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by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:41 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Fever☆Dream Saga [BxB][YaoiJam ・ Sci-Fantasy]
Replies: 30
Views: 7543

Re: Fever☆Dream Saga [BxB][YaoiJam ・ Sci-Fantasy]

Oooh, I love when the title screen changes after getting certain endings! It's such a nifty feature.~ I'd offer to beta-test for you, but I'm not comfortable with 18+ content and I'm sure that needs testing, too. cx Not sure I'd have time, anyway, what with school and all. :/ Good luck finding your ...
by Zelan
Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:38 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Owl-Woman Oracle [tarot reading simulator] OUT NOW ON ITCH
Replies: 84
Views: 15950

Re: The Owl-Woman Oracle [tarot reading simulator]

I would be interested in owning a set of your tarot cards, but since I don't really have a way to pay for things online, it's a bit of a moot point for me. :/

The Succubus card looks amazing! ^_^ I love how the succubus and the owl are both albino.
by Zelan
Sat Oct 08, 2016 11:59 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Welcome to Intergalactic High! [BxG][VN/RPG][Sci-fi][2018]
Replies: 56
Views: 9446

Re: Welcome to Intergalactic High! [BxG][VN/RPG][Sci-fi][Fre

Yeah, I'm sure that they don't always get it perfectly right. cx I would say that you could make one side look like it's only partially folded. The left side looks perfect, so it wouldn't really be physically possible for the other side to be longer, but it could be up higher than it's supposed to b...
by Zelan
Sat Oct 08, 2016 11:46 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Visual Novel test
Replies: 15
Views: 2624

Re: Visual Novel test

The game freezes for me after only a few text boxes - right after the main character says that we're at his/her stop.

There were some sentences that were awkward and/or grammatically incorrect. I would suggest finding a proofreader.
by Zelan
Sat Oct 08, 2016 11:42 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Would you like to check my art?
Replies: 7
Views: 1154

Re: Would you like to check my art?

Oh my gooosh your art is so pretty! owo I legit teared up for a second looking at it.
by Zelan
Sat Oct 08, 2016 11:39 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Welcome to Intergalactic High! [BxG][VN/RPG][Sci-fi][2018]
Replies: 56
Views: 9446

Re: Welcome to Intergalactic High! [BxG][VN/RPG][Sci-fi][Fre

The right side of his collar looks like it's longer than the other side. I think you were trying to go for a perspective thing, but it's a little bit too long. The right hand also looks a little stiff. It's definitely shaped right, though, and I know that a lot of artists hate drawing hands, so I wo...
by Zelan
Fri Oct 07, 2016 10:53 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: NaNoRenO Game Show (feat. many insanely fun VNs)
Replies: 38
Views: 4990

Re: NaNoRenO Game Show (feat. many insanely fun VNs)

I have no idea who Paige is going to pick, but I'll go ahead and say Bo-Peep - maybe because Bo-Peep seems like a powerful type who's often underestimated? Concerning Cecil vs. Banality Man - I love Cecil to death, but I feel like it's going to have to be Banality Man for this one. His fists are obj...
by Zelan
Fri Oct 07, 2016 8:55 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Royally Horrible (Otome, Humor)
Replies: 12
Views: 4965

Re: Royally Horrible (Otome, Humor)

"leave him forever
yes
no"
i have lost the ability to coherently respond to things
by Zelan
Fri Oct 07, 2016 8:52 pm
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: Without a Voice [Yuri Jam 2016]
Replies: 9
Views: 5399

Re: Without a Voice [Yuri Jam 2016]

Lorelei + Laniessa = yes please. I will definitely be keeping an eye on this thread.
by Zelan
Fri Oct 07, 2016 8:40 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Short, horror game suggestions?
Replies: 11
Views: 1771

Re: Short, horror game suggestions?

The Knife of the Traitor Night at The Hospital I had thought about suggesting The Knife of the Traitor (it was my third VN ever and still one of my favorites), but I decided against it because it wasn't really *that* horror-like - just some bloody bad ends and darker themes throughout. I realize no...
by Zelan
Fri Oct 07, 2016 8:33 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Mirt [Mystery|Drama|Thriller|Magical realism]
Replies: 17
Views: 3663

Re: Mirt [Mystery|Drama|Thriller|Magical realism]

Thank you! I still need feedback, every correction would be really helpful. In that case, here you go: 1. In Mark's quote, his speech is too casual, compared to the other quotes. It should be either "What are you gonna do when it all comes out?" (still somewhat casual), "What are you...
by Zelan
Fri Oct 07, 2016 6:37 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Maid Mansion [BxG] [Eroge/Dating Sim/Romance] [RELEASED ON 11/13/20!!]
Replies: 100
Views: 33157

Re: Maid Mansion [BxG] [Eroge/Dating Sim/Romance] [Commercia

Question that I forgot to ask before - do you plan to implement any mature filter? I'll *sometimes* play a game with sex scenes without one. Katawa Shoujo, for example, had a mature filter which removed the scenes entirely, and I decided I'd rather read through them due to their importance in the s...
by Zelan
Thu Oct 06, 2016 7:51 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Short, horror game suggestions?
Replies: 11
Views: 1771

Re: Short, horror game suggestions?

Paramedium: A Noise in the Attic is one that I recently downloaded but haven't gotten around to playing yet. Judging by the screenshots and a quick looks at the comments, though, it seems like it's a pretty decent narrative-driven horror game. Nachtigal is a little bit of a stretch, so if you do ch...
by Zelan
Thu Oct 06, 2016 5:44 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Maid Mansion [BxG] [Eroge/Dating Sim/Romance] [RELEASED ON 11/13/20!!]
Replies: 100
Views: 33157

Re: Maid Mansion [BxG] [Eroge/Dating Sim/Romance] [Commercia

Question that I forgot to ask before - do you plan to implement any mature filter? I'll *sometimes* play a game with sex scenes without one. Katawa Shoujo, for example, had a mature filter which removed the scenes entirely, and I decided I'd rather read through them due to their importance in the st...
by Zelan
Wed Oct 05, 2016 4:16 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [IndieGoGo LIVE] Nusantara:Bermuda Triangle [GxB]
Replies: 597
Views: 994869

Re: Nusantara:Bermuda TriangleGenre [GxB] [Fantasy] [Adventu

Oh my goodness, this looks amazing and the art looks gorgeous! I haven't gotten around to playing your first one yet, but I really need to. cx

(Maya and I have the same birthday! ^_^)