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by Zelan
Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:41 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: [Comedy][Romance][Yandere]Pervert and Yandere-New endings!
Replies: 34
Views: 26466

Re: Pervert and Yandere

I actually noticed your thread in the Beta Testing section way back when, but I had so much on my plate at the time that I didn't really have any time to devote to your game. (I didn't even leave a comment there - apologies for that.) I'll put this on my list and get around to it eventually, but I c...
by Zelan
Fri Oct 14, 2016 10:39 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: A Massive, Collaborative Visual Novel-- with a twist!
Replies: 49
Views: 6176

Re: A Massive, Collaborative Visual Novel-- with a twist!

"Western" doesn't have to mean blonde. He could also be a brunette or even a redhead. Black hair may be a little less common but it isn't impossible.

Maybe he's even dyed his hair some crazy color, who knows?
by Zelan
Fri Oct 14, 2016 10:28 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [IndieGoGo LIVE] Nusantara:Bermuda Triangle [GxB]
Replies: 597
Views: 982521

Re: Nusantara:Bermuda Triangle Genre [GxB] [Fantasy] [Advent

3. Will you guys be happy if I add a route to romance the antagonist?

It would be interesting, definitely. But you'd have to make sure it made sense - Maya's friends would probably warn her away from him, for example, and probably the overall tone would be different. It's a cool idea!
by Zelan
Thu Oct 13, 2016 9:57 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: her mouth is full of sharp teeth [romance/horror/fantasy]
Replies: 7
Views: 1607

Re: her mouth is full of sharp teeth [romance/horror/fantasy

But she made sure he wouldn't stray.

Her heart, she ate while he slept in their marriage bed.

The rest of him, she saved for their new home.

And he never left her.
This part is confusing - have you mixed up some pronouns or am I just being dense?
by Zelan
Thu Oct 13, 2016 9:45 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)
Replies: 42
Views: 9373

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

oh DANG dramaaaa

Personally, I'm not a huge fan of piercings or gages, but they work well with his design. And I love his tattoos ^_^
by Zelan
Wed Oct 12, 2016 11:47 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Arena Circus [GxB][BxB][GxG][Fantasy] Beta update 4/27, ch 4 coming soon!
Replies: 256
Views: 75537

Re: Arena Circus [GxB][BxB][GxG][Fantasy] DEMO AVAILABLE (1.

The tree is so pretty! :D Congrats on finishing the writing for Chapter 2!
by Zelan
Tue Oct 11, 2016 10:23 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: </reality> [Sci-Fi][Fantasy][Philosophy] Demo Available
Replies: 48
Views: 11331

Re: </reality> [Sci-Fi][Fantasy][Philosophical][Light GxB/Bx

I was already interested in the plot, but the updated version is even better in my opinion. It does a better job at highlighting the problems that Lilya will face, and addresses what NaiDriftlin pointed out about the supposed shadiness of the developers. I also like that it emphasizes the philosophi...
by Zelan
Tue Oct 11, 2016 5:34 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Maid Mansion [BxG] [Eroge/Dating Sim/Romance] [RELEASED ON 11/13/20!!]
Replies: 100
Views: 33093

Re: Maid Mansion [BxG] [Eroge/Dating Sim/Romance] [Commercia

I feel like this has probably already been addressed since these are old samples, but just in case it hasn't: the quit screen should say 'want' rather than 'like.'

Other than that, the GUI looks great. :]
by Zelan
Tue Oct 11, 2016 5:30 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: </reality> [Sci-Fi][Fantasy][Philosophy] Demo Available
Replies: 48
Views: 11331

Re: </reality> [Sci-Fi][Fantasy][Philosophical][Light GxB, B

Does the story interest you? Why or why not? It does. It should be noted that I consume media like there's no tomorrow, so it's not difficult to write a description that'll catch my interest. VR is always an interesting subject, though, especially considering that we're getting closer to it every da...
by Zelan
Tue Oct 11, 2016 4:46 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: List of Visual Novel Genres/Types/Terms?
Replies: 15
Views: 19276

Re: List of Visual Novel Genres/Types/Terms?

Thanks so much for these clarifications. I wasn't aware of most of these details. After reading your post, I realized I could actually update the tags on my game to GxB and BxG, although that seems a bit odd... however, there are two perspective characters in my game, one male and one female. And t...
by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:34 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Islamic Media looking for artists
Replies: 3
Views: 1028

Re: Islamic Media looking for artists

I hate to be the one to break it to you, but I think the reason you haven't gotten any responses is because of your studio name. There's also just the fact that BG and CG artists are hard to come by, especially for free projects. Maybe it's just me, but it wasn't the name that turned me off from th...
by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:24 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: List of Visual Novel Genres/Types/Terms?
Replies: 15
Views: 19276

Re: List of Visual Novel Genres/Types/Terms?

Something that can be confusing if you're not initially aware of it is the difference between BxG and GxB. The one that comes first is the gender of the player character (i.e. otomes are GxB). It's a little thing, but it makes a huge difference in terms of what some people will play. Also - I don't ...
by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:13 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Trial of Reynard the Fox [KN | Dark Comedy | Folklore]
Replies: 14
Views: 3757

Re: The Trial of Reynard the Fox [KN | Dark Comedy | Folklor

I love the sketches, especially the headshot of Reynard - that expression is amazing. His Majesty reminds me a little bit of Mufasa, but also of King Leonardo from that one bit that used to sometimes air in between episodes of the 60s Underdog cartoon. I disagree with Fuseblower on the clothes - I l...
by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:59 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Welcome to Intergalactic High! [BxG][VN/RPG][Sci-fi][2018]
Replies: 56
Views: 9439

Re: Welcome to Intergalactic High! [BxG][VN/RPG][Sci-fi][Fre

The main character is looking good! ^_^ About that peace sign pose, his left hand (on his hip) looks a little awkward. It's actually something that I see a lot on this forum - artists, even pretty good artists, seem to have trouble with hands on hips. The worst part is that I can't explain what's of...
by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:53 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)
Replies: 42
Views: 9373

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

OMG I LOVE POTOUTO SO MUCH

i wish i had money to hire them :') and also a project oops