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by Heiden
Sun Aug 02, 2015 1:06 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cavaliers & Carnivals [KN][fantasy/adventure]
Replies: 79
Views: 31736

Re: Cavaliers & Carnivals [KN][fantasy/adventure, friendship

Gosh, I'm just LOVING the body lines you have in the merchant's sprite~ <3
by Heiden
Sun Aug 02, 2015 12:33 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Thief's Tale [GxB][Fantasy][Adventure][Romance] Demo-7/27
Replies: 26
Views: 6418

Re: A Thief's Tale [GxB][Fantasy][Adventure][Romance] Demo-7

I just finished the demo! I enjoyed it! I could tell a lot of thought has been put into the story, the writing was just dripping with foreshadowing, I loved it~ I'm looking forward to seeing what Frost is like, he seems really cute XD. AND I KNEW IT, something was fishy with Prince Kieran! Are you p...
by Heiden
Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:51 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 6598

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

This whole talk about life threads and what Calikohs represent even got me thinking a bit... about what my Calikoh would look like. I guess it'd be boringly clean, maybe a little bit frayed at most. I don't know if I like that. I should probably find my own Ife and go on an adventure too! (。>ω<)。 [...
by Heiden
Wed Jul 22, 2015 10:22 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Courting the Seasons [Romance- GxB,GxG][Fantasy]
Replies: 86
Views: 27219

Re: Courting the Seasons [Romance- GxB,GxG][Fantasy]

Wow! I really like the plot synopsis here, I can't wait to see what happens. And how my decisions will impact my Mother Nature's rule. I wanna try being a totalitarian ruler, haha :'D Someone else mentioned it, but I also really like your interpretations of the seasons, it's very unique. I'm interes...
by Heiden
Wed Jul 22, 2015 9:57 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Thief's Tale [GxB][Fantasy][Adventure][Romance] Demo-7/27
Replies: 26
Views: 6418

Re: A Thief's Tale [GxB][Fantasy][Adventure][Romance]

1. Does the story interest you? Would you want to play this game? Yes and yes!! I love adventure stories, so I'm excited to see what will happen to Dina on her journey~ 2. What do you think of the characters so far? I love knight characters so of course I'm excited to see what Tobias is like~ And Pr...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 9:58 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Propinquity (Drama)
Replies: 13
Views: 3076

Re: Propinquity (Drama)

YOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Congrats in making a WIP thread!!! You already know that I think your story and characters looks GR8T (omg Caren u qt) and wow! Congrats on having such a long script already!! As for newbie advice: AVOID FEATURE CREEP LIKE THE PLAGUE Determine at the very beginning what you want ...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 9:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 6598

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

@Heiden- Well, one out of two isn't bad, I suppose: The story still stops at the same spot, using Safari. But I was able to continue through to the end on Firefox. Apparently there is still a minor peculiarity in the code somewhere. Anyway, the story was very enjoyable, and very professionally done...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:25 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 6598

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

Turns out one of the sfx files didn't want to load on macs (and IE), oddly enough. I've taken it out and update the KN, so it should (*crosses fingers*) work now! :)
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 11:42 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 6598

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

Uh oh, that's not good. Also I just tested it out with Internet Explorer and got a "Posting.failed [object Object]" message preventing me from advancing (this message seemingly happened at random), so for right now it looks like Chrome might be the only browser that can run this. :/ Thank ...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 10:41 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Meryl & August [Adventure, slight GxB] New Demo!
Replies: 34
Views: 13482

Re: Meryl & August [Adventure, slight GxB] New Demo!

Oh gosh, comments! - But first! - (Late) Monthly Update! I took a 2/3 week hiatus from working on M&A to make a short little KN ( http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=33193 ) because I was feeling a little burnt out, but I'm back now! My progress is at.... 19%! :) @ neuropsy...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 10:07 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 6598

The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]

http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/j387/Totenschlagen/titlef2.png A teacher and his bodyguard on a journey across the desert sands, what sort of fate awaits them? - Characters - http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/j387/Totenschlagen/person2_1.png - Ife A veteran bodyguard, used to moving cargo acr...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:45 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Our War Everlasting [BXB][Romance][Action]
Replies: 9
Views: 6877

Re: Our War Everlasting [BXB][Romance][Action]

I thought this was a very sad, yet sweet little game. I was glad to see that Seth and Taimi were able to find happiness together, even though it seemed that the world around them treated them harshly, even after the war had ended. I also really liked the use of color, with the blacks, reds and white...
by Heiden
Sat Jun 13, 2015 10:00 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: On Getting Feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 762

Re: On Getting Feedback

You may want to check this thread on soliciting feedback: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=30157 Note, asking for what you want specifically can make it more likely that you get feedback. Saying, "play my game and tell me what you think" is so broad that it might ...
by Heiden
Sat Jun 13, 2015 7:33 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: On Getting Feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 762

Re: On Getting Feedback

If you post your (or screenshots) on Deviantart, you can also submit your game to Groups that focus on visual novels, Ren'Py games, and anything your VN is related to. Asking for feedback on the VN's comments section may help to encourage people. Also, you can try approaching visual novel/indie gam...
by Heiden
Sat Jun 13, 2015 5:39 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: On Getting Feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 762

On Getting Feedback

Hello, sorry if this has been asked before! I've been working on my second VN and have gotten out two demos and am enjoying working on the project, but I'm having problems getting any sort of feedback. I had the same problem with my first VN and am slowly realizing that I must be doing something wro...