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by magbie
Mon Nov 05, 2012 6:21 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 557705

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Eh... When I stop writing script(first draft), I'll post a WIP. Haven't done any art yet beside sketches, I'm trying to get plot together :w I feel I can do this, and It's strange I'm so confident, since: a)I'm not a writer b)That's my first vn >.> c)English isn't my first language d)Coding I'm spen...
by magbie
Sun Nov 04, 2012 4:14 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Dolls' Stories
Replies: 60
Views: 14307

Re: The Dolls' Stories

Sure, I can spare a moment. Let's see: Maledoll route: 1. It's a small thing but in maledoll route when you get to the market and explain selling and buying, there should be a paraphrase, precisely with the words like goods and haggling (stuff, things, merchandise) 2. Like I said before, reasons to ...
by magbie
Fri Nov 02, 2012 3:58 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 557705

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Heh, it's opposite with me: when I was 15 I was being mistaken for 19
When I was 17 I heard I look like 27 :-:
At least I could always get a beer
by magbie
Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:20 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Witch Apprentice (Oct 31st update: Demo up on page 3)
Replies: 112
Views: 30699

Re: Witch Apprentice (Oct 31st update: Demo up on page 3)

That was fun :D Panties was definitely a star of this show (though Cassandra tried to steal his spotlight ^^).
Can't wait to play the full game
by magbie
Wed Oct 31, 2012 6:59 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Dolls' Stories
Replies: 60
Views: 14307

Re: The Dolls' Stories

Hey, after replaying your demo I thought about something regarding your conversation system and MC. I also think you should allow more paraphrases (like in case of "shut up" in maledoll route) and shouldn't force unnecessary characterization (being a soldier because "one must eat"...
by magbie
Wed Oct 31, 2012 6:47 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What is your type?
Replies: 167
Views: 18344

Re: What is your type?

Yeah, I get it. Good luck btw. :)
by magbie
Wed Oct 31, 2012 9:59 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Do you know what your bloodtype is?
Replies: 80
Views: 9951

Re: Do you know what your bloodtype is?

0 -
Not sure if they'll want my blood tho, things were happening with my health lately : /
by magbie
Wed Oct 31, 2012 9:48 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What is your type?
Replies: 167
Views: 18344

Re: What is your type?

@ashen: So your saying your a half half.....your heart is a boy's but your a girl? Or wrong thought? @Junna: I agree with you .We will only call ashen a boy when SHE changes HER gender.. @Magbie:That's a nice question......But really.....what pronouns DO they use to describe you?(Even though ,It's ...
by magbie
Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:31 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Symphonie des Rêves! [GxB & GxG][Otome]
Replies: 171
Views: 54025

Re: Symphonie des Rêves! [GxB & GxG][Otome-ish!]

Way better :) I think that's a winner. Especially since that uncluttered clattered version looks even worse then original. It isn't distracting anymore, but there's no sense of symmetry there, and maybe text is too big, and this remaining letter decorations are unnecessary and get in the way But wel...
by magbie
Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:17 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What is your type?
Replies: 167
Views: 18344

Re: What is your type?

AshenhartKrie wrote:Michi, I'm a girl, but I'm bi. I also consider myself a boy, even though I am biologically a girl.
What are your pronouns then?
by magbie
Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:10 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Dolls' Stories
Replies: 60
Views: 14307

Re: The Dolls' Stories

it was really fun to play :D i hope you'll finish this Also I love this conversation system. Being able to choose the wording makes a huge difference in playing and roleplaying. Conversations with dolls, when they ask questions are a bit tedious and annoying so they work fine (every one who had a yo...
by magbie
Mon Oct 29, 2012 10:48 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Symphonie des Rêves! [GxB & GxG][Otome]
Replies: 171
Views: 54025

Re: Symphonie des Rêves! [GxB & GxG][Otome-ish!]

I vote for third :)
The simplier the better
True, it could be smoother but at least I know what to look at :) the decorations in first are really distracting
by magbie
Thu Oct 25, 2012 5:07 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: (P)lanets - the life of normalcy has ended!
Replies: 489
Views: 357840

Re: (P)lanets - the life of normalcy has ended!

Yay, thanks :D Ok, maybe "punishing" is too much(waay), but still some other ending then perfect one would be nice :P Like in "Remember me", along with perfect one that you had to grind some skill hard for, was also a normal one (I always preferred that kind of ending, so that's ...
by magbie
Sun Oct 21, 2012 7:50 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Dreams
Replies: 82
Views: 8643

Re: Dreams

My dreams for the past few weeks have been a strange conglomeration of Mass Effect 2 and Beauty and the Beast. Surprisingly, it works out well. Shepard makes a very convincing Gaston. The weirdest part is that usually Jack is Belle. :shock: Jack as a Belle would make me really happy, I always thoug...
by magbie
Sat Oct 20, 2012 9:25 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 557705

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Heh, thanks anyway.

"Know what I'm doing" yeah that's me.

I guess communication is a key to everything.