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- Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:16 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Some writing for my first little game... Critique please ^_^
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5578
Re: Some writing for my first little game... Critique please
choppy in what way? Do I use too many periods in places where I should use a comma or a word that connects one sentence to another? Or... Yup. Too many periods makes me feel like the story is constantly stopping and going, lurching me forward and back when I want to cruise along. My 6th grade teach...
- Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:27 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Some writing for my first little game... Critique please ^_^
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5578
Re: Some writing for my first little game... Critique please
It's interesting enough, but there was just one thing that really bothered me... K "Seize your fire! Seize your fire! We've got a code TCR-f! I repeat we've got a code TCR-f!" I believe you were looking for "cease," as in stop. But I think you blend dialogue and narration very we...
- Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:15 am
- Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
- Topic: Best non japanese cartoons?
- Replies: 60
- Views: 9323
Re: Best non japanese cartoons?
And is Madoka good? Like, actually good, and not just hyped. I haven't watched it, because something about that art style just...irks me. I knew a lot of spoilers about the show prior to watching it, so I don't think I was able to enjoy it as much as I should have. Still, it was a decent anime with...
- Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:32 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Tonight [GxB]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 47063
Re: [Otome, WIP] Tonight - now with POLL and BLOG! :D
Wha- how can you think your game isn't hotly anticipated? All the art is done via mouse as opposed to a tablet, and it still looks freakin' beautiful! This must mean I'm not stalking you enough D: I must stalk you even moar ಠ__ಠ I think that the GUI looks sufficiently fancy and ornate enough, though...
- Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:19 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Creator's Corner Changes
- Replies: 14
- Views: 36727
Re: Creator's Corner Changes
Weren't we also talking about splitting up the Recruitment thread into separate sub-forums for writers, artists, programmers, etc.? It would help organize that place and stop unanswered posts from being buried. Also, I made a "Writing FAQs and Resources" thread in the Asset Creation: Writi...
- Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:04 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Discussion of Demographics of Forum Members
- Replies: 99
- Views: 11884
Re: Demographics of Forum Members
I'm pretty sure these results are going to be skewed anyway since not everyone is posting here :/ I don't know how to feel if there really is a 1:2 guys to girls ratio here either...
P.S. You already got my info counted in since I was Rewritten Ennui; new account doesn't mean a new person >_>
P.S. You already got my info counted in since I was Rewritten Ennui; new account doesn't mean a new person >_>
- Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:55 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: How to move text?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 543
Re: How to move text?
You're looking for NVL mode. Read more about it here.