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http://mzl.la/q82sTW Thats mine - accurate enough I guess, I just like the dinasour,

I don't have a sketchpad... my last one ran out and the shop I bought it from doesn't sell ones I like anymore, so I don't have one , when I'm at home I just draw on printer paper. But even when I have one, I don't really carry it around with me. Like I wouldn't whip it out on the bus and start draw...

On that quiz thingy I do 80 for Ravenclaw 66 for Grif & Huffle and 58 for Sytherin. That was reassuring, I thought I'd be Hufflepuff

But anyways, I'm excited for Pottermore - but just a tad worried it will run really slowly at the beggining, bexcause of lots of people playing.

Depending on your choices, you can help Chikako get together with her childhood friend or break their friendship...forever. (maybe...) This is quite compelling, if you carry it off well, it will be just fine! You don't need a massively complex and story for your first VN, after all you're just star...

If you're offering your services as a proofreader, it may be wise to proofread your own post before you post it, for example, you didn't capitalize your I's.

I'm just sayin'

I don't need an artist, sorry... but just dropping in your topic to say: don't put yourself down so much. Seriously. Your art is quite good.

Alice PH wrote:This game is so cute XD I <3 it! Work hard! I'll be rooting!

Woah, I.. I've sorta not done anything on this in over a month. I'm surprised you found this . Thank you! But if I do continue this, I might change the ... 'plot', because there really isn't any plot to this.

I visit here at least once everyday, not that I post much. I like checking out the WIP threads.

I played it. The grammer wasn't the best, but the story was sweet, and the music fit the feel of the story really well.

Your imagination
Anyways, it depends where you're setting the story, like Japanese school uniforms are for the most part different from English school uniforms. You can search google for ____ school uniforms and then base your design of on of those.

I like your art. And the story, the last sentances were ... poignant ( I can't think of a word).
... Basically, I've got nothing useful to say XD

It does look better The drawing itself is quite good, though one thing is her neck is too thin.

Maybe it's just me, but the colours look a bit... washed out? I'm not sure, it's probably just the pink background.
Erm, anyways, you could probably use more contrast in the colours you use for shading, like use slightly darker colours around the areas with shadows, like the neck.

Ah this looks cool. The character discriptions were written very well which makes me look forward to ths

I'm a little confused about how many endings there are; I know the first post says five, but uh.. One of the endings is with Haruhi, btw. So about the game, I think most of what I would say has been said, but I'd like to say I enjoyed the game and found parts quite funny. :) Ooh, and nice art! Abov...