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- Wed May 27, 2015 10:26 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 6800
Re: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
I don't think it's a terrible idea to say, as a person with a valued opinion, "Can you give me feedback on your overall experience with this and anything else that will make the nearly completed project better?" I'm Not saying that you shouldn't ask for " feedback on your overall exp...
- Sat May 02, 2015 4:14 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: What Would You Want in a Detective VN?
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1950
Re: What Would You Want in a Detective VN?
Read about the rules of fairplay mysteries. If you decide those rules are not for you, decide how to indicate to the readers what rules they should be using instead. Mystery readers will be very angry if they expect a fair mystery and don't get one. THIS, absolutely. The Rules of Fair Play In 1930,...
- Fri May 01, 2015 4:37 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
- Replies: 74
- Views: 32418
Re: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
I had a ton of fun with this game, great job!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've come across these Jungian type analysis things-- in one of my lectures, our professor took us through something like this. This was a lot more in depth, though! Great job. Thank you. I first ran across the test while I was...
- Sun Apr 19, 2015 9:53 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
- Replies: 74
- Views: 32418
Re: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
This game was gorgeous. Thanks to you, I've got to know my thoughts and my mind better. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the game! I thought it would be a few obvious answer questions or "choose from the underneath symbols", so it made quite an impression on me when in the beginning the backgroun...
- Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:36 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
- Replies: 74
- Views: 32418
Re: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
I'm glad you enjoyed it!Ladyalexia wrote:Love this game. It was. Also it pinpoint at most things.
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 8:40 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Which kind of genre?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1263
Re: Which kind of genre?
I'm expected to write four stories for my visual novel, but I'm having a hard time deciding what kind of genre should I choose for my first story. I know this is a weird question, but I need suggestions: -If you were to play my visual novel, would you like the first story to be a sci-fi comedy or a...
- Sun Apr 05, 2015 6:40 am
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Is it possible to make an assessment quiz on Ren'py?
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1169
Re: Is it possible to make an assessment quiz on Ren'py?
I know it's possible to make quizes and games, but instead of "yes/no" questions, I was wondering if it'd be possible to make questions like... "what's your favorite color?" and "what sign are you?" then in the end, have a result based off the choices you make. sorry, ...
- Wed Mar 25, 2015 1:01 am
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Customizing the namebox
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2784
Re: Customizing the namebox
Hi there! Thanks a lot for the very specific help! Right now I get the follow error when I try running the game after placing that piece of text in the right spot (with the right spacing) in options.rpy: File "game/options.rpy", line 131: invalid syntax style say_label: First, swap the co...
- Mon Mar 23, 2015 9:21 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Customizing the namebox
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2784
Re: Customizing the namebox
. . . I want my namebox to be a different from my regular textbox (they are using two different PNG files and have different margins/padding etc. The problem is I don't know where in the script I should customize the namebox. And then once I've customized that namebox, will I have to use something ...
- Mon Mar 23, 2015 2:10 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: What was your first VN made like?
- Replies: 30
- Views: 4771
Re: What was your first VN made like?
I made a practice VN.... today. Just to learn the program. I got a good Idea how it works... sortive.... off topic. . . . So what was yours like? My first completed VN was Torrey & the Vampire R-18!!! , an adult kinetic story using doctored images from MorgueFiles and other free image places. B...
- Sun Mar 22, 2015 11:25 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: How to write characters that people love in a short time?
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5070
Re: How to write characters that people love in a short time
Simplest way? There's a formula for creating character sympathy. Use a combination of the nine following ingredients. You need at least 5 of them. Using 6-7 of them is best. (Taken and paraphrased from Eric Edson's The Story Solution - seriously, go buy it.) Excellent advice. (Adding to notes.) -- ...
- Sat Mar 21, 2015 10:52 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Improving romance in games with rivalry and respect
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1532
Re: Improving romance in games with rivalry and respect
I really like his model for building a comedic romantic relationship. -- It's very different from the typical (boring) stat-building style; by simply saying what the character wants to hear, or outright bribery with dates and gifts. However, it would be quite challenging to create this, mainly becau...
- Sat Mar 21, 2015 1:50 am
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: The Last Hunt [Huntress/Magic Horse]
- Replies: 18
- Views: 4448
Re: The Last Hunt [Huntress/Magic Horse]
This story sounds and looks awesome so far!
-- I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it. ♥
-- I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it. ♥
- Sat Mar 21, 2015 1:44 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
- Replies: 74
- Views: 32418
Re: The Walk [Psychological][NaNoWinter 2015]
Okay, so I don't know if you still remember or not, but I've actually made the review . . . and I hope you like it. http://ernestalice15.tumblr.com/tagged/visual%20novel I'm honored that you took the time to review my little game, and I did indeed enjoy reading it! -- I'm thrilled that you enjoyed ...
- Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:26 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: How to Plan?
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1493
Re: How to Plan?
If you want to plan out a visual novel, there are a great many posts that cover this. You can find them if you use the search box. (It's at the bottom of Creator Discussion page.) search: multi path game Path structures: -- http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=16825&hilit=mul...