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by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 3:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Comedy] [GxB,BxB, NBxB?]DEMO!!!
Replies: 31
Views: 6825

Re: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Parody] [Romance] honest critique p

nekobara wrote:.
Haha, the characters are still definitely a work in progress so they will develop a lot but yea, the cat guy is someone i really like too! my fav is probably the rich spoiled prince im finishing up drawing rn tho ill post him in a while B)
and nice, i will go for the 2nd person.
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 3:29 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?
Replies: 15
Views: 1715

Re: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person

Mammon wrote:From the same sample of that thread, I say it works well enough. I can't say whether it'll be good, but that depends on your writing skill rather than your choice of perspective. ;)
nice! thanks! it think i may try just going for it! theres no harm in trying anyway
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 1:56 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Comedy] [GxB,BxB, NBxB?]DEMO!!!
Replies: 31
Views: 6825

Re: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Parody] [Romance] honest critique p

Zelan wrote:I came here from your thread in Creator Discussion about 2nd person. Usually, I don't like it much either, but looking at your sample, I think it works perfectly here. ^_^ (Your writing is very funny, by the way.)
omg thank you! thats so cool to hear. im hoping the rest will be amusing too :D
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 1:34 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?
Replies: 15
Views: 1715

Re: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person

heres a post with an example of my code. https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=41579&p=436960#p436960 if any of you could read it and give me your opinion that would be really cool <3 i kinda feel the the 2nd person feels more.. cynical and i feel like that fits the parody-i...
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 1:29 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Doki Doki Soft Boys [Comedy] [GxB,BxB, NBxB?]DEMO!!!
Replies: 31
Views: 6825

Doki Doki Soft Boys [Comedy] [GxB,BxB, NBxB?]DEMO!!!

https://i.imgur.com/Ms8JmRn.png A story about a a protagonist with no specificied gender whos just very very lonely. Lonely enough to try to buy love from telemarket. What comes in a package is actually an empty damikura. But, is it really an error in printing? 4 love options. all cliche and cheap ...
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 1:14 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?
Replies: 15
Views: 1715

Re: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person

I don't like second person at all. I don't play games to be myself, or base customisable protagonists on myself, I see the protagonist as a character I'm creating and manipulating, and it makes me uncomfortable when the game essentially turns around and tells me that actually the protagonist is me....
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 12:50 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?
Replies: 15
Views: 1715

Re: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 3rd person

Personally I have no issue with 3rd person, as long as you don't do it in 2nd. Those tend to be a bit too annoying if I cannot actually immerge myself into the MC. But third person, I know plenty of stories like that and only in retrospect. Didn't even notice they were 1st or 3rd when I played them...
by glithch
Sun Dec 11, 2016 12:45 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?
Replies: 15
Views: 1715

Favourite point of view? what do you think of 2nd person?

I started a game and i already have like 2000 words but i noticed that,,, i dont know i should be writing it in that point of view.... pretty much no ones is using the second person and i dont know if i should be just rebelling against i like that. I think its kinda interestingbut i dunno. So what p...
by glithch
Sat Dec 10, 2016 8:44 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Cookbook
Topic: Mobile phone text-message system
Replies: 37
Views: 54404

Re: Mobile phone text-message system

! hello im wondering is it possible to have the phone sticking out further on the screen? i mean, i know it is lol, bt some tips on how to do that maybe? i managed to find how to have the phone itself further by editing the yalign of the transform phone pickup but i dont know how to fit the bubbles ...
by glithch
Wed Dec 07, 2016 6:22 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: point based events?
Replies: 3
Views: 615

Re: point based events?

So, you want to kind of restart counting the points in the second route playthrough; but still keep the points from the first one? You probably need more variables. Like instead of just "cat_points", you need a "cat_points_character1", "cat_points_character2", "ca...
by glithch
Tue Dec 06, 2016 1:21 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [Solved] making a game for android?
Replies: 2
Views: 720

Re: making a game for android?

you can make your game without thinking about android UI but still it would be better to make it for mobile touchscreen since default renpy buttons are very small. it is one time $25 dollars, if you live somewhere else it will still be $25 american dollars for that currency. This is the list that a...
by glithch
Tue Dec 06, 2016 12:42 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: point based events?
Replies: 3
Views: 615

point based events?

So i found this https://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/doc/cookbook/Point-Based_Endings but im having difficulties with understanding it. I did 1 one really simple game with points and if's but it was simple enoguh that i didnt need to get too far into it. what i did before was adding the init python: cat...
by glithch
Sun Dec 04, 2016 1:59 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [Solved] making a game for android?
Replies: 2
Views: 720

[Solved] making a game for android?

ok so i checked out some tutorials etc. and making your game into an android one doesnt seem all that complicated, but;; do i need to write my game with android in mind?? or can i just write the game and then just do this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ho8m8_CJpWM&spfreload=10 also, does uploa...
by glithch
Fri Dec 02, 2016 12:02 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [S] how to animate text so it looks like its getting typed?
Replies: 4
Views: 759

[S] how to animate text so it looks like its getting typed?

you probably know what i mean, the thing a lot of visual novels use.
i would like to start my game with '...' that gets said by the protagonist but it looks bad when it just appears there