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Your art is adorable =3 The abstract backgrounds worked well and I found the music very fitting.

I was disappointed that the story was basically the G-rated version of re:connect, rather than something more original. But it still gave me all kinds of warm fuzzies.

I remember playing the beta version a while ago (sorry I never left any comments) and I really liked your art style. Congrats on releasing the finished version! Will have to check it out again later.

There are a lot of grammar errors and awkward phrasings, particularly mixing up tenses and using strange word order. I didn't take specific notes, but I can do a closer read-through of your script and give you some suggestions, if you like. Also, the filter you used on your backgrounds doesn't look ...

I liked the premise, but the plot felt very rushed. It seems like it would have worked better as a longer story, where it took Sam a while to figure out that Daniel was manipulating her. Her discovery felt abrupt and somewhat contrived. I mean, why would Daniel keep evidence like that around? He'd o...

Oh wow. I have a weakness for bizarre dating sims, and this was hilarious. I lost it at "sunpai."

Just the title made me LOL. Haven't gotten all the endings yet, but so far I am loving your (comedic antihero?) protagonist. (And loving how your cast includes characters of varying skin colors and body types.) Very entertaining.

The font is cool, but the text is definitely hard to read with all that outlining. It probably would have worked fine as just plain white text. Also I wish people would stop doing the whole "backgrounds from Google images, too lazy to credit lol!" thing. There's really no excuse for it, es...

I haven't finished playing through all the endings yet, but I just wanted to say that I love your choices of background music. The visuals are kind of plain, but the music really sustains the dream atmosphere.

The download works fine for me (Mac, too). Are you having problems downloading other files?

silverpikachu99 wrote:New links please?

Download links are available at the renai.us page.

Well, this took ages, but I've finally fixed the file size problem; it's a much more manageable ~25 MB download now.

New download links here (I'll fix them in the OP as well).

Huh, I must have downloaded this a while ago. Just found it on my computer and got a little creeped out because I couldn't remember where it came from. Glad I stumbled across it. I agree with sake-bento that you should have used NVL mode so you could make use of the whole screen. But even so, I like...

Thanks so much for your feedback! I left the narrator's gender purposely unstated, but I'd be interested in whether readers pictured the narrator as a specific gender or not. I also felt that the narrator's loneliness turned into depression a little too suddenly. He/she was hard to relate to. It did...

http://www.weebly.com/uploads/1/6/4/6/16461988/6985151_orig.png Not really a story; just the brief reflections of a depressed narrator, set to an eclectic mix of music and numerous photographs of playing cards. Made in a flash of inspiration over the course of two days, and about halfway through be...

Thanks for sharing this UI!

I only needed a text box for my KN, so I played around with the color of yours and wound up with this.
Free for anyone to use under the same terms as above (CC BY-NC 3.0).