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I'd choose B, because I hate jerks with an exception for glorious ones. But usually these guys are plain assholes, calling Heroines names and pushing them away. I'm not gonna work my arse off just to see their so called "soft" side and heart of gold, and I'm not gonna pursue anyone who's ...

My way of writing is, write anything you want in a note pad or Ms word. Focus on the things you want to write. but the hard part with this style is sewing the ideas together so its more of a trial and error. (you will discover the things you need only after finishing the scripts) If your interested,...

Hello and Good day. I think I have a weird way of writing. Im the type who write every thing that I want and draw what I want. As of now Im having trouble patching the ideas together (I felt like Im making a puzzle than a VN) Shockingly Ive finished writing about the endings and yet still stuck at c...

Im also a newbie and encounter the same problem as you as I made a VN. This is what I use at my game, I hope this one help. #First declare image image MC = "Sprites/MC.png" label start: show MC # if you want to put the char on the middle show MC at Position(xpos=0.15) with dissolve # posit...

There is no evidence that only you would appreciate your dark game. There is evidence that your friend wouldn't like it, but there could be an entire audience that appreciates your dark game. On the other hand, I find things that are made purely to please others, that don't have the unique voice of...

Ok I will ^-^ Again, ♥ thank you very much ♥ I dont mind changing some parts since my target is to make a game that everyone will enjoy. If I plan to do a game where only I could like and appreciate, (without considering the players) Then, I should'nt even try to release a game. (Since a game is som...

Heres the thing, If you introduce tons of chars in a short period of time (they will become forgettable) but if you limit it and make them interesting ( its easier for readers to remember) But If you can connect the number of chars in the story like Durarara and can make a tons of sprite then you ca...

But if you take all the advice people gave you in your thread to make your bullies "likable," then your bullies stop being villains and start being antiheroes who are redeemable. They become "bad boys" who can be fixed rather than evil dudes. The loss of your original concept is...

Hi Kailoto I guess Im one of those who made an evil character recently (the bullies XD) The 4 bullies in my story generally describes 4 common types of bullies The reason I made such characters is not because im sadist or vice versa but because its interesting, challenging and fun to write. every ti...

Here are 9 things to make your character more likable: Hope this helps! OMG! :shock: So guide number 1-3 and number 5 is what I lack I dont know how can I thank you enough I will definitely use this guide. Since I felt that the ones in my script is not enough (it has number 4 up to 9 except number ...

First of all, many thanks for the wonderful replies Reason why im having doubts is that im making a romance vn (w/ the 4 guys) And I think that in romance vn " male char should be like-able and represent the guy of your dreams" ( but in this game , they aren't) Originally, I wrote this as ...

So, I agree with a lot of the above, but I also think the approach differs depending on what you want to do. 1. Do you want this to be a game about bullies, highlighting how horrible they are, have all these bad ends where the MC is abused, and either *no* good ends, or a good end where she escapes...

I have a couple of questions: 1. What is the MC like. Is she the classic meek girl or is she capable of giving back as good as she is going to get? (Not that it makes the LI's action okay, but the abuse would be less one sided and might move the story from an abusive relantionship to a destructive ...

First of all, Good day. Im currently making a VN about bullies and Im almost done with the script (im done with 7 badends) so I ask a friend to give her opinion about the story and the characters. As per my friend, She said that the bachelors in my story are horrible and although the MC is likable s...

Sometimes I pick the mc gender base on the looks. But I agree that playing your own gender is more natural.

@Kailoto
your profile pic remind me of Persona3 (I like your profile).
Argh I suddenly miss Akihiko. (I better play it again, After im done with Artonelico )