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by raistlintg
Sat Nov 22, 2014 9:12 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Demo (Annyeong U.F.O) - looking for any sort of critique!
Replies: 5
Views: 2348

Re: Demo (Annyeong U.F.O) - looking for any sort of critique

Hi ! So, about Annyeong UFO : I like the crazy direction the story takes when the ship's "body" appears. There are already some funny sentences in this demo, and the idea of the ship transfering his IA in robots (or whatever) is good. The art : I think Yohan's friends look fine, Yang looks...
by raistlintg
Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:05 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Secret Santa 2014
Replies: 128
Views: 15346

Re: Secret Santa 2014

That's true, I want to participate but I won't be able to make music. I'm learning but Christmas will be too soon. Anyway, I'll throw my name. Since my VN isn't in the WIP forum yet, I'd like anything related to Sharin no Kuni https://vndb.org/v57 OR Katawa Shoujo https://vndb.org/v945 Thank you Cav...
by raistlintg
Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:32 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Residuals [VN][High-Energy Rampage]
Replies: 2
Views: 1286

Re: The Residuals [VN][High-Energy Rampage]

Now THIS is some advertising !!!
I love the virtual ticket, especially the price.
The story seems plenty catchy.
The delinquent detective is awesome.

Now we wait ...
by raistlintg
Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:17 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 1072968

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

DarkSin wrote:
EDIT: An illustration of Kanade Inoue, a character from Violet Hill:
I love this illustration, especially the hair.
Coloring like that is actually so difficult !
by raistlintg
Thu Nov 13, 2014 6:01 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Why Am I Meeting All These Girls?!~ [BxG][Drama][Romance]
Replies: 9
Views: 2549

Re: Why Am I Meeting All These Girls?!~ [BxG][Drama][Romance

Good old slice-of-life, brought me most of my favorite VNs. I'm eager to see some art, even one tiny sprite :) The original idea here is this mammoth 8-options choices. I really wonder how this feature will impact the story. It will surely allow you to bring multiple perspectives to a problem, inste...
by raistlintg
Thu Nov 13, 2014 5:24 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Once Upon a Hallow's Eve [GxB][Romance][Fantasy]
Replies: 24
Views: 9924

Re: Once Upon a Hallow's Eve [GxB][Romance][Fantasy]

Hi ! So : 1) Oh yeah ! 2) Very mysterious and intriguing. A bit of romance will be welcome so don't hesitate. 3) Chun-li herself ? Or Viktor, his description is the best. 4) Isn't the name "chun-li" going to kill the mood ? (I understand the player will be able to change it, but still.) If...
by raistlintg
Wed Nov 12, 2014 6:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dejection: An Ode [KN, one-sided GxG, historical]
Replies: 20
Views: 15503

Re: Dejection: An Ode [KN, one-sided GxG, historical]

I'm writing this reply with the main title music still playing, since I don't (or rather, "do not") really want to close the game's window (I'll eventually have to, though). The writing is so touching ! The subject becomes deeper by the minute, and it is very delicately handled. You also r...
by raistlintg
Wed Nov 12, 2014 6:56 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.
Replies: 8
Views: 1449

Re: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.

I used Twine, available at http://twinery.org/. Didn't know this site, thanks for the tip. This choice diagram seems quite rich, you really don't have to worry about that in my opinion. If anything, you might have to think about how to add some scenes to expend word number. When you read your first...
by raistlintg
Mon Nov 10, 2014 8:37 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.
Replies: 8
Views: 1449

Re: Pondering the first chapter of a short VN.

About the problem of the choices. Like you said, you want every choice to matter, so why do you think one is not enough ? One very relevant choice will be plenty, especially if it has effect on the following chapters. If you want a light atmosphere, it might be interesting to add a few "useless...
by raistlintg
Fri Nov 07, 2014 7:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: LYR and The Date [GxB][Romance, Fantasy, Item Hunting]
Replies: 7
Views: 9229

Re: LYR and The Date [GxB][Romance, Fantasy, Item Hunting]

Very interesting ideas like the encounter between black/white and color worlds . The story is much more complex than it seems once you've collected all the infos, it really gives a reason to unlock everything !! As for the 1.1 ending : label ending2: if ball == 3: $ persistent.ending21 = True jump e...
by raistlintg
Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:09 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Ink's Blots (Critique always welcomed!)
Replies: 11
Views: 3014

Re: Ink's Blots (Critique always welcomed!)

Congrats, your drawing is very lively, this character seems ready to come out of my screen ! :o You kept eyes, mouth and eyebrowns on different layers, but did you do the same with the arms ? For a game-intended sprite, it could be useful to have another arm position available (in this case it would...
by raistlintg
Thu Nov 06, 2014 12:36 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: mister average[KN][slice of life Lovecraftian horror][v.0]
Replies: 12
Views: 6707

Re: mister average[KN][slice of life Lovecraftian horror][v.

Ah ah ah, and here I was trying to reach the alternative endings. I enjoyed reading this, visuals were great, style and tone were good at setting the mood. Reminds me a little of Higanbana, but you managed to keep your own style. The opening menu was impressive (those sounds !). The only regret is f...
by raistlintg
Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:59 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 218530

Re: Ideas Dump

This idea have been stuck in my head for a while. Imagine a world where humans have all gain superhuman abilities, except for a few late bloomers, and some who don't gain any special abilities are often treated like trash or even killed off. To restore balance and some sort of power control, All th...
by raistlintg
Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:10 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5529
Views: 2721482

Re: Guestbook

Hi !! My name is raistlin and I'm very pleased to join you all. I'm currently creating my first VN, learning everything from scratch (drawing, coding, music...). This forum seems to be very helpful, and I hope to be able to help too, even from my little experience ! Also, my english will be "fr...