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by JimG
Tue May 13, 2014 4:47 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3198

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

It sounds interesting and I hope you make it. I am not a big fan of tragedy and do not care to invest emotion in a story/character only to have them die at the end, unless of course it is a life story. ( I also understand that everybody dies at the end!). For some reason the movie "Antonia's Line" j...
by JimG
Thu May 08, 2014 8:35 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Stillwater Creek[School Life][Drama][Romance][BxG][COMPLETE]
Replies: 4
Views: 2033

Re: Stillwater Creek[School Life][Drama][Romance][BxG][OpenD

I am surprised that you would have people from Edinburgh and Glasgow dating each other :lol: I thought that was like trying to mix oil and water.

Anyways, I will do some proofreading if that helps. I have now attained all of the endings.

Best Regards
Jim
by JimG
Thu May 08, 2014 1:47 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Stillwater Creek[School Life][Drama][Romance][BxG][COMPLETE]
Replies: 4
Views: 2033

Re: Stillwater Creek[School Life][Drama][Romance][BxG][OpenD

i've played through twice now. There are some spelling/grammatical errors, at some point I will point some out. One thing that really needs changing is that you have Louisa swimming on her state team, Canada has provinces not states, so she would be on the provincial team. I do like the game, you've...
by JimG
Wed May 07, 2014 1:48 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Ballad of Lost Adventurers [fantasy][BxG] [GxG]
Replies: 23
Views: 5410

Re: Ballad of Lost Adventurers [fantasy][BxG] [GxG]?

For sure do a GXG route. I see you are talking about the point of view being from either Lora or Hannah, that will be a tough decision, at least it seems that way looking at the outline, being 45,000 words in you probably have a much clearer picture than I :D Anyways, I am looking forward to this ga...
by JimG
Fri May 02, 2014 4:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Full Circle [BxG][School][Romance][Slice of Life][Demo]
Replies: 30
Views: 8001

Re: Full Circle [BxG][School][Romance][Slice of Life][Demo]

Hello, I have been playing the demo and find that it is enjoyable so far. The overall quality seems like it will be very good. Please note that I do not create VN or RPG but only play/enjoy them so my comments are not technical in nature. I see that you have dropped the biology lab partner and even ...
by JimG
Thu May 01, 2014 5:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Who is Mike?[Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural]FULL RELEASE!
Replies: 102
Views: 17581

Re: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller, Comedy, Horror, Romance]

Oh wow! I didn't know age was a deciding factors to VNs. I might consider tweaking the ages a bit My guess is that all age groups are represented in the audience for VNs. I would also suggest that a good story makes the VN appealing to a large group regardless of the age of the characters. My advic...
by JimG
Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)
Replies: 62
Views: 10659

Re: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)Update-04/28/14-Please R

I am really looking forward to this game and have bookmarked your blog so I can keep up to date. I have to tease you a little bit though, in your blog you said the "problem is in the wiring" I know you meant writing but I had to laugh because with a bout of depression it seems like it was a freudian...
by JimG
Wed Apr 30, 2014 9:46 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Mira's Magical Mishap [GxG] [Fantasy]
Replies: 35
Views: 37141

Re: Mira's Magical Mishap [GxG] [Fantasy]

Thank you for the game, well done.

Best Regards
Jim
by JimG
Fri Apr 11, 2014 5:15 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Serafina's Saga [Romance, Drama, Adventure] [GxB][GxG]
Replies: 56
Views: 44200

Re: Serafina's Saga [Romance, Drama, Adventure] [GxB][GxG]

The writing for this game was about the best I have seen. This is one of the vn treasures and everyone should download it. Thanks very much for creating this story.

Best Regards
Jim
by JimG
Fri Apr 11, 2014 5:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Aloners [Post-Apocalyptic] [GxB] DEMO NOW AVAILABLE
Replies: 81
Views: 23593

Re: Aloners [Post-Apocalyptic] [GxB] DEMO NOW AVAILABLE

Loved the demo, really looking forward to the completed project. BTW after seeing this I had to try "Rei". Good job on that.

Best Regards
Jim
by JimG
Fri Apr 11, 2014 5:05 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Bar[BXG][SliceofLife]
Replies: 10
Views: 1679

Re: Bar[BXG][SliceofLife]

This looks very interesting, looking forward to it.

Best Regards
Jim
by JimG
Sat Mar 29, 2014 1:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Toire No Hanako (A story about fear)
Replies: 31
Views: 22604

Re: Toire No Hanako (A story about fear)

WOW! What a great story.

Very well done.

Best Regards
Jim
by JimG
Wed Feb 12, 2014 6:38 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Lucky Days [Slice of Life/Friendship/VN]
Replies: 16
Views: 17865

Re: Lucky Days [Slice of Life/Friendship/VN]

A really good game, thank you for sharing it with us. I think Googaboga's comment about the game being familiar was interesting. Lucky Days really has the feel of a classic Ren'Py game. In some ways I found Lucky Days a little dark in that one of the endings was not particularly comforting, but it c...
by JimG
Sat Feb 01, 2014 6:38 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: TRAP! [ModernFantasy][VN] PG-16!
Replies: 31
Views: 16343

Re: TRAP! [ModernFantasy][VN] PG-16!

Quote : "Anyway! -- I'm really glad you enjoyed the game overall. If I find a decent character artist I may indeed rework the game and actually throw in a longer, stronger story -- one with an Evil fairy and a wild hunt!" end quote I for one, will be keeping my fingers crossed that you find a decent...
by JimG
Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:07 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: TRAP! [ModernFantasy][VN] PG-16!
Replies: 31
Views: 16343

Re: TRAP! [ModernFantasy][VN] PG-16!

Thanks for making this, I really liked it but it was about 6 hours too short! Best Regards Jim LOL! I'm really glad you liked my game, but seriously, 6 hours of What could I possibly add? -- The only thing I could think of was a parallel storyline; a whole separate story that ran adjacent to the ma...