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If it were to involve an alley pursuit then the rapist would be little more than a monster indeed. Ambiguous situations that escalate beyond control are certainly more nuanced, and such a situation is what I aim to set up. My Story proposal is found at http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?...

I apologize for making it seem as if I dismiss metaphorical dangers. I prefer bluntness of dangers; if characters face death or some other great menace, they say as much, and do not avoid it with circumlocations. If one character believe that another character's morality is twisted (and many have di...

Ah, I see. There is a fine line between coyness and metaphor in that type of story.

Implied with metaphors? What does that mean in this context?

Gods and men, but many thanks for this advice! I am often worried that my stories are not good for other people, given my philosophical inclinations. Yes, he shall be punished in his present life and in future lifes (Black Line Hell, wherein he will be sawn to pieces by razor sharp saws and pecked a...

I have mentioned in my writings on this website that my project “What is Life When the Golden is Gone” is a very dark story or series of stories. I have realized that having one character be nearly raped (not by Far Mind the Protagonist)is going to be a key (and suitably horrific) plot point in one ...

Cool! Nice use of foreshortening. How is the script going?

Any idea when the next script will be ready for editing?

And I'm done! I shall email the script.

Well, I hope to be done editing the script by this evening! It is great.

Heads up! After 2 hours of editing, another 12 pages have been edited

Many thanks for the help! I am glad to learn that my cipher idea is not too alienating!

And I, aggregates aligning, will be able to resume editing act 1 in 2 days, after my major test!

I would love to edit the pdf., and have PMed with questions.

And now, for act Titles! Who can guess what they are quotations (or paraphrases of quotations) from? Hippodamia Route Act Titles: ACT 1: Those Are Not At All to Be Tolerated Who Deny the Being of God 2: Yet Faced With the Darkness of the World, She Does Not Shudder 3: All Children Are Atheists; They...