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Thank you so much for answering ! The uniforms : They are training uniforms used as field uniforms because of the rapidly increasing number of soldiers. There are also lots of quickly and poorly made new uniforms, for the same reason. Your questions about breast pocket, collar and distinction betwee...

Hi !
This used to be the old WIP, the new one is on a new post in this topic.

1. Did the concept and synopsis intrigue you to play the game? Yes !! The MC is especially interesting. 2. Do you like the art style? It's not my favorite style but it's very well-done so you can't not like it :wink: 3. Would you play this game on mobile platform? No, I don't like that. Very curious...

Beautiful artwork.
I like Sheila and Light the most.
The synopsis makes me want to see more.
Good luck !

Don't forget to state at the beginning of your game that the ideas of the protagonists are not yours. I don't think your game can be offensive since it's argument vs counter-argument. The only risk is if you show obvious sympathy for one character or one idea above the others. Or if one character us...

Personally, I think what you show in your presentation is more important and I don't care about the logo.
BUT I've seen several people in the WIP forum reacting positively to a logo, so you should see it as an additional asset for your game.

Caveat Lector wrote:Um...I'm female.

I used "his" without even thinking.
Now I remember you can use "their" when you don't know, but I'm not so familial with english so...

Sorry sorry, no offense meant...

Just wanted to say, stating what your skills are and what you can do upfront is a great idea, and anyone who has not done so already, I'd strongly encourage you to do so! I disagree, it shouldn't be like recruiting to do requests here, there should be more space for creativity and surprize, so it's...

There are also choices only made to add an extra difficulty, because the player is confronted to a lot of combinations and doesn't really know where the important choices are.
I find this trick rather annoying and unfair.

Thank you for this great game ! I can tell you that playing this in the dark with a headset isn't very reassuring ! And the music at the beginning makes quite an impression. The game is good at making you progressively despair about the possibility of saving Zoey. But in the ending where the two sis...

Yay, another realistic military VN ! But we don't cover the same period so we won't step on each other foot. 1) Is it too ambitious ? --> depends on the number of words and sprites Apparently you want to draw 3 uniforms for some characters (fancy, field, service) : be careful, begin with one uniform...

A cinematic thinker has to know how much information he releases per line and per button click Oh, that was what you meant. Absolutely right, the first interaction player-CPU in a VN is the button click (we do it all the time !), the choices are secondary (kinetic novels don't even have them). So y...

Ahahah, my mistake. So it's a house and they're simply the tenant. So when the grandma says "earn your own pay", she just means "find a job so your can pay your part of the rent". So, concerning the ideas you're searching : the boys ask MC to work for them -> they secretely make ...

Hi there Fate is a NVL, that's why the text box is huge. I am like you, I prefer ADV, but NVL allows more literary expression (while ADV is close to theatre). It's a VN genre that has its fans, that's all. I don't agree with your passion for cinematic editing. Sure, it's great to emphasize a scene, ...

Hello Everything looks beautiful. I like the GUY, it really makes you feel in a cozy patisserie. There's something I don't understand : is the Seduisant a cafe, a patisserie, a kind of brothel, or simply a house in which the MC will have to do various jobs ? The characters are cakes, like in Splendi...