I'm posting. I'll likely modify Xin's design as well, as I noticed that my art style has changed a little over the course of w...

Here is an idea for my first VN. I've contemplated whether or not to post this now or later (when I have more progress to report), but I've decided that I may need some feedback before I continue any further. Critique about the story and character descriptions would be very helpful, thank you :) htt...

Sounds like a good start. One thing though, I'd recommend finding an artist willing to draw the sprites first instead of just one to draw the CGs. Personally, I find that if the CG artist and the sprite artist are different people, the art styles are so different that they look somewhat...out of pla...

That was a great game. I really appreciated your efforts. Needless to say, I loved the true end the most (but then again, I didn't play through all the endings) And whenever you bring up Higurashi in your game, it made me smile. The OP has some Higurashi similarities too, right? One thing that somew...

Wow, that was such a great game. Really amazing work for a one-month venture. Only complaint is that there weren't any CGs, but hey, it's totally understandable given the time limit. Maru is so adorable! *huggles* Grandpa is great too. I think his character was fleshed out very well. Despite that yo...

Maybe you can just fast-forward it so it'll skip through the opening video?

It worked. Thanks a lot! I'll leave my comments when I'm done playing. And thanks again for the wonderful game.

Looks really good! I really want to play it, but as I was doing so, it keeps crashing on me during the opening video. I was wondering if anybody has encountered the same problem and might know how to fix it? Or perhaps, is there a version out there without the opening video? Thanks very much. And la...

Interesting game. I've played through Chase's route so far, and it was quite addicting. I like how your art has gotten a lot better since "Frozen Essence", and the script is generally error-free compared to your last game. Each character speaks with his/her unique tone, which adds to their personali...