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Uh, I noticed that nowhere in the first post have you written a summary. I'm one of those people who cares more about the story than the characters, so currently, this holds no appeal. You might want to add a basic synopsis or blurb or something.

A simple guy who's been dragged into more than his fair share of not-so-simple things. He enjoys video games, fighting stupidity on the interwebs, and thinking of himself as a hopeless romantic. For some reason, I think you were describing yourself here. If I'm wrong, forgive me, but as a lesson to...

Some Cut scenes and Bg done in Windows Movie Maker, BAD IDEA. Please don't. Please don't. Pleaaase don't. There are freeware video editors. Don't use WMM. It has no features, no polished look, no SOUL. Just have someone else make it for you or something. There are some people here who would be more...

I love this art! You've got a player in me~ Aw man, the art looks awesome, I'm jealous >< I think it might be a little clunky to manually choose which PoV to read, but that's just me. I know True Remembrance did the whole alternating point of view thing, but it was different characters telling diffe...

Shiro Tsubasa (means White Wing in Japanese - angels are usually shown having white wings. just a little trivia fact) To be more accurate, it means something a little bit more like "The Color White Wing". That is, "shiro" is white, the noun. "Shiroi" is white, the adje...

I might suggest renaming the "monthly curse". I thought it was a reference to the menstrual cycle. Haven't played yet.

and You can listen the Radio in this Game, Japanese girls, Endlish Radio and Vocaloid's songs. What do you mean by the "radio"? Do you mean music or do you mean voice acting? Or is it something that's in the story? I think you might need a proofreader. I'm looking at the second screenshot...

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There's your answer. In short, no, you can't use their music.

That's why I asked him first. If he wants me to upload the BGs, I'll do it. If he doesn't, I won't. Those are BGs ripped from a game by my cousin, who's 22 years old. I told him I wanted some BGs, so he ripped it off from the game for me. I thought it's okay to use ripped BGs? Or it isn't? Well, if...

I personally like nice, boring characters. I can relate more to them than jerks. Maybe in the third person, I wouldn't mind a jerk protagonist, but I don't want to be stuck in a total bastard's head the whole story. Especially since, when I'm playing, I -am- that bastard. I make his choices and ever...

I got a few endings. Can't quite remember the names. I got the one with Jane and being killed by that flesh monster thingy, Relationship ending 5 (Gabrielle says that she can see the hallucinations too because they're connected or something), the one where she says she's unfit to be a psychiatrist o...

So why do you play games? I play games to do stuff I can't do in real life (with ease, or without consequences) or to be able to face situations that are unlikely. Haven't you ever wondered what you would do if you found out you were the Chosen One or what not? Or that every cute boy you came acros...

Damn it! I wanted to be the one to make a game called "The Game", for the sole purpose of causing people to lose The Game (if you don't know about The Game, go to "losethegame.com". To put it shortly, if you think about The Game, you lose.) But still...damn. And I just lost and I...

(Rhett, the red-haired dude, is the president of the Drama Club and is sort of meant to come off as a Miles Edgeworth-type character. I'd like to have around six or so drama club events with him, but so far I've only written one... any ideas? I was actually thinking of a really basic Phoenix Wright ...

Not to rush you, but you really should pick a name. Anything. A name is often what pulls people in. Especially here, where all you see is a thread title. Nobody will have any interest in a game called "Untitled VN project". It doesn't matter, lots of people end up changing the name before ...