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by StellarOrb
Wed Apr 16, 2014 3:35 am
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Recruiting ideabouncer(s) and writer(s)
Replies: 82
Views: 19330

Re: Recruiting ideabouncer(s) and writer(s)

Hi, I just got your PM. I'd be happy to attach my name onto your project! All I really need is more information about these things: Specific locations List of Characters Backstory Also, it would be nice to know the project deadlines. I don't require anything in return, but it would be nice if you co...
by StellarOrb
Tue Apr 15, 2014 5:56 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 3
Views: 791

[Closed]

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by StellarOrb
Tue Apr 15, 2014 5:48 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Biospectre [Suspense,thriller] [Currently seeking artists.]
Replies: 10
Views: 2062

Re: Biospectre [Suspense,thriller] [Currently seeking artist

He,hee! I'll be working on the writing from here! 8)
Expect a revised script coming soon! :D

Back to the top of the forum, this goes!
by StellarOrb
Mon Apr 14, 2014 10:25 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing a murder case?
Replies: 8
Views: 1410

Re: Writing a murder case?

A bigger question would be why is it the protagonist's job to uncover the mystery in the first place? Why is it his responsibility? What makes him qualified to investigate, as opposed to a police detective? You need to MAKE him involved by putting his life- or the life of someone he cares about- in ...
by StellarOrb
Mon Apr 14, 2014 8:21 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Exogenesis - Perils of Rebirth [post-apoc] Kickstarter, Early Access!
Replies: 157
Views: 33802

Re: Exogenesis - Perils of Rebirth [post-apoc] DEMO RELEASED

Nearly everything about this VN seems to be developing beautifully. The only problem I really have is the writing. I feel that a lot of the dialogue and narration is too clichéd and contrived at times. It doesn't feel relaxed or human enough- it never elevates itself beyond a script. This is especia...
by StellarOrb
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:12 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 11
Views: 2500

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by StellarOrb
Fri Apr 11, 2014 2:57 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 11
Views: 2500

[CLOSED]

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by StellarOrb
Thu Apr 10, 2014 10:16 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 3
Views: 791

[CLOSED]

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by StellarOrb
Thu Apr 10, 2014 1:44 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 1
Views: 697

[CLOSED]

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by StellarOrb
Wed Apr 09, 2014 4:18 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [CLOSED]
Replies: 11
Views: 2500

[CLOSED]

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by StellarOrb
Mon Apr 07, 2014 1:06 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5538
Views: 2831591

Re: Guestbook

Hiya! My name is Jaime Rhoda, from Brooklyn, NY. I'm an aspiring game designer and film maker (I'm double majoring in programming and film production). Since visual novels are a fairly easy starting point, I decided to join this forum! You can follow me on Twitter @StellarGames , or just keep tabs o...