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by Kiki
Mon May 27, 2013 6:08 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Game Sprite Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2497

Re: Game Sprite Critique

I'd suggest working more on your anatomy. The upper halves of most of the sprites look fine (though a few look like the arms are a little short) but the bottom halves are way too short in comparison. Overall it makes the bodies look unbalanced. For your question about the lack of distinct faces in a...
by Kiki
Tue May 14, 2013 7:33 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Desperately seeking for a GUI artist & coder
Replies: 38
Views: 6741

Re: Writers/Proofreaders/Voice actors NEEDED! (Unpaid sorry)

It's not odd at all for someone's personality to change after such a traumatic event. I could easily see the logic in someone losing the will to talk after losing their child. The wording "too concerned" doesn't make much sense, I'd suggest saying she had become depressed or something of t...
by Kiki
Tue May 14, 2013 12:15 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Yandere in 100 Words (creepy romantic short stories)
Replies: 36
Views: 18418

Re: Yandere in 100 Words (creepy romantic short stories)

I really liked this. I've always enjoyed the 100 word format and seeing it applied to something so creepy was rather nice.
by Kiki
Tue May 14, 2013 11:42 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Legality of using character
Replies: 13
Views: 2129

Re: Legality of using character

A lot of people will use assets from anime/manga/games/comics ect, but just because they do it and get away with it doesn't make it legal .I don't know much about doujin soft, but I'd be willing to bet that it's less about the creators accepting the games and more that it probably isn't something of...
by Kiki
Mon May 13, 2013 12:19 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Clarity - MH VN/KN
Replies: 8
Views: 1864

Re: Clarity - MH VN/KN

Glad to hear it. Can't wait to see this come out.
by Kiki
Sat May 11, 2013 7:23 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Desperately seeking for a GUI artist & coder
Replies: 38
Views: 6741

Re: Writers/Proofreaders/Voice actors NEEDED! (Unpaid sorry)

Could we have a little more information about the jobs? For the writers, what is the length of the story (aka how much writing is there to be done) and how many writers are you looking for? For the voice actors, how many characters will there be over all (since you say you haven't added all of them)...
by Kiki
Thu May 09, 2013 2:22 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Summer Lovin' [Romance][GxB]
Replies: 9
Views: 1658

Re: Summer Lovin' [Romance],[GxB]

The main screen looks very cheerful, from the information posted it looks like it will fit well with the tone of the game. Nice job.
by Kiki
Thu May 09, 2013 2:18 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5538
Views: 2835744

Re: Guestbook

Hello, I'm Kiki! I live in the southern United States and I have an interest in VNs (obviously), writing and editing. I'm currently trying to better my drawing skills for future works. I have a website at http://violetfishstudios.weebly.com/, but it's still under construction. This forum looks very ...
by Kiki
Thu May 09, 2013 2:12 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Clarity - MH VN/KN
Replies: 8
Views: 1864

Re: Clarity - MH VN/KN PROOFREADER NEEDED

If you still need a proofreader, I don't mind helping out. Overall this looks like it will be a neat, short game.
by Kiki
Sat May 04, 2013 12:06 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How do you feel about death of a supporting character?
Replies: 16
Views: 1833

Re: How do you feel about death of a supporting character?

I'll echo what everyone else says; yes. Games, shows, movies, books, ect... other canons do it all the time. The trick is to not only give the character good development beforehand and to make the death important, but to make the death have meaning in context of the story. If someone dies it should ...
by Kiki
Thu May 02, 2013 3:34 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: "Fire Emblem: Awakening" and Partial Voice Acting
Replies: 37
Views: 6465

Re: "Fire Emblem: Awakening" and Voice Acting

Partial voice acting makes for a really nice touch, and like enta said it's not really that rare of a thing. I have the first and third of the Rune Factory games and they have partial voice acting, usually just characters giving timed greetings (good morning, good evening, ect) or welcoming and than...
by Kiki
Sun Apr 21, 2013 9:05 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: I've got an idea for a game, need to know if its been done
Replies: 6
Views: 1144

Re: I've got an idea for a game, need to know if its been do

There's no such thing as a new idea, but that doesn't mean that your story isn't worth telling. Your spin on the story will be different from other takes on the tale, and that's what you should focus on. Even if a story's plot has been done before, you can still make a great game by putting work int...