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PErsonally I only play Visual Novels in first person because when you get so attached to a character you want to be ther person interacting directly with them not someone telling you what you do. Visual novels as Wintermoon said are something inbetween novels and video games but more then just betwe...

I agree with everyone for my dislike in most first person. Being the character but having not much control unlike visual novels, however one of the few exceptions I have to this rule is Arthur Conan Doyle's Sherlock Homes. It really depends on what you are writing it for. I would probably never play...

YEah, I have a problem with the tense. Hmm, guess it is time to go cosplaying and talk like my main character. I also have a problem with using as too much. Well thanks for your help.

Does anyone have any tips for writing in first person? I can do second or third easily but my writing in first person comes out awkward.

Personally for me I start writing short stories or making new character ideas. Anything to clear the mind of the project for a little bit but not something that big so that it sucks all your attention. Then after you have cleared your head you can start on it again and it feels a bit fresher and you...

I looked at it and got slightly confused so if you could do it that would be great.

OKay I will get one started soon and then tell everyone the link or whatever it is that will connect ehm to it, unless Blue Sky has already taken up that job.

That could be useful. I have a gmail account but I am not sure how conveinant it would be for you others if you have to make one.

Really, I would be grateful to both of you if you could both help. Also two or three lazy people are better then one because then you get two amounts of lazy work instead of just one. Also grammer and spelling is no problem. As long as we get it down then the changes can be made with time. Also IxIo...

Etto, not really. As you can see I have been lazy unlike my artist here and ahve made some progress but none that has really made a dent into the emotional parts. That is why i am requesting help, to push me and also complete the script faster.I could find some of my old short stories that have the ...

Thanks for the assistance!

Being a beginner shines through here!
But what do you mean attachment? I looked for one but all I can find for picture is through that image url.
Also sorry Caes for not asking your permission, I probably should have. Gomenasai.

It probably is, though I thought it was my computer. Also, I would be fine with a beginner really. At least something to help me go plus I am being a little bit cocky and forward of myself ( and I have been talking in this polite speech with all my correspondents for no reason.). If you would like t...

Yeah, my bad, I was tired when I posted this. OKay first of all I should make it clear I am a beginer at this but please do not let this turn you off. It is a guy persues girl game, but I hope to make the characters more interesting then your stereotypical ones. Okay, first the setting, ii is a town...

Working with only two people, an artist and a writer/programmer/everything else is really tiring. I would like someone to help me with the script for my vn that would listen basically to the mai points of the story nd write those along with the parts in the middle. Of course it would be subject to m...