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by salis
Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:03 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Third Ingredient
Replies: 15
Views: 16382

Re: The Third Ingredient

When I saw this was based on one of O.Henry’s stories, I looked forward to how you would interoperate his writing. I find his work very entertaining, but his writing can get lengthy and confusing sometimes to those unfamiliar with his style, so I was a bit disappointed at seeing that the writing is ...
by salis
Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:12 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: WIP ~The Reason I Exist~ (GxB)
Replies: 13
Views: 2032

Re: WIP ~The Reason I Exit~

The story and characters sound interesting already! I'm looking forward to playing this! I really like the idea of the main character being a healer. Will she have a name or are you going to allow the player to choose one? Also, any estimate of how long the VN will be? If it's your first VN, I'd try...
by salis
Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:20 pm
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Available Voices (LSF Voice Bank)
Replies: 24
Views: 4340

Re: Available Voices (LSF Voice Bank)

@Harumi Fujyoshi - Your welcome, and thanks! I’ll keep training and hopefully I'll be able to change my voice to fit characters better. Voice acting is a whole lot harder than I thought, but it's fun! Me too! I can only voice act in Japanese. :( @okonomiyaki - You and Chaiue should record yourselves...
by salis
Tue Dec 07, 2010 1:12 pm
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Calling all sprite makers
Replies: 2
Views: 533

Re: Calling all sprite makers

If you want to recruit an artist, it might be better to post in the Works in Progress & Recruitment forum , I think. Also, giving a bit more information, like a short summary of what your game is about, what genre it is, what type of art style you're going for, and whether or not you're asking f...
by salis
Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:54 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Dating sim games- how many romantic interests do you like?
Replies: 45
Views: 3907

Re: Dating sim games- how many romantic interests do you lik

Good question, Fawn. I'd have to say I think 3 romantic interests is best, too. It keeps things simple, but still interesting. 5 is also fun, but anything over that and I start to forget their names.
by salis
Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:00 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Curious Alliance (fantasy game)
Replies: 14
Views: 11855

Re: The Curious Alliance (fantasy game)

The Curious Alliance is one of the sweetest kinetic novels I've played in a long time! It was creative, exciting, funny, heartwarming, cute, and well executed. Terrific job! Your writing style is great, and so was the story! There were a few times that I got hung up on some of the sentences, but not...
by salis
Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:42 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Be A man
Replies: 4
Views: 2426

Re: Be A man

First, congratulations on completing your first visual novel! It wasn’t bad for what it was, but as Applegate said, there’s definitely room for improvement. The overall feeling of the game feels rushed, so here’s a list of a few things you might want to work on: It was a nice, short story, but there...
by salis
Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:16 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Anyone need a Composer? *Updated Samples :)*
Replies: 8
Views: 1504

Re: Anyone need a Composer? *Updated Samples :)*

Wow, I just want to say your work is extremely professional! I was especially impressed with "dungeon" and "dark bells." The pacing and synthetic sounds of both are really great. And even though it isn't finished yet, "sunset" is a beautiful piano piece. If I meet anyon...
by salis
Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:57 pm
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Available Voices (LSF Voice Bank)
Replies: 24
Views: 4340

Re: Available Voices (LSF Voice Bank)

Those are some prime voices, morhighan! I love your sweet voice the most! Your rhythm in the way you speak is really beautiful! Wow! Everyone's voices here are so great! It's fun to hear the different types and styles. I love your "Boooored..." one, umemi! And whoa, both you and Harumi Fuj...
by salis
Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:38 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Aquae ~Crystal Clear Waters~ Arc II - Ocean Tide v1.0
Replies: 37
Views: 35039

Re: Aquae ~Crystal Clear Waters~ Arc II - Ocean Tide v1.0

Both arcs are fantastic! Aquae has such a gripping storyline, great characters, good art, and tons of originality. I enjoyed Arc II - Ocean Tide just as much as the first and I’m really looking forward to playing the third installment. :D The story is very well written and intriguing. The second arc...
by salis
Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:17 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Sour Prince
Replies: 24
Views: 31154

Re: Sour Prince

Like many here I'm usually not one for playing kinetic novels, but yours has changed my view on the matter entirely. Sour Prince is delightful; the dialogue is charming and well written and had me laughing out loud several times, (especially at, "My inner pride? Well, it just died.") it ha...