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by DragoonHP
Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:01 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Falling Cherry Blossoms - A Work in Progress
Replies: 14
Views: 1824

Re: Falling Cherry Blossoms - A Work in Progress

The game looks promising, but as Lekhaka stated all the girls lok same with differnet hairs and eye clours. The art is good, but try to add some diversity...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jul 08, 2010 1:10 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone
Replies: 8
Views: 1661

Re: [Recruiting]Verifiers for a Story for turning into Ren'P

By 'verifier' I mean, to read through the story to find that if it can be turned into a playable Ren'Py game. Summary: To be honest, I don't myself what will happen in the story. I never know, I just let myself get lost in the writing. :? But I will give it a shot: World: A fantasy Kingdom called So...
by DragoonHP
Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:47 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red [Fairytale GxB]
Replies: 105
Views: 26986

Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red (Recruiting Programmer, Edit

Straight to point, I want to apply for the post of writer/editor for your story. If you want to check out my writing style, check my profile on FanFiction.net or better, please read my new story for checking its compatability for turning into a Ren'Py game. If you want to read my work, here's a quic...
by DragoonHP
Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:27 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Recruiting]Anyone to everyone
Replies: 8
Views: 1661

[Recruiting]Anyone to everyone

#####EDIT##### Click his link for the first draft of the story: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=7552&p=102651#p102651 Hello. If anyone care, it's not for I'm Not a Killer. It will take time because just 30,000 words have been written. So, for in the time being, I wanted...
by DragoonHP
Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:54 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Memo [1.03]
Replies: 56
Views: 68762

Re: Memo [1.03]

Ah completed the game. A really nice game. Good CG's and sprites. Got ending's like this, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2. I never played it more for the first ending: 1. The endings seemed to be repetative. There was not much variations. 2. Liz behaviour was getting over my head. The first time it was fine, but agai...
by DragoonHP
Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: thread can be deleted.
Replies: 6
Views: 2464

Re: A Kid Let Goes of Two Red Balloons [Critique Please]

The game has many grammatical and formatting errors. Most of your mistakes have been mentioned by the senior users of this forum, so I won't repeat them. The choices to me sounded reasonable and they were surely put in the right place. The ending were the part that disppointed me the most. Except th...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jun 24, 2010 2:51 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5541
Views: 2871032

Re: Guestbook

I think I should sign the h\guestbook too.

I'm actually no one to start from. Just a fanfic writer though I adore my wild imagination.
I have very basic python skills/renpy skills and I hope to learn by hit and trial method.
Currently I'm trying to write a story around a font file. All help accepted.
by DragoonHP
Thu Jun 24, 2010 1:01 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Ripples (Remix)
Replies: 79
Views: 37630

Re: Ripples (Remix)

Ripples was one of the first VN's I played and stumbling across it here, was a delight to the eyes. Though after the first release I prayed for a sequel and the garnished version has just fueled the urge to read more of Ripples. But not every wish can be fulfilled, after all. But it will be good if ...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jun 24, 2010 12:40 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: I'm not a Killer
Replies: 3
Views: 647

Re: I'm not a Killer

It could have been that. But I couldn't find a more appropraite topic. 1. Introduction: That was my first idea too. Making the lead a killer. But I quickly shoved it aside. Because I think it is way too common. Mine new idea seems common too, but hehe I have added some twist. Now my lead is going to...
by DragoonHP
Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:10 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: I'm not a Killer
Replies: 3
Views: 647

I'm not a Killer

Hello. What should I say? Maybe straight to the point of post. The subject of this thread is the name of my first Visual Novel. Wanted to make one from a long time, but ah... never got the guts, inspiration and time. On inspiration, it is the weirdest form of inspiration I have ever gotten. From a f...