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Hi there, just wanted to give my little bit of feedback from what I read. 1-I do like the premise of the boy with a cold heart and the chairman trying to get him to be kind again, that's a great and compelling setting. However if it turns out to be just that and it plays out like some dating simulat...

Alright so I've been messing around with sprites on my spare time to look for the best workflow. I came up with this: http://oi67.tinypic.com/2vrxs8j.jpg I think it looks way better, I completelly redesigned her look to fit better the necessities of the visual novels (popping more from the backgroun...

There has been a change in the workflow. If any of you find that you can't make suggestions in the chapters, that's normal. Instead of that, download/copy the chapter that you wish to proofread and work on that separate file. After you make all of your suggestions, you can send it back to me so I ca...

Hi Mommon, I already sent you a link to the chapters through PM here. About feedback on the post, I agree with you in many things. For instance shorter, different posts for each job would be better, I didn't want to do it as to not flood the recruitment forum but if that's not a problem, then I will...

I would like to volunteer as both a proofreader and a voice actor. Though I don't have the best mic in the world, it is still good quality, and I can do a range of voices for you. Plus I am fluent in English (it is my native language, after all). If you'd like my help, please email me at ourdarkest...

Soulless Creatures is a kinetic novel being developed entirely by me at the time. Here is some information about the project for a start. -----------Genres----------- Fantasy, Vampires, Monster Girl, Romance, Horror, Mystery. -----------Sinopsis----------- Set somewhere in England during the victor...

Both are pretty great styles (honestly, I'm really impressed with your art skills and your dedication). Ultimately, I think that I like the first style the best when compared with the backgrounds. The clean style is very pleasing to look at, but I would actually say that it stands out too much in c...

Personally, I still quite like the style of the original sprites. I almost feel like the style that you've used would work better for CGs than for sprites. However, it's hard for me to say for certain since I haven't seen an example of what the new style looks like on the backgrounds. Another thing...

I'm still testing with different ways to make sprites. I sort of dislike the flat texture the previous sprites had, cel-shading may look good on anime characters but I believe it doesn't look good for what I'm aiming for. I would rather aim for something more stylized and that has some texture to it...

The sprites look pretty good to me, very professional on the anime style, my only concern is, are the second and third sprites from the same character? Because they look very much alike but thye don't seem like the same character, and since the pose is the same and all, it's kind of distracting, but...

I don't know if this is an option since you didnt post it but, I think rather than a modern setting this could actually benefit from a SciFi setting, travelling between planets along the galaxy rather than locations in a single planet. That could solve some problems that Mammon mentioned since the u...

So I made a new draft of my intro and first chapter with the feedback I got. Posting it in here so people can see the differences better and can use this info for themselves. I think it's pretty interesting seeing the evolution of something. What I changed: -Removed awkard and forced exposition from...

Honestly they look pretty good, the colored lineart makes the lines not stand out more than they should, and you seem to have lots of sprite variations. Maybe try to have more different poses on the sprites since some of them look very similar and are always facing the left, and that may come as unr...

Yup, that about sums up my advice. c: I'm glad it was helpful to you, I wrote it pretty late at night and I wasn't sure if half of it made sense, haha. The name thing IS very subjective, like I said, so you don't really HAVE to change it, but I think a name like Drake (as you suggested) would fit t...

First, a couple grammatical corrections from the prologue: grafecully --> gracefully Watch how you use on and in . They're tough prepositions and easy to mix up between languages. In this case, you would use "dance in the moonlight," not "on the moonlight." Last line: "girl...