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by Shadow
Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:36 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: My Angsty Classmates [Otome] [NaNo 2013?]
Replies: 26
Views: 7235

Re: My Angsty Classmates [Otome] [NaNo 2012]

Small update.

I'm considering changing the text box. What do you think?
by Shadow
Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:14 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: My Angsty Classmates [Otome] [NaNo 2013?]
Replies: 26
Views: 7235

Re: My Angsty Classmates [Otome] [NaNo 2012]

Yesssssssssssss High school otomes usually don't catch my interest, but this isn't any ordinary otome; it's one full of delicious angst and badassery . That's like, gold right there. I'll be watching this project closely @_@ Haha, thank you~ When I got the sprites they all looked like guys who had ...
by Shadow
Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:56 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: My Angsty Classmates [Otome] [NaNo 2013?]
Replies: 26
Views: 7235

My Angsty Classmates [Otome] [NaNo 2013?]

A visual novel that can be taken about as seriously as its title, My Angsty Classmates puts you in the shoes of Phoebe Martin as she starts her last year of high school. Confronted with a class of boys who all exude an aura of teen angst and badassery, Phoebe sets out to get along with them — maybe ...
by Shadow
Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:08 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Planet EVN
Replies: 375
Views: 63936

Re: Planet EVN

PyTom wrote: I don't want to add NSFW blogs (as opposed to SFW blogs about NSFW games) to Planet EVN, since it does show images by default.
I thought so. Just wanted to check. Thank you very much!
by Shadow
Fri Jan 20, 2012 11:01 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Planet EVN
Replies: 375
Views: 63936

Re: Planet EVN

I've read through the thread and there doesn't seem to be any guidelines to what can be included in PlanetEVN. I'm wondering if it's okay to submit a blog that infrequently posts uncensored NSFW images? It's not something that, say, DeviantArt would ban (while having a warning up), but it seems your...
by Shadow
Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:45 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: What do you do to improve your writing?
Replies: 34
Views: 4156

Re: What do you do to improve your writing?

Creative writing is creative. If you're using basic sentences ("he said", "walked", etc.) then there should be a purpose, otherwise it lacks voice and a number of other elements you can embed in a sentence like setting and characterisation. On that note, everything always has an exception. Never thi...
by Shadow
Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:04 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Closed
Replies: 8
Views: 947

Re: Artist wanting to do short visual novel(GxG preferred)

Razz wrote:*flattered you remember me* I didn't realize the project from /u/ was still going!

I'd be interested in hearing it if you want to send me a PM/email
It sure is~ Slowly at that but it's the holidays, so we can probably start on sprites.

Expect an email a bit later on.
Checking forums before uni
by Shadow
Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:00 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Closed
Replies: 8
Views: 947

Re: Artist wanting to do short visual novel(GxG preferred)

Oh Razz, is that you? We miss your stuff. Our project's too big but good luck finding a smaller one :3

Actually, I might have something for you if you're not too fussed about when it's released.
by Shadow
Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:58 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: [Critics Needed] Is story good enough for a KN/VN?
Replies: 13
Views: 1237

Re: [Critics Needed] Is story good enough for a KN/VN?

I won't mention anything that's already been said aside from it does sound like a prologue. I liked the basic idea and the characters, but if this is the beginning of your story, a further look into the setting would be good. For instance, how big is the forest? What does his house look like? Some d...
by Shadow
Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:18 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: [Critics Needed] Is story good enough for a KN/VN?
Replies: 13
Views: 1237

Re: [Critics Needed] Is story good enough for a KN/VN?

Hey there. I downloaded the doc but there appears to be something wrong with it, namely Mediafire marks it as a .docx file but upon download it's a .zip file. Extracting this gives a few folders with XML files in them which makes the text almost incomprehensible.

Could you perhaps upload it again?
by Shadow
Mon Sep 19, 2011 2:05 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Team Projects Writer
Replies: 3
Views: 677

Re: Team Projects Writer

I'd be interested in writing for you guys. Very much willing to write projects to type and I have some experience writing in Sci-Fi and Fantasy genres. I have a solid grasp of English which extends to skills in both technical and creative writing. I'm almost at the end of a Creative Writing degree a...
by Shadow
Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:02 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: my story for (GxB) otome...
Replies: 3
Views: 788

Re: my story for (GxB) otome...

Auro-Cyanide has got a good point with the reasons behind actions. Having a through-line (ultimate objective) for all your characters will do wonderfully since they it gives them reason to move forward and may dictate their interactions with other characters. Also think about specifics and smaller m...
by Shadow
Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:10 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Soul and Heart] Editor Wanted!
Replies: 4
Views: 714

Re: [Soul and Heart] Editor Wanted!

If you're still open, I'd like to help too.
by Shadow
Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:54 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: When people don't get what you do.
Replies: 21
Views: 2003

Re: When people don't get what you do.

Creative Writing major. When I tell people I want to edit for a living, they chuckle at the thought of me huddled over piles of paper correcting spelling. Though I do get the odd "so you want to be a journalist?" question.