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Gossamer wrote:

pocoscon wrote:I was just wondering, do you mean you'll sketch out the looks of the characters and only that?

Sorry, what exactly do you mean by that?

Oh, sorry. I noticed you said you didn't have a tablet, so I was wondering if you were just sketching the characters out for those you worked for =).

I was just wondering, do you mean you'll sketch out the looks of the characters and only that?

Thank you everyone for the answering my questions and giving me some ideas. I'm going to keep going even if people might drop out. So thanks again to everyone who has given advice on keeping a team together. I'm sure all of this advice will help others as well

Hi Posocon This is a cut & paste from your future visual/kinetic novel, yes? If it is, then I suggest you switch to the artist side and scan in some sketchy placeholder images before working any further on the text. That's because the images do some of the storytelling, so you can end up puttin...

Here are a few suggestions and comments: “So sad,” the voice said mockingly. “You've lost absolutely everything” “No thanks to you!” Sonia reached for her side and pulled out her blade. She had no fear now or any sign of happiness. All she felt was hatred for the one who dared mock her. “I'll kill ...

Here are some edits that I think would work better, grammatically. It's not the whole thing, but hopefully it will help. Her arms were heavy as she held tightly onto the one dead in front of her. Sonia's eyes shook as tears fell down her swollen cheeks. Tears dripped from Sonia's cheeks, her arms h...

The prologue to a game I wanna do. Please give me feedback. Her arms were heavy as she held tightly onto the one dead in front of her. Sonia's eyes shook as tears fell down her swollen cheeks. Once again, she had failed to protect the one she cared so much for. “Please,” she begged as her voice crac...

Hey and welcome to Lemmesoft. She looks really beautiful by the way =). But just one thing, please tell us your prices or if you're willing to do it for free.

This looks like it'll be very good. Any estimate on the finished game's length? Loving the simplicity of the colouring, it goes very well with the art style. Sometimes less is more. Especially if done right. And I'd also like to have an inkling of what the protagonist looks like :o Overall I find i...

Premise- interesting, although could use more info- how will preventing the tragedy also cause her to learn things she shouldn't know?(Yeah I know you wrote it more like a hook then a outline, but still!) Art- good, clean- would like a picture of Chris what with her being the main character and all...

Noire wrote:Looks interesting, I really like the drawing style

Thank you . Took me a bit to customize them, and might have to redo Kelda, but I do like how she looks.

As someone who's been through this. SHORT GAMES FIRST This is most important. Get the team used to publishing, that means make it quality, but know when to cut. Weekend game jams are good for this. Let everyone express their creativity. They must feel ownership of the project. Have a useful skill. ...

I'd like to know how people keep teams going. With a certain artist for my game Lethal Love, I haven't gotten anything from them. I don't want to be a tight ass and get on their case, but nothing has been worked on. So what should I do? Give both of us deadlines? Find someone new? But even if I do g...

This seems like a climax but without the images or sound accompanying it, it's hard to imagine that this is climactic on text alone. If you want to spice it up though then you have to make the transformation seem even rawer and horrific. The basis for the Were-animal after all is based around the i...

Like anon said, I think a lack of context makes this excerpt sort of difficult to read on its own; it's clear that in the full version there's a lot of character development and worldbuilding that's already happened (the relationship between Yasu and Kieth, the shapeshifting, what actually happened...