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I just have to say... I love the way you draw noses.
Damn, that sounds creepy.

I clicked on this thread and I saw the character names, like 'Blue Berry' and I was thinking... what? But then I read the story summery and it all became clear. Sounds like a fun story.

Sounds interesting Personally, I think you should make it into a VN, but you know, it's your project, you can make it a KN if you want to.

Thanks for the responses, they made me happy :) Also, I don't really get how I can't go back to the store after Kyle said Evelyn could help with the joke contest. Thats all because I hadn't written anything for that yet. I have now, though. Not sure about what Kyle is holding in the title screen. I ...

Okay, this is my first VN game, so I was just getting used to the code and the way Renpy works in this, so thats why the story isn't incredibably ambitious at all. It isn't finished, and I doubt it will be, I would just like general feedback on it, please? :) Story You play as Evelyn, your everyday ...

Small improvements - Grammer and spelling . At the beggining he asked 'Where has everyone gone' but there was no question mark. And the friend says 'keep your figners crossed' which should be fingers. A bit of music might improve it , maybe?

Name's TakeOverWorld, or if you're not bothered to type all that out, its TOW. Location, England. MY deviantart: http://take-over-world.deviantart.com/ I mostly use the same username for most websites. I love reading visual novels and some of the art just blows me away. I'd love to hade done my own ...