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by TakeOverWorld
Sun Oct 07, 2012 12:15 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Universal Hope(otome, fantasy,Mythology)[GxB]
Replies: 148
Views: 33237

Re: The Universal Hope (otome, school-life, fantasy)[GxB]

I like the style of the characters :)
I'm just a bit confused on the story line - so does most of the story take place in the school?
by TakeOverWorld
Mon Sep 24, 2012 12:54 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Adversity Comp - Visual Novel Writing Contest - Sept 2012
Replies: 340
Views: 24599

Re: Adversity Comp - Visual Novel Writing Contest - Sept 201

I really wanted to submit something, but I've only done around 2000 words, and am not even into the, erm, meat of the story. :( Oh well, hopefully, I'll have something good enough done in the next couple of days.
by TakeOverWorld
Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:52 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: I Need Your Critiques (Update: I'm Using Your Critiques)
Replies: 157
Views: 20654

Re: I Need Your Critiques (Update: I'm Using Your Critiques)

Just want to chime in and say how much your art has improved :D And also, in the most recent picture of Alex, his left hand looks way too big.
by TakeOverWorld
Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:33 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Visual Novel Writing Contest (planning thread)
Replies: 92
Views: 7777

Re: Visual Novel Writing Contest (planning thread)

This sounds interesting.
I think, for the sound, as said before, option 3, and you wouldn't have to use the music if you didn't want to.
by TakeOverWorld
Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:26 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Zzombie Infestation 1
Replies: 10
Views: 3952

Re: Zzombie Infestation 1

I know this has been mentioned before, but the background was, well if you choose to use a picture from Google Maps, you could at least not have the navigation thingy in the picture. Also it was a bit weird being told I was driving on the motorway, and still having the house as a background. The sto...
by TakeOverWorld
Tue May 22, 2012 1:08 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Heartful Chance
Replies: 108
Views: 50605

Re: Heartful Chance~!

I enjoyed the game, it's simple but sweet :D And I loved the art work, especially the expressions of the best friend, like when she blackmails Eimi into delivering the letter. It was fun :)
by TakeOverWorld
Sat May 12, 2012 2:57 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Looking for an editor
Replies: 2
Views: 469

Re: Looking for an editor

Thank you! Much appreciated.
by TakeOverWorld
Thu May 10, 2012 2:48 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Looking for an editor
Replies: 2
Views: 469

Looking for an editor

Hi, I'm looking for an editor for a short VN I'm writing (and by short, at the moment it's very short, just under 2000 words, and the story is more or less finished.) To summarize, it's basically about sadness. I was inspired by the quote 'If you want to be happy, be' So I'm looking for an editor to...
by TakeOverWorld
Thu Apr 26, 2012 1:41 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Learning Resources
Replies: 106
Views: 82141

Re: Art Learning Resources

Well there's this : http://alexhays.com/loomis/ which is a collection of Andrew Loomis' drawing guides in pdf form.
by TakeOverWorld
Sat Apr 21, 2012 11:28 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Summer Found Me [GxB][Slice of life]
Replies: 44
Views: 11315

Re: Summer Found Me [GxB][Slice of life]

I really liked this demo, it was fun! I like the characters as well, and the art is really good :D Although, to be honest, the mums sprite looks kinda weird, like she's standing awkwardly.
Anyways, looking forward to the full version :)
by TakeOverWorld
Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:47 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: India's got talent
Replies: 7
Views: 735

Re: India's got talent

Jesus Christ... That woman judge's expressions were basically like mine. Wow. Why would you do that??
by TakeOverWorld
Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:20 pm
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: My Art
Replies: 18
Views: 3052

Re: Learning to draw/color... opinions needed please

The first image I did about a month ago, the second was my fix for it a few days ago: The thing about this picture is that you've used coloured lineart for some bits, then just plain black for her coat and the guy, which IMO does cause the picture to look a bit strange. But, like droopy said, using...
by TakeOverWorld
Thu Oct 27, 2011 10:00 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: (P)lanets 2 - the life of happiness has started! [otome]
Replies: 139
Views: 36013

Re: (P)lanets 2 - the life of happiness has started! [otome]

Ah, I'm looking forward to this :D The new features sound great, good luck with this :)
by TakeOverWorld
Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:22 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: When and Why did you start writing?
Replies: 18
Views: 1357

Re: When and Why did you start writing?

I can't remember exactly, but, the time I think I really started getting into this writing thing, was becuase of my cousin, when I was like 7 or 8. He's 2 years older than me and was writing some story about a samuri or something, and I wanted to write a story so I did. One of the only storys I've f...
by TakeOverWorld
Wed Oct 19, 2011 11:51 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Who/What influenced your style of drawing?
Replies: 80
Views: 15965

Re: Who/What influenced your style of drawing?

I think it was probably Natsuki Takaya who influenced my style of drawing, for the most part. I didn't really draw that much before I was 7, but then my sister bought Fruits Basket around then, and I loved the style. I'd watched Sailor Moon and Dragonball Z before that, IIRC, but maybe it was becaus...