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by Celestial_Toast
Mon Dec 19, 2016 2:56 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Circus of Soaring Dreams[GxB][Romance][ILUJam2015]
Replies: 6
Views: 10244

Re: Circus of Soaring Dreams[GxB][Romance][ILUJam2015]

Thanks for playing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, agreed it's simple; I didn't want to complicate things since I only had a month, but I'm glad it turned out well! Raphael's was the first route I wrote.
by Celestial_Toast
Mon Jul 13, 2015 7:26 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

Thanks for the tips!

Yeah, as far as coloring goes, I'm still pretty new to it, so it's a hit or miss.
by Celestial_Toast
Mon Jul 13, 2015 4:42 pm
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: Digital Colorist for hire (FREE) :D
Replies: 7
Views: 2778

Re: Digital Colorist for hire (FREE) :D

Hey, your work is so good! I'd love to hire you, if you're interested :) PM me if you are and I'll tell you about my project.
by Celestial_Toast
Sun Jul 12, 2015 2:40 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

I'll see what I can do about his hands. Thanks for your help! And I'll check out those tutorials for the coloring.
by Celestial_Toast
Thu Jul 09, 2015 2:59 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

I've changed the lines and added some shading to the sprite and updated it in my post.

I agree; the lines stuck out too much and separated him fro his clothes. However, I'm not sure what you mean by a lack of anatomical understanding? Is there anything off about his body structure?
by Celestial_Toast
Wed Jul 08, 2015 1:16 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

I redrew it on the iPad and think it's turned out much better. How does it look?
by Celestial_Toast
Tue Jul 07, 2015 8:03 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

Would it be possible to get better results with an iPad and a stylus?
by Celestial_Toast
Tue Jul 07, 2015 7:10 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

Oh. No, I do not have a drawing tablet, sorry.
by Celestial_Toast
Tue Jul 07, 2015 6:22 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique apprecia

Yeah, I'm using my laptop. It says that iOS version isn't available yet though, so I'm not sure how to use my iPad for it.
by Celestial_Toast
Tue Jul 07, 2015 12:49 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Re: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique welcome)

Thanks, I tried that program! I can already see the difference! Does it look better now? (Post updated with fixed sprite)

Anything else you think needs fixing?
by Celestial_Toast
Mon Jul 06, 2015 11:33 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)
Replies: 16
Views: 2103

Celestial Toast's Sprites(maybe more) (Critique appreciated)

Hi, for my new visual novel I've decided to make all the art on my own. This is my first time doing that and so I'd like to share it here and see if you guys have any comments or concerns about the way they look. This is mainly for sprites but I might expand it to post my BGs and CGs as well. I use ...
by Celestial_Toast
Sat Jul 04, 2015 12:33 am
Forum: Creative Commons
Topic: free music!
Replies: 39
Views: 11888

Re: free music!

Hi! Just wanted to give you the link to the game I used your lovely music in: http://celestial-toast.itch.io/circus-of-soaring-dreams

Thank you so much!
by Celestial_Toast
Fri Jul 03, 2015 3:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Rewind[?XB/G][Mystery][Suspense][Horror]
Replies: 3
Views: 3624

Re: Rewind[?XB/G][Mystery][Suspense][Horror]

Thank you! I suppose I'd classify this as more of a mystery/suspense with elements of horror, as opposed to totally horror. Hope you like it!
by Celestial_Toast
Fri Jul 03, 2015 4:56 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: No Longer Relevant
Replies: 7
Views: 1587

Re: Of Bloody Roses and Witches (Romance/Slight Fantasy/Free

Sounds good. Also, will we have to know anything about Land of Mist for this?
by Celestial_Toast
Thu Jul 02, 2015 9:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: No Longer Relevant
Replies: 7
Views: 1587

Re: Of Bloody Roses and Witches (Romance/Slight Fantasy/Free

2. Okay, I'll see what I can do with the text box. Actually, with the aligning, it cuts off stuffs if I make the font bigger. Cloudnovel's alignment works that way, I guess. Maybe consider splitting your paragraphs into smaller pieces? That might make it easier to read as well, if we aren't trying ...