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by Kuiper
Tue Jun 23, 2015 3:21 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Sanderson's Second Law of Magic
Replies: 2
Views: 1008

Sanderson's Second Law of Magic

A few years back, fantasy author Brandon Sanderson (Mistborn, Wheel of Time, Stormlight Archive) wrote a series of essays describing laws of magic systems. In the second of these essays, Sanderson posits that limitations are of greater importance than powers when it comes to effective magic systems....
by Kuiper
Thu Jun 11, 2015 11:55 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How Does Payment Work While Paying People
Replies: 4
Views: 742

Re: How Does Payment Work While Paying People

Its either you pay first or they work and you pay later? The two payment arrangements I've commonly observed are: 1. Payment upon delivery of services. (This usually happens in situations where the buyer is an established entity, and can provide references, etc., with comparatively more credibility...
by Kuiper
Thu Jun 04, 2015 4:11 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: What should writers charge?
Replies: 2
Views: 1029

Re: What should writers charge?

First off, you need to consider what side of the application process you are on. Are people coming to you, asking you specifically to write for your project? If so, then it's helpful to have a classified saying "Here are my rates, and here is the kind of work I will accept." But if you're ...
by Kuiper
Tue May 26, 2015 7:24 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The quagmire of the harem protagonist
Replies: 13
Views: 2952

Re: The quagmire of the harem protagonist

This post I made in a different forum speaks some to the point about "bland" protagonists--most harem protagonists tend to be designed as "self insert" characters for the audience, and by necessity tend to be as featureless and plain as possible. However, this kind of character d...
by Kuiper
Mon May 25, 2015 2:07 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Archetyping without Stereotyping
Replies: 22
Views: 3729

Re: Archetyping without Stereotyping

I think it's valuable (and often important) to create unique and distinct cultures. But you can often run into problems when you don't properly separate the characteristics of a culture from the characteristics of individual characters. Fail to do this, and you wind up with characters that are walki...
by Kuiper
Mon May 11, 2015 1:35 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Unlikeable Male Chars [Closed]
Replies: 23
Views: 3608

Re: Do I need to change the male characters?

One way that you can make devious characters more sympathetic is by having them use their powers for good. You describe the characters as a "bunch of jerks" for resorting to insults, lying, blackmail, and violence, but these are tools that could also be used to defend the weak (for example...
by Kuiper
Mon May 04, 2015 6:51 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Visual Novels... With Expository Non-Fiction Writing?
Replies: 11
Views: 1664

Re: Visual Novels... With Expository Non-Fiction Writing?

To take things in a completely different direction, you could try writing creative nonfiction--that is, nonfiction writing that is focused on conveying a narrative and applies the sensibilities of fiction writing (while still staying factually accurate). Many journalistic pieces fall into this. For ...
by Kuiper
Thu Apr 30, 2015 2:58 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Preferences on writing methods
Replies: 7
Views: 1991

Re: Preferences on writing methods

I hear that usually writers would start outlining plots and characters first, then begin writing the manuscript for their fictions/novels. This is common (especially for larger speculative works, like science fiction and fantasy), but not universal. Stephen King is famous for never writing off an o...
by Kuiper
Thu Mar 26, 2015 10:06 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Trial by Fire [Comedy][Courtroom Drama][NaNoRenO 2015]
Replies: 3
Views: 2042

Re: Trial by Fire [Comedy][Courtroom Drama][NaNoRenO 2015]

Looks somewhat educational. ^^ I'll be looking forward to this. Thanks! I hope you enjoy the finished product once it's released. Just a fair warning, I hope you don't go in expecting something too educational. I'm writing the story as a somewhat cartoonish caricature of the actual court systems, i...
by Kuiper
Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:23 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Dialogues in VN
Replies: 25
Views: 4907

Re: Dialogues in VN

I'd be interested in everyone's opinions on some VNs that you feel have really really good dialogue (both commercial and free). For us new writers, seeing examples of something that is very well done can really help :) It's more ADV than traditional VN, but I've always felt that the localization Ca...
by Kuiper
Thu Feb 05, 2015 1:12 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How much control would you want as co-author
Replies: 9
Views: 1781

Re: How much control would you want as co-author

If you are a co-author would you like to write being limited, having to follow plot points and possible endings or would you like to write with control over what happens in the route? It's going to vary from person to person, so I'd recommend discussing this topic in some amount of detail with the ...
by Kuiper
Mon Jan 12, 2015 3:56 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to write an Interesting Slice of Life Story
Replies: 13
Views: 17091

Re: How to write an Interesting Slice of Life Story

"Conflict" is pretty foundational to storytelling, even when it comes to stories without a lot of drama or high stakes. It can simply mean that we have a status quo, and one or more characters who are unsatisfied with that status quo and working to change it. Sometimes, the status quo is &...
by Kuiper
Tue Dec 30, 2014 10:32 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Fanbase before or after demo release? Or after Kickstarter?
Replies: 27
Views: 6051

Re: Fanbase before or after demo release? Or after Kickstart

I think it might be helpful to ask more generally, "What is a fan?" Or, "what makes a fan?" Generally, in every case where I've been a "fan" of a franchise or creator, it's because 1) they created something that I enjoyed and 2) that thing built up my anticipation of fu...
by Kuiper
Mon Dec 22, 2014 10:56 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Organization in writing?
Replies: 7
Views: 1729

Re: Organization in writing?

George R.R. Martin describes these two writing approaches as "architecture" and "gardening." "I think there are two types of writers, the architects and the gardeners. The architects plan everything ahead of time, like an architect building a house. They know how many rooms ...
by Kuiper
Mon Dec 22, 2014 10:28 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Looking for critique/Feedback!
Replies: 5
Views: 1346

Re: Looking for critique/Feedback!

One thing that's pretty foundation to fiction writing is the idea of viewpoint. Generally, the most common viewpoints we see employed in fiction are first person, third person limited, and third person omniscient. (There are also other viewpoints, like the second-person narrative that some interacti...