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by Seigetsu
Wed Mar 02, 2016 7:59 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: IDENT# [scifi/mystery/drama][optional GxG/B][NaNoReno2016]
Replies: 54
Views: 4804

Re: IDENT# [scifi/mystery/drama][optional GxG/B][NaNoReno201

General impressions? I think it's an interesting concept. Which characters are romanceable? Is there a "true route" or would each route be given equal treatment? Sometimes I get disappointed when the romanceable character in the "true route" is the one I don't like, haha. Then again, you did mention...
by Seigetsu
Tue Mar 01, 2016 5:09 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: The Thousandth Day [ GxG | Fantasy | NaNo16 ][ART/CHAR UP]
Replies: 29
Views: 3875

Re: The Thousandth Day [ GxG | Fantasy | NaNo '16 ]

Do you think I should incorporate choices into the endings as well (which would sometimes potentially branch out into mini scenes without changing the ending itself), or would that just feel pointless and forced? I think this can be a good idea if you have time to spare, but not really necessary, p...
by Seigetsu
Tue Mar 01, 2016 3:57 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: The Thousandth Day [ GxG | Fantasy | NaNo16 ][ART/CHAR UP]
Replies: 29
Views: 3875

Re: The Thousandth Day [ GxG | Fantasy | Lore | NaNo '16 ]

Yay! More GxG games! And I really like modern fantasy type stories. The premise is certainly interesting. Alright, so here are the answers to your questions: How would you feel about a prologue that introduces Zena's background? It'll consist of blackscreen + NVL text. Too boring and redundant? Woul...
by Seigetsu
Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:52 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: [NaNoRenO 2016] Idols! (Musicians Needed)
Replies: 3
Views: 500

Re: [NaNoRenO 2016] Idols! (Writers and Musicians Needed)

Thanks for your quick answers! I've sent you a PM with my application :)
by Seigetsu
Mon Feb 29, 2016 6:50 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: [NaNoRenO 2016] Idols! (Musicians Needed)
Replies: 3
Views: 500

Re: [NaNoRenO 2016] Idols!

Your game sounds like it's going to be a lot of fun to make and play. If you don't mind, I just have a couple questions I'd like to ask you about your project: - For the writing position, how much text do you anticipate would be needed for the game? Have you come up with a schedule as to when the te...
by Seigetsu
Thu Feb 25, 2016 3:29 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Stranded Hearts [GxG][Survival Sim][Romance]
Replies: 13
Views: 4863

Re: Stranded Hearts [Survival Sim][GxG][YuriJam]

I've finally got to playing the demo (I know right? Totally my bad). I can send you the detailed comments by email, but here is some general feedback. What do you think of the intro to the story? Is it generally clear what's happening? Overall, I think it's clear. We'll probably have to work on the ...
by Seigetsu
Sun Feb 21, 2016 9:33 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: *Arena Circus* Looking for BG artist(s)
Replies: 20
Views: 1700

Re: *Arena Circus* Looking for partners

Hi there, I'm a little interested in either helping out with the editing or testing of your game. I was just wondering if I could know a little more about what are actually needed for these positions. For editing, what kind of feedback are you looking for specifically? Are you more looking for someo...
by Seigetsu
Fri Feb 19, 2016 3:14 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Story of Us [ GxB/G | Fantasy | Action ][ GUI Preview ]
Replies: 10
Views: 2453

Re: The Story of Us [ GxB/G | Fantasy | Action ][ GUI Previe

I've got to say this is one of my most anticipated games on the forum. The plot sounds really intriguing - I'm a sucker for fantasy/action/politics in visual novels. What's your opinion on the plot? How do you think it could be improved? I like that none of the characters will be guiltless. Consider...
by Seigetsu
Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:13 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: [Closed] Looking for a writer! [gxb] [gxg]
Replies: 7
Views: 880

Re: Looking for a writer! [gxb] [gxg]

The art assets you have are looking great! And two GxG options? Love that too! I'd love to write for a project like this, but I'm also very much a noob when it comes to writing visual novels. If you don't mind having someone like me, feel free to contact me by PM. I'd be happy to show you some writi...
by Seigetsu
Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:01 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Starry Dreams [Slice of Life / LGBT] [RELEASED]
Replies: 27
Views: 5551

Re: Starry Dreams [Slice of Life / LGBT / Jam Entry]

I'm so happy to see more LGBT-friendly games being made these days! And with a sweets theme too? Awesomesauce! 1. What do you want to see out of this game? I honestly just want to see the game completed. I think that's the most important thing. Stats-building is fun, but I'm more of a "reading" type...
by Seigetsu
Tue Feb 02, 2016 7:41 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Is this too girly?
Replies: 10
Views: 1220

Re: Is this too girly?

I personally don't like to associate colours with genders, so even if it's all pink and purple, I won't consider it girly. But when playing a visual novel, I find blues and purples to be easier on my eyes. Pinks and greens are a little too striking for my liking, especially when I have to stare at t...
by Seigetsu
Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:53 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Looking for proofreaders
Replies: 7
Views: 803

Re: Looking for proofreaders

I'd be interested. Specifically, what kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want your proofreaders to nitpick spelling and grammatical errors? Or are you looking for a more general response? I find that in the case where you want proofreaders to nitpick and directly edit the work, a program t...
by Seigetsu
Mon Jan 18, 2016 4:21 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Seeds of Sylvia [Kinetic] [Secret Santa 2015]
Replies: 4
Views: 2061

Re: Seeds of Sylvia [Kinetic] [Secret Santa 2015]

Just played the game. For a short game as this, I think the art was adequate, the music was a nice touch. Sylvia's sprite was well-done. The GUI had minimal customizations, but that is understandable. As for the story, I commend you for tackling a controversial topic. It was thought-provoking. Howev...
by Seigetsu
Wed Jan 13, 2016 5:50 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Flower Garden [GxG]
Replies: 8
Views: 7590

Re: Flower Garden [GxG]

Just finished playing this game yesterday. Thanks very much for sharing! (By the way, I also played "The Sad Story of Emmeline Burns" and really liked that as well) So, with "Flower Garden", I really liked Chiaki's voice. The simple writing style also made it an easier read compared to some of your ...
by Seigetsu
Wed Sep 02, 2015 1:58 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Swan x Swan [YuriJam][Romance][Fantasy][NaNo16] (Previews!)
Replies: 25
Views: 5509

Re: Swan x Swan [YuriJam][Romance][Fantasy][GxG (obv!)]

This is an amazing concept. I love how you'll give depth to the side characters as well, because that's desperately lacking in many stories. It's wonderful seeing so many people participating in the Yuri Jam. Wish you all the best, and if you need any help, feel free to ask!