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- Sat Nov 22, 2014 9:12 am
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Demo (Annyeong U.F.O) - looking for any sort of critique!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2348
Re: Demo (Annyeong U.F.O) - looking for any sort of critique
Hi ! So, about Annyeong UFO : I like the crazy direction the story takes when the ship's "body" appears. There are already some funny sentences in this demo, and the idea of the ship transfering his IA in robots (or whatever) is good. The art : I think Yohan's friends look fine, Yang looks...
- Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:05 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Secret Santa 2014
- Replies: 128
- Views: 15346
Re: Secret Santa 2014
That's true, I want to participate but I won't be able to make music. I'm learning but Christmas will be too soon. Anyway, I'll throw my name. Since my VN isn't in the WIP forum yet, I'd like anything related to Sharin no Kuni https://vndb.org/v57 OR Katawa Shoujo https://vndb.org/v945 Thank you Cav...
- Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:32 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: The Residuals [VN][High-Energy Rampage]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1286
Re: The Residuals [VN][High-Energy Rampage]
Now THIS is some advertising !!!
I love the virtual ticket, especially the price.
The story seems plenty catchy.
The delinquent detective is awesome.
Now we wait ...
I love the virtual ticket, especially the price.
The story seems plenty catchy.
The delinquent detective is awesome.
Now we wait ...
- Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:17 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
- Replies: 7876
- Views: 1072968
Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
I love this illustration, especially the hair.DarkSin wrote:
EDIT: An illustration of Kanade Inoue, a character from Violet Hill:
Coloring like that is actually so difficult !
- Thu Nov 13, 2014 6:01 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Why Am I Meeting All These Girls?!~ [BxG][Drama][Romance]
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2549
Re: Why Am I Meeting All These Girls?!~ [BxG][Drama][Romance
Good old slice-of-life, brought me most of my favorite VNs. I'm eager to see some art, even one tiny sprite :) The original idea here is this mammoth 8-options choices. I really wonder how this feature will impact the story. It will surely allow you to bring multiple perspectives to a problem, inste...
- Thu Nov 13, 2014 5:24 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Once Upon a Hallow's Eve [GxB][Romance][Fantasy]
- Replies: 24
- Views: 9924
Re: Once Upon a Hallow's Eve [GxB][Romance][Fantasy]
Hi ! So : 1) Oh yeah ! 2) Very mysterious and intriguing. A bit of romance will be welcome so don't hesitate. 3) Chun-li herself ? Or Viktor, his description is the best. 4) Isn't the name "chun-li" going to kill the mood ? (I understand the player will be able to change it, but still.) If...
- Wed Nov 12, 2014 6:54 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Dejection: An Ode [KN, one-sided GxG, historical]
- Replies: 20
- Views: 15503
Re: Dejection: An Ode [KN, one-sided GxG, historical]
I'm writing this reply with the main title music still playing, since I don't (or rather, "do not") really want to close the game's window (I'll eventually have to, though). The writing is so touching ! The subject becomes deeper by the minute, and it is very delicately handled. You also r...
- Wed Nov 12, 2014 6:56 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1449
Re: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.
I used Twine, available at http://twinery.org/. Didn't know this site, thanks for the tip. This choice diagram seems quite rich, you really don't have to worry about that in my opinion. If anything, you might have to think about how to add some scenes to expend word number. When you read your first...
- Mon Nov 10, 2014 8:37 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1449
Re: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.
About the problem of the choices. Like you said, you want every choice to matter, so why do you think one is not enough ? One very relevant choice will be plenty, especially if it has effect on the following chapters. If you want a light atmosphere, it might be interesting to add a few "useless...
- Fri Nov 07, 2014 7:59 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: LYR and The Date [GxB][Romance, Fantasy, Item Hunting]
- Replies: 7
- Views: 9229
Re: LYR and The Date [GxB][Romance, Fantasy, Item Hunting]
Very interesting ideas like the encounter between black/white and color worlds . The story is much more complex than it seems once you've collected all the infos, it really gives a reason to unlock everything !! As for the 1.1 ending : label ending2: if ball == 3: $ persistent.ending21 = True jump e...
- Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:09 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Ink's Blots (Critique always welcomed!)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3014
Re: Ink's Blots (Critique always welcomed!)
Congrats, your drawing is very lively, this character seems ready to come out of my screen ! :o You kept eyes, mouth and eyebrowns on different layers, but did you do the same with the arms ? For a game-intended sprite, it could be useful to have another arm position available (in this case it would...
- Thu Nov 06, 2014 12:36 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: mister average[KN][slice of life Lovecraftian horror][v.0]
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6707
Re: mister average[KN][slice of life Lovecraftian horror][v.
Ah ah ah, and here I was trying to reach the alternative endings. I enjoyed reading this, visuals were great, style and tone were good at setting the mood. Reminds me a little of Higanbana, but you managed to keep your own style. The opening menu was impressive (those sounds !). The only regret is f...
- Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:59 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Ideas Dump
- Replies: 1532
- Views: 218530
Re: Ideas Dump
This idea have been stuck in my head for a while. Imagine a world where humans have all gain superhuman abilities, except for a few late bloomers, and some who don't gain any special abilities are often treated like trash or even killed off. To restore balance and some sort of power control, All th...
Re: Guestbook
Hi !! My name is raistlin and I'm very pleased to join you all. I'm currently creating my first VN, learning everything from scratch (drawing, coding, music...). This forum seems to be very helpful, and I hope to be able to help too, even from my little experience ! Also, my english will be "fr...